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 Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 8:33 am
For those who would like to continue reading go to the Rock Lee Guild in the LAFF subforum or check my user LongLiveTheDragons at Quizilla for the chapters up to 5 and 6 is coming out soon! whee
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 10:17 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:49 am
im intrested. fan fic is great
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:55 am
Yeah.. Since this guild doesn't have much activity and it'll probably take FOREVER to get 5 posts, I'll just go with 2 posts then I'll post the next chapter sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:00 am
Here ish a spoiler to help you understand the story a bit more. Enjoy mrgreen
Better get this started, I've got alot to write... *sigh* But first to explain the title of the stories. It's not that I'm starting the series over. It's that the main character is being forced to start her entire life over. Kinda like moving =^^=
The Weapons
1. Dragon Blade (your blade): made from Blackfire's fangs ("fangs" as in both of them) It's a good 4 feet in length, pure black with a pair of small dragon wings (the same coloration as Blackfire's) at the hilt. The two fangs represent flesh and bone. Adding the blood of the fangs' origin causes the blade to transform into it's true form, a blade so strong it is feared by Heaven and Hell alike. Since you and Blackfire have the same blood, you can use hers or yours but you mostly use yours. The only reason this transformation happens is because, when the blood is added to the sword, flesh blood and bone are fused making a living body; a living sword. I haven't figured out a name for it yet but if you have any suggestions message me ^^'v
2.Bow and Arrows: the bow is made of rowan wood (the same kind used to make traditional wands ^^ *you: ... smartass...*) and it's wielder must be able to pull back at least 150 pounds. As for the arrows, every one in your quiver are just copies of the original black-tipped one in your hair which was forged from one of Blackfire's claws. That way, you can use as many arrows as you wand and never run out! The white-tipped arrow is a result of your first attempt to duplicate your original. You accidentally pronounced the incantation wrong and *PooF* the tip was white ^^ The only thing those arrows are good for is a unique attack you use. You nock the arrows at the same time in different directions and release them. They'll start bouncing off things until about 15 seconds later they'll meet in the middle of the area they were bouncing around. When the tips touch, a huge amount of friction is created, generating a small explosion that's just powerful enough to make any enemy go flying into the nearest solid object. And HARD!=><= There's another attack you like to use that involves Blackfire. She grows to her true size and lays on the ground encircling the enemy(s). You shoot about 10 to 15 arrows then jump up into the highest surface available. Blackfire ricochets the arrows off her scales so the enemy is caught in a whirlwind of arrows.
3. Hirikotsu: about 6 feet in length and was forged with one of Blackfire's scales in it. Nothin' special about it except that it's at least 1,500 pounds and when you have it concealed on your back it's weight is reduced to only 15 pounds ^^ The weight reduction thing is more useful then you'd think
Blackfire: mother was a common dragon, father was one of Satan's incarnations (yes, ONE of them - -' He has a few more that take different forms but they aren't mentioned in the story. Only in my head... ~.^) First thing's first, you must know something about all dragons before we go on. All dragons, no matter what type have the same skeletal structure, every dragon has an elemetal weakness, and a dragon will not live past 1 million year of age; it's ingrained into their genetic makeup that if they aren't killed by disease or another living being their bodies will automatically shut down once it hits the 1 million mark. Now on to Blackfire's case. Since she has the blood of Satan and normal common dragon blood flowing through her veins, the tainted blood reverses the weakness of the normal blood. Meaning, common dragons are weak agains metal dragons or metal objects. The tainted blood makes it so that Blackfire is weak against ice, what metal dragons are weak against. Understand? Hope I'm not confusing you that badly ^^' Another thing, when she transferred the second half of her heart to you, that stopped her from dying a mortal death. Now the only way she can be killed is from three shots of anything cold and water-based (ice, cold water, freezing rain, snow, an ice cube, etc.)
As for her past, her father killed her mother when her found out that Blackfire wasn't full-blooded demon (well DUH!! XD He's not too smart when it comes to some things -.-' And the fact that she can't bear hatchlings doesn't help the matter) and that there was only one born, not an entire clutch. (ya see, the only reason why he mated was to have something to kill once they'd grown up and provided a challenge. Yep, Hell's just that sadistic. Surprise, surprise, right?...) So now Blackfire's dad is waiting until he thinks she'll be a threat to him (he thinks she wants to take his place in Hell. *cough* NO WAY IN LIMBO! *cough*) and she wants to get revenge for her mother. And that wraps up Blackfire for ya! =^^=v
You: *sigh* Where do I begin... For starters, I'll explain your powers. You obtained them from the wolf goddess you're reincarnated after. They, along with the black and purple fire that surrounds you when you get really freakin' pissed, are inherited traits all wolves of that race have.
Since you have the chemical makeup of a dragon your body responds to your environment like a dragon and like a dragon, when your adrenaline spikes, your eyes will turn pitch black with small slitted pupils. Down side: you can only see in a nauseating shade of blood red and everything's thickly outlined in black, giving you a major migraine afterwards. That is why you've only used it once and that was to protect your friends. You also cannot be treated with modern medicines. The potency of the chemicals in your body cancel them out. Therefore, the only solution is to use herbal medicines (so you're very experienced when it comes to herbal remedies) and dragon remedies. Different parts of a dragon can be used to heal different types of ailments. For example: powdered dragon scale cures all physical wounds, powdered dragon fang cures mental afflictions, powdered dragon horn heals the emotionally scared, etc.
The Wolf Goddess: she was/is the ruler of Limbo; she/you judge the sould of the dead. In my head, Limbo is kinda like The Gate from FMA.
The goddess had a nice life living up in the coldest regions of our world with her mate and pack. One night, the pack was attacked by Bloodfang and his rebels. They had gotten fed up with their goddess and decided to get rid of her. The goddess woke from her sleep that fateful night in time to see her mate protecting the pups' den. He signaled her to help in the heat of the fight. Once she'd gotten there, she'd turned around in time to see Bloodfang plunge his fangs straight through her mate's chest. Time stopped for her. She was so shocked over this, over the death of her one and only love, that she snapped. An enormous rage overtook her. All other wolves from her pack were long since dead by now so she unleashed a gigantic force upon those who betrayed her. Once the bloodstained snow had settled she slowly trudged to her lover's side, laid next to him, rested her head on his once beautifully white, now red chest and died from her broken heart.
Bloodfang: the jealous brother of the goddess's mate. He believed his brother to be inferior, being the runt of the litter and him the alpha. When the goddess chose his brother over him, he was outraged and began plotting their demise. After he ws killed, sent to the Fate's council for judgement instread of Limbo (there's no one there to judge him anyway) sentenced with the killing of his own goddess then sent to Satan himself to finish his sentencing, Satan made him his right-hand man... err, wolf. He now works directly for Blackfire's father. Now, if he dies, he will only be resurrected except stronger. The problem: he's afraid to die (again). Therefore, in a fight he'll tempt you to beat on him to the point of near death, get scared, then disappear to who-knows-where to recover. The exception in this story is that he is in league with Orochimaru (oh, crap - .-' We're screwed...)
The Main Plot: You've made a deal with Heaven that you'll take the role of Dragon Master (which you already are anyways) and find the 5 dragon eggs (gold, silver, red, black, and white) that will help you to maintain the balance of power between Heaven and Hell (and simaltaneously kill Bloodfang... Oh, the irony >P) and if you do get these eggs and hatch them, Heaven won't condemn Blackfire's sould to an eternity of suffering. There are a few things that could happen to her if you don't complete the task:
1. Her soul would be given to her father and then Limbo only knows the torture he'd put her through.
2.Her soul is given to Avalon (pretty much like giving her over to her father) or
3.Her body and soul are sealed in the egg she was born from forever. The catch: body and soul may reside in the same space but they would never intermingle. Therfore, this is much, MUCH worse than death. So the entire story is kind of a "you must save the world" genre. Yes, I know it's overly cliched, but I still love it =^.^=
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:01 pm
Well,I felt like posting.Everyone you all must read this fanfic and comment!It ish a great one at that!Even though I've only read up to Chapter 4.But still it ish a unique fanfic!^^Read it please,it will make AlchemicDragon13 happy!
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 4:09 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 5:25 pm
Good chapters so far, most people only write humor like all humor about lee...
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 7:34 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:33 pm
hmmmmm...part of that guild as well....have to check it out 3nodding
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