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shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:35 pm


So she like danced until the end of time? Liek whoa. <3

I hereby christen this thread "Frederick Jorge Van Lederhosen". =D

(If I'm not supposed to post, I'll delete it surprised )
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:46 pm


8D POssiibllly~

..LEDERHOSEN! <3

Oh, and if anyone knows of a possible idea for the Note, I'll be glad to hear it ;] *cant think of anything*

Subobo

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Airaka

PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:54 pm


*steals the lederhosen*
Mmm... Subo-sama, I would help Note wise... But I don't have a clue, either. ^-^;; Maybe if you post the whole past story we can help?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:58 pm


...that would probably be smart xD;; *types away*

Subobo

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shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:45 pm


"Thirteen bells wasn't enough for you".

*popped into head at thought of belled anklets o_0*

Or, uhm...

"Dance the time back".

>____> I should just stop at thread-christening, I think. XD;
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 2:55 pm


xD;; *makes a note of them* Two more than I have! <33
Thankeee~

Subobo

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Kaioto_Katsuma

PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 5:44 pm


"Let's doo the timmeewaarrrppp agaaiiinnnnnnn~"

...dance? Time warp? AH HA. *Loozur*  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 5:50 pm


It's a jump to the left, and a step to the riii~iight, with your hands on your hips, you bring your knees in tiiiighhht!
BUT IT'S THE PELVIC THRUST THAT DRIVES YOU INSAANNNNEE, LETS DO THE TIMEWARP AGAIIINNNNN~!

...*booogaaaay*

Subobo

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anemosagkelos

PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:42 pm


A possible note idea, "It crumbled around you."

"Not even time could stop you."

I really like the idea of your passenger.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:29 pm


=DD Thanks for the suggestions! <33 *will porbably end up using the tried and true way of dice rolling if I haven't decided in awhile* 8D;;

Subobo

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Flamefire123

PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:53 am


"I lived, loved and lost"

That's my suggestion, otherwise I like "not even time could stop you".

I don't have anymore real suggestions, I really enjoy the idea, very unquic with lots of possblites.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 3:46 pm


"The music became your heartbeat."

I dunno why, but that came to mind. xd '

EDIT: ......AHAHAHA, I'm braindead. You actually wrote that in your story, didn't you? xd That's what I get for reading at two in the morning. xd Never mind.

Lady Vincira


Kaioto_Katsuma

PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:51 pm


Anywhoo, comment time! O: I think this is a great concept! I absolutely love the idea of going into a trance and waking to something so radically different, and especially love how you never really explain what happened - it leaves an air of supense and mystery around your concept that I positively love!

I also like the idea of having her only be able to speak Hindi when she first gets off Naviet - it'll be interesting to see the communication challenge between her and Sethur.

All in all, I think you've got something really good in the works here, even if I may have to eet ur face if you win. :< I'd be jealous and you'd be tastee. <3  
PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 1:53 pm


xD Interesting meaning completly hilarious, right? With lots of (not so) restrained laughter from Rithe?

Though, since I dont have the time to learn how to read Hindi right now (like..no phonetic dictionaries out there) I'll probably throw in a large mix of dialects and such xD;

=3 Thanks for the suggestions Vin and Flame! I'll add them on the front page...eventually xD;; <33

Vin: xD Pah, I read it, and was like 'HOmigah, good idea! Why didn't I think of that?"

Subobo

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Subobo

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 2:09 pm


xD Got the prompt thingamajig done~
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