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Shiro-Nami

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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 5:22 pm

Here is a picture I am working on of genis from tales of symphonia!!!!

I could really use critiques and Draw overs!

Thanks you guys!

BTW I am the same person as Vernhal... just so you all know!

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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:05 pm

All that I can see is that you could add some folds on the pant-line.
Awesome job.
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:10 pm

Oh.
Ohmy.
I read that as 'Terms of Service Genie'
xd

His right (our left) shoe looks too round at the ball-part, and oddly flat as a result, and I think that at least part of his left eye would be showing beneath the hair. Also, his left (our right) sleeve looks detached from the rest of the jacket, as though it was pasted on.

This is horribly cute. biggrin
I'm loving the color-scheme, and the hair, and the oh-so adorable eyes and little-boy body and outfit and..
I'll stop now.
xD
<333

Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:19 pm

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Oh.
Ohmy.
I read that as 'Terms of Service Genie'
xd

His right (our left) shoe looks too round at the ball-part, and oddly flat as a result, and I think that at least part of his left eye would be showing beneath the hair. Also, his left (our right) sleeve looks detached from the rest of the jacket, as though it was pasted on.

This is horribly cute. biggrin
I'm loving the color-scheme, and the hair, and the oh-so adorable eyes and little-boy body and outfit and..
I'll stop now.
xD
<333

Thanks Im glad you like it!!! But i cant take credit for the design cuz of course hes a character from TOS (tales of symphonia)

ANYWAY I think your right... Ill make those changes before shading!

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