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metocloud
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 2:51 pm


My Rescuer

There was a time when I thought I was all right
Didn't know the difference between day and night
So naive to think that everything
Would end up the way I wanted it to be

Well I was hurt and I felt pain
And I finally knew the meaning of shame
Couldn't recognize your true love
To busy building walls that towered above

Tried being too strong for you to get through
Wasn't ready to give up and believe the truth
My heart was broken, my soul was weak
But all the others saw was what all seek

Then you came along and saw the real me
All bent and broken, all scratched and dinged
And it scared me that you knew so much
But there was no dissention in your touch

For the first time in my memory
I felt something that was pure and free
No judgement, no tearing down
You only offered me a crown

Looking into your loving eyes
I understood what made the sky
It wasn't anything that could be explained
It was a man worth everything

Oh God you helped me out of the dark
Showed me it was okay to come near the spark
I had so much to fear but not by your side
When I'm with you there is only pride

Whoever thought such a change could come about
That it'd be so easy to sing and shout
Think about you and the words, they flow
Come on, let's put on a show

Hold my hand as we walk along
So many traps and temptations strong
Unbelievable I can make it through
I know the only reason is you...I know the only reason is you...  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:32 pm


Excellently done. Keep up the good work.

[.L.O.S.E.R.]


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 5:00 pm


Wow, that is really good. Yet another bit proving that I can't write songs crying
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 7:01 pm


Haven923
Wow, that is really good. Yet another bit proving that I can't write songs crying
Hehehe...that's what I used to think to. Then I figured out that the best songs come when you aren't trying to write them.

metocloud
Vice Captain


MaxstertheBard

PostPosted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 2:46 pm


Perfect. We are week, but he is strong.
And that's true. It's hard to try and write a good song and get a good song. You have to let the song come as you think.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 1:48 pm


metocloud
My Rescuer

There was a time when I thought I was all right
Didn't know the difference between day and night
So naive to think that everything
Would end up the way I wanted it to be

Well I was hurt and I felt pain
And I finally knew the meaning of shame
Couldn't recognize your true love
To busy building walls that towered above

Tried being too strong for you to get through
Wasn't ready to give up and believe the truth
My heart was broken, my soul was weak
But all the others saw was what all seek

Then you came along and saw the real me
All bent and broken, all scratched and dinged
And it scared me that you knew so much
But there was no dissention in your touch

For the first time in my memory
I felt something that was pure and free
No judgement, no tearing down
You only offered me a crown

Looking into your loving eyes
I understood what made the sky
It wasn't anything that could be explained
It was a man worth everything

Oh God you helped me out of the dark
Showed me it was okay to come near the spark
I had so much to fear but not by your side
When I'm with you there is only pride

Whoever thought such a change could come about
That it'd be so easy to sing and shout
Think about you and the words, they flow
Come on, let's put on a show

Hold my hand as we walk along
So many traps and temptations strong
Unbelievable I can make it through
I know the only reason is you...I know the only reason is you...


-sniffle- beautiful

cherrilie__x
Vice Captain


metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 1:56 pm


Es-kun
-sniffle- beautiful


I'm glad you liked it. It really meant a lot to me when I wrote it.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:38 am


It's very deep,... thank you for such a brilliantly wonderful poem.. It is very touching.. such a blessing..(' heart ')

Annire


metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:00 pm


Thanks for enjoying it.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 4:58 pm


Wow Amber, this was an old one o.o I forgot you even wrote it

cherrilie__x
Vice Captain


metocloud
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:23 am


It's not that old...*checks date*...okay, so maybe it is. But I still remember writing it.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 12:45 pm


well If I wrote it I would have remembered it too

cherrilie__x
Vice Captain

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