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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 8:01 pm


I took some pictures of two new pictures I drew last night. I don't like taking pictures but since I plan to CG them when I get home I thought that would give me enough time to get some critique on them. sweatdrop

Picture one
Picture two
PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:12 pm


On the first one, it would look cooler if you put some folds on the skirt.
The second one, her left hand looks oddly mis-shapen.
But nice job with it.
I just noticed it's the same girl xDD

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:21 pm


Thank you! I'm not sure where I would add the folds though. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:29 pm


This help any?
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:34 pm


Yes, a little. But do pencil skirts have folds? sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:26 am


Well, one leg is forward and one leg is back, right?
It'd be like the folds you put in a tight shirt across the boobs,
only over her thighs. ^^

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:57 pm


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Well, one leg is forward and one leg is back, right?
It'd be like the folds you put in a tight shirt across the boobs,
only over her thighs. ^^
Thank you! I never even thought about putting one there. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 8:26 pm


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They're both really cute. I like the poses you used.
Maybe it's just me, but they seem a little too skinny. That may just be the style your going for, though. sweatdrop

I love the way you draw faces and hair, though. It's very nice. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:28 pm


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They're both really cute. I like the poses you used.
Maybe it's just me, but they seem a little too skinny. That may just be the style your going for, though. sweatdrop

I love the way you draw faces and hair, though. It's very nice. 3nodding

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I can never seem to draw chubby or fat people, so my characters always tend to be the same size. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:43 pm


Very good, very good. Nice poses, lovely hair, pretty good proportions...

The only thing that bothers me is the hand in the second.

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