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CherryBlossom896

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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 12:36 pm

The Truth

By: sakuara333

I look around for him
as i use my third eye
what have i done?
why did i lie?

Your green human eyes
fulled up with tears
when i told you no
which was your biggest fear

i'm sorry about the pain
about the untold words
i'm sorry i didn't express
how much you were worth

i frantically search
high and low
hoping you'd forgive me
and let yourself show

my red eyes water
as orbs form
they fall to the floor
showing how bad i was torn

i miss your touch
your green or golden eyes
i miss your silver fur
and how you stood by my side

i sit in a tree
to rest from my search
on a branch alone
is where i perch

my stones, they fall
and roll down my knee
how could i have hurt you
my love, my sakuara333.

Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 4:11 pm

You aren't saying that you wrote this, are you?

Because I've seen it before, and it's obviously about Kurama and Hiei.

I like the poem, though.

Kurayami Kasai

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CherryBlossom896

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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 6:13 pm

yeah i will change that eh if i can figuer it out lol thanks

Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:33 pm

redface redface your eyes r sad u may be bad but u will find true loves first kiss in the your lovely lips redface redface heart heart

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Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:30 pm

its ronamatic, its a shame its reffered to kurama.

But I like it so sweet!

I like making poems about his lonelyness but not refer it to a person rather than just plain sadness ya know like that song the OAV song

Mystery-Always alone. that I put up in the Eizou Hakusho thread.

Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 10:29 am

x____b e l i n d uhh*//:

I think I've seen one like this..
I think it was on a YYH forum. That forum's dead now though. crying

♥~ You thought I was a whore, but I proved you wrong...
I was a normal person, just like how I promised you, since the day I sang that song.

Midori Hamano

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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 6:10 pm

sakuara333

The Truth

By: sakuara333

I look around for him
as i use my third eye
what have i done?
why did i lie?

Your green human eyes
fulled up with tears
when i told you no
which was your biggest fear

i'm sorry about the pain
about the untold words
i'm sorry i didn't express
how much you were worth

i frantically search
high and low
hoping you'd forgive me
and let yourself show

my red eyes water
as orbs form
they fall to the floor
showing how bad i was torn

i miss your touch
your green or golden eyes
i miss your silver fur
and how you stood by my side

i sit in a tree
to rest from my search
on a branch alone
is where i perch

my stones, they fall
and roll down my knee
how could i have hurt you
my love, my Kurama-kun . . . .
edited by Emma!

Emma:
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I love it!!!!
Only with kurama!
Me: crying I love hiei

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