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 Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:26 pm
Let me tell you one.
It's about a boy and a girl, eleven years old, and twins, elven children who live deep in the forests of a hidden country...and when everything starts to change all at once, they realize how deep their country's history really goes, and how much no one seems to know but them...and when they find that their country is but a shadow of another country in another world, and that they are crucial to its survival, they begin to realize the true nature of good and evil, and exactly what it means to be caught in the middle.
Just a teaser. If you think it sounds interesting, by all means, let me know--it's being severely edited right now. But I'd be happy to ramble on a little more wink
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:27 pm
Uh.
Space breaks are a great thing, but I wouldn't mind hearing more.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:30 pm
oo.. Elven twins.. do they have names?
Curiosity has struck.. please deliver more.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:36 pm
Tak-Jak oo.. Elven twins.. do they have names?
Curiosity has struck.. please deliver more. Yup. The girl is Kamile (accent on the e, no one can pronounce it properly o.O) and the boy is Everan. They've been together their entire lives--they've naturally assumed that they're twins. And wouldn't you, if you were best friends with someone who looked exactly like you, was exactly your age, and understood you more than anyone ever could? And in truth, the children of Kocha, the elven capital, are delusioned and misinformed from the beginning, though of no fault of their own. After all, no one but the legendary chosen ever knew the whole story...and the deities themselves... (heh heh, I like doing this. mrgreen )
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 12:00 pm
Well my story is just as much as a tease..
But it goes on its own.
Because once you start reading..
Questions start forming
And I Dont answer them!!
Mwahahaha.
ninja
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:58 pm
aww, that sucks.
I'm such a n00b at writing. >.< My mian characters (with names) hardly ever die, though in the whole series some 8 million nameless and faceless people die. Armies, j00 know. eek And my first two are light and happy, and the third is unbelieveably dark...it doesn't match, and yet the people are the same...
And not to mention that I suck. sad
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 4:41 pm
You dont suck!
Never ever say that!
Or I shall chop off your hands
and force you to eat noodles with chop sticks!
Writing takes practice.
I have been writing since I was 11
and I am just a year older then you.
With time you learn things.
Give it some time.
3nodding
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 7:01 pm
Tak-Jak You dont suck!
Never ever say that!
Or I shall chop off your hands
and force you to eat noodles with chop sticks!
Writing takes practice.
I have been writing since I was 11
and I am just a year older then you.
With time you learn things.
Give it some time.
3nodding Okay. mrgreen My books are still weird, though...happy, happier, unbelieveably sad, depressing, transitioned, odd, and just plain creepy...I'm strange.
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 7:24 pm
Not weird. Just.. Well versed.
Its good to have varity.
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 8:12 pm
Well, yes...
I sometimes read my old version of my book, pre-editing (brutal, life-changing editing) and wonder why I was so happy...and then I read parts of my other books and wonder what made me so sad...
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 8:48 pm
And thats how we grow as writers.
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:33 am
Ah...good point.
Lately, it seems like I've been more on the sad side...
it must be because sadness creates intensity, while happiness, though good for the characters, makes a very boring book indeed. Conflict creates stories. And complication defines them.
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