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Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 9:57 pm


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So what do you guys think? I love critiques. :3
PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:45 am


These pictures remind me uncannily of the sort I would draw all the time years ago... especially the second one. They're charming, and you seem to have a good grasp of color and anatomy.

If you want pointers, I can suggest making the anthros' muzzles a little thicker-- as is they're rather pointed at the nose and don't have quite enough volume. When you draw legs, make them a bit longer than you are now... they're a bit small in proportion to the body. ^^

Fun character design, by the way, with Kitsumi. The first pic is from a cool perspective.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 7:14 am



First picture: I love the.. stalagmites? Stalactites?.. in particular, just because of their lovely, glowing designs, and that bat is cute as a button with it's little membraney wings and furry body. And, the bat actually looks like it's flying. Kudos for that.

Second picture: Their tails make me want to jump into the picture and give them a running-hug. xd
I'm going to agree with Kittiara that they're legs are too short. They're perfectly proportional, just not when put with the size of the rest of the body.
I really like how you drew them in a scene. It's like you took a snapshot of them.

Picture three: The little 'two style comparison' you have in the upper corner is great.
Something about her boobs are bugging me, but for the life of me I can't figure out what. sweatdrop
You really thought the character out well. <3

These are just nifty. : D
PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 3:33 pm


Kittiara
These pictures remind me uncannily of the sort I would draw all the time years ago... especially the second one. They're charming, and you seem to have a good grasp of color and anatomy.

If you want pointers, I can suggest making the anthros' muzzles a little thicker-- as is they're rather pointed at the nose and don't have quite enough volume. When you draw legs, make them a bit longer than you are now... they're a bit small in proportion to the body. ^^

Fun character design, by the way, with Kitsumi. The first pic is from a cool perspective.


Yes, i've already had people tell me about the legs, and i agree full-heartedly. That's something i've been struggling with, for in the sketch they look fine but as soon as i line-art it it sticks out like a sore thumb. D:

What i dont think i quite understand is what you mean by making their muzzles thicker. They're foxes, so i dont want them to be too box-like, like a wolf.

Thank you for the comment! :3 <3

Kit ~ Invader of Dreams


Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 3:34 pm


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First picture: I love the.. stalagmites? Stalactites?.. in particular, just because of their lovely, glowing designs, and that bat is cute as a button with it's little membraney wings and furry body. And, the bat actually looks like it's flying. Kudos for that.

Second picture: Their tails make me want to jump into the picture and give them a running-hug. xd
I'm going to agree with Kittiara that they're legs are too short. They're perfectly proportional, just not when put with the size of the rest of the body.
I really like how you drew them in a scene. It's like you took a snapshot of them.

Picture three: The little 'two style comparison' you have in the upper corner is great.
Something about her boobs are bugging me, but for the life of me I can't figure out what. sweatdrop
You really thought the character out well. <3

These are just nifty. : D


Too bad you couldnt pinpoint why the boobs bothered you, because they bother me too and i cant figure out why/how to fix it. ^^;

Thank you for the nice comment! It's much appreciated.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:02 pm


Lemme clarify the muzzle comment, if I can... I don't want to leave you hanging. ^^ I think that rather than what I said before, what was throwing me off was how low on the face the muzzle is, and the sharp angle at which the face goes into it. However, that might be a stylistic thing, as you aren't necessarily trying to make her look exactly true to a real fox (like the little head sketches X3).

I think, looking at Kitsumi's demon form, the muzzle seems quite narrow, almost like a chihuahua's rather than a fox. That must have been what prompted my comment.

God, I talk too much. Anyway, Kitsumi's hair and design beckoned to me, so I sketched this. XD;

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Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:07 pm


Kittiara
Lemme clarify the muzzle comment, if I can... I don't want to leave you hanging. ^^ I think that rather than what I said before, what was throwing me off was how low on the face the muzzle is, and the sharp angle at which the face goes into it. However, that might be a stylistic thing, as you aren't necessarily trying to make her look exactly true to a real fox (like the little head sketches X3).

I think, looking at Kitsumi's demon form, the muzzle seems quite narrow, almost like a chihuahua's rather than a fox. That must have been what prompted my comment.

God, I talk too much. Anyway, Kitsumi's hair and design beckoned to me, so I sketched this. XD;

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Ooh, okay i understand now. The reason why kit's muzzle in demon form is shorter and skinner is because i was trying to simulate what way her head was facing. You cant see her eyes, so her muzzle has to be shorter and almost behind he head, ya kno-- ...OMG *faints and snatches the picture* omgiloveyousomuch. I love how you drew heeeeer!! and her expression is just like Kit!! <3<3<3<3<3!!!!! *clingstight* T________T!!! ~<3
PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:18 pm


Aw, yay. I'm glad. ^__^ You're welcome. :3~ <3

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Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:20 pm


Kittiara
Aw, yay. I'm glad. ^__^ You're welcome. :3~ <3

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:22 pm


I like the batty thing...

The others remind me of Furcadia.. x.x

Furcadia brings back awful, horrible, bad, terrible memories..

Besides that... I like them.. I just think computer stuff doesn't have enough detail.

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Kit ~ Invader of Dreams

PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 6:26 pm


Chase Keyhole
I like the batty thing...

The others remind me of Furcadia.. x.x

Furcadia brings back awful, horrible, bad, terrible memories..

Besides that... I like them.. I just think computer stuff doesn't have enough detail.


heh. I dont do furcadia, soo... and digitally drawn things can be very detailed. I'm just lazy and havent popped out of my shell yet. I'm getting there... ;_;

...thanks for the comment!
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