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 Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:38 pm
I'll cut my wrist open and with the blood shall paint a picture on my bare,white wall.In the picture shall be two people,two lovers,holding eachother close.One will be dressed like a princess,a long beautiful gown and lovely crown.Her hair will be long and flowing,and eyes staring admiringly at her knight in shining armor.The second person is a valiant knight.He'll have a jewel embedded sword at his side.Behing him stands his valiant steed.The picture shall be lovely,although it will only consist of one color.When I finish I will initial in the corner and look.When I decide it's perfect I will lay in my bed for an eternal sleep.I should have been that princess,and you the knight...
Yeah,its kinda sad,but it was easy to write...Um,if you have any suggestions they will be greatly appreciated...And please dont sugar coat things,give me the truth...
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Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 10:56 am
I liked it...and I have been there, felt those feelings...What i didn't get is if she's drawing on the wall in her blood, there would only be one color, the color of blood red, but otherwise I liked it...
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 7:34 pm
badazzgrlo I liked it...and I have been there, felt those feelings...What i didn't get is if she's drawing on the wall in her blood, there would only be one color, the color of blood red, but otherwise I liked it... I figured 2 colors,the blood red and the white wall...If it sounds better with one though I'll change it.
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