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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 8:01 pm
I took some pictures of two new pictures I drew last night. I don't like taking pictures but since I plan to CG them when I get home I thought that would give me enough time to get some critique on them. sweatdrop
Picture one Picture two
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:12 pm
On the first one, it would look cooler if you put some folds on the skirt. The second one, her left hand looks oddly mis-shapen. But nice job with it. I just noticed it's the same girl xDD
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:21 pm
Thank you! I'm not sure where I would add the folds though. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:29 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 9:34 pm
Yes, a little. But do pencil skirts have folds? sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:26 am
Well, one leg is forward and one leg is back, right? It'd be like the folds you put in a tight shirt across the boobs, only over her thighs. ^^
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:57 pm
Sign-up Free Well, one leg is forward and one leg is back, right? It'd be like the folds you put in a tight shirt across the boobs, only over her thighs. ^^ Thank you! I never even thought about putting one there. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 8:26 pm
{***} They're both really cute. I like the poses you used. Maybe it's just me, but they seem a little too skinny. That may just be the style your going for, though. sweatdrop
I love the way you draw faces and hair, though. It's very nice. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:28 pm
darknessandcheese {***} They're both really cute. I like the poses you used. Maybe it's just me, but they seem a little too skinny. That may just be the style your going for, though. sweatdrop
I love the way you draw faces and hair, though. It's very nice. 3nodding
{***} I can never seem to draw chubby or fat people, so my characters always tend to be the same size. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:43 pm
Very good, very good. Nice poses, lovely hair, pretty good proportions...
The only thing that bothers me is the hand in the second.
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