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 Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 5:51 pm
Hey! Here's some of my latest pieces for you to see...I need critique and love. I'm 15, so I'm still working on my artistic abilities. Help is much appreciated here~
It's Squall! ^_^ This one I started to color, but my friend and I began an art trade, so I was like, why don't you just finish coloring my pic for me, ya? So here it be...
It's my friend's avi as a chibi person. Everyone thinks this one's wierd because they aren't sure she's chibi or not... confused Is there something wrong with the way she's built or..? Help? xp
This is my character, Cirion De Layette Nobrosa (value your sanity O_o...long name) He's blind, but because he's a spirit being, his pupils remain fiercely sharp. He's supposed to appear frightening, but by nature he's gentle, mysterious, and silent. Uncolored crap-sketch
tried different style...does it look different? eek
My prize work! Took me hours to complete the coloring because I had never colored with a computer program before until this sketch. It's Cirion's mother. This is what Cirion SHOULD look like (more masculine though eek ) I'm happy with her immensely! 3nodding
So hope you all like? Need comments, critiques and suggestions by the truckloads! Thanks you guys~
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:00 pm
First of all let's get this out of the way, I am jealous of your mad skills.
*Ahem*
:]
I love leon and the position he's in but is this just me or does he have ony four fingers on his left hand? .___.
But overall I love that picture. It's sexy >w<
Basically what I think on the chibi pictures is that they're not used to chibis looking as realistic as yours. I can clearly see that it's a chibi becasue when you compare it to your normal work, you can see it's waay less realistic and smaller built etc.
Your character seems really cool in your description and the picture isn't crap xD
The picture with the different style does look like a different style in the lips and ears and slightly in the eyes. But the face looks kinda similer to the other pictures.
The last one is amazingly done. I notice one thing about it though, on her left (our right) eye, the eyelashes look too dark. Is that because of the lighting effect you were trying to show?
Overall, awesome work maaannnngggg :]
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:09 pm
Ahh, too cool. : D
Picture o1- Pretty Half-naked Man.
Male anatomy is something that I've really never taken the time to study ( sweatdrop pretty bad of me) so I can't really do a lot on the critique side, but I'll do my best with what I can recognize. Starting from the top and going down...
I love his muscles. They're just.. pretty, I suppose. heart
Ah, his right n****e seems a bit oddly placed. Compared to it's brother-n****e, it's a bit low and too far towards the center of his chest.
Lastly, his knuckles are sort of oddly lumpy in places, kind of like the scales on a stegasaur. ^^ Which just made me giggle a bit at the mental imagery.
But I love the picture. The pose is nice, the hair style is lovely, and the idea of a 'finish coloring my picture' is great.
Picture o2- Chibi Girl.
She looks chibi, she just doesn't look like the traditional chibi. I think people just expect stubbier limbs and a bigger head. She looks adorable. :]
Picture o3- Cirion
Something about the way his hand is splayed seems a bit off. The pointer finger, the bumps on the side are more pronounced than they need to be.
I love his tattoo, and his eyes do come across as very fierce. xd
Picture o4- Cirion- The Next Generation
You can definitely tell you changed styles. His face is softer than in the first picture. ^^ I think you need a bit of short hair underneath where his ear is. The ear itself is a little wonky. The two ridges should stay separate until they meet in the earlobe.
I love the look in his eyes. Very intense. <3
Picture o5- Cirion's Mother
Ahh this one's gorgeous. : D
I love the blue tones and I love the flowers and I love all the decorations, both facial and otherwise. <333
I'd say her hair could use an odd few more defining lines, but that's probably just my screen bleaching colors again. xd
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:09 pm
Homgawd. You're 15 and you draw that well? When I was 15 I drew like a neeeeewb! gonk I am totaly jealous.
Anyway, for chibi's they should have a rounder face and bigger eyes. They also tend to be more... Chubby. You can adjust it more to your own style. But that's why people think of it as a non-chibi picture.
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:20 pm
yes finally.
you are my competition from now on.
ninja
btw great job on the faces.
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:26 pm
Thanks guys! whee This all means alot to me and helps immensely! Like I said before, I'm a younger artist and am still trying to find alot of wiggle room to improve, so everything you comment on helps gobs! ^_^ I thank you all very much! 3nodding
Ooooooh...competition I hear, eh? mmmm twisted eheheh....
lol! Always up to a good challenge if anyone wants to test me or something...like..."hey you...draw this or be pwned" something like that, ya? lol! Anyways, I love drawing pics for people and usually never request or ask for pay. I draw for the love of drawing, not for money or gold. That's why art will always be a side hobby for me 3nodding Anyways, enough babbles. Thanks all! mrgreen
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:29 pm
Sign-up Free Ahh, too cool. : D
Picture o1- Pretty Half-naked Man.
Male anatomy is something that I've really never taken the time to study ( sweatdrop pretty bad of me) so I can't really do a lot on the critique side, but I'll do my best with what I can recognize. Starting from the top and going down...
I love his muscles. They're just.. pretty, I suppose. heart
Ah, his right n****e seems a bit oddly placed. Compared to it's brother-n****e, it's a bit low and too far towards the center of his chest.
Lastly, his knuckles are sort of oddly lumpy in places, kind of like the scales on a stegasaur. ^^ Which just made me giggle a bit at the mental imagery.
But I love the picture. The pose is nice, the hair style is lovely, and the idea of a 'finish coloring my picture' is great.
Picture o2- Chibi Girl.
She looks chibi, she just doesn't look like the traditional chibi. I think people just expect stubbier limbs and a bigger head. She looks adorable. :]
Picture o3- Cirion
Something about the way his hand is splayed seems a bit off. The pointer finger, the bumps on the side are more pronounced than they need to be.
I love his tattoo, and his eyes do come across as very fierce. xd
Picture o4- Cirion- The Next Generation
You can definitely tell you changed styles. His face is softer than in the first picture. ^^ I think you need a bit of short hair underneath where his ear is. The ear itself is a little wonky. The two ridges should stay separate until they meet in the earlobe.
I love the look in his eyes. Very intense. <3
Picture o5- Cirion's Mother
Ahh this one's gorgeous. : D
I love the blue tones and I love the flowers and I love all the decorations, both facial and otherwise. <333
I'd say her hair could use an odd few more defining lines, but that's probably just my screen bleaching colors again. xd
Eheheh, yeah I've never been good at hands, ya? sweatdrop But I'm getting better! Faces are my strong point. Thanks! All of this helps me much! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:42 pm
Gackt-dono Thanks guys! whee This all means alot to me and helps immensely! Like I said before, I'm a younger artist and am still trying to find alot of wiggle room to improve, so everything you comment on helps gobs! ^_^ I thank you all very much! 3nodding Ooooooh...competition I hear, eh? mmmm twisted eheheh.... lol! Always up to a good challenge if anyone wants to test me or something...like..."hey you...draw this or be pwned" something like that, ya? lol! Anyways, I love drawing pics for people and usually never request or ask for pay. I draw for the love of drawing, not for money or gold. That's why art will always be a side hobby for me 3nodding Anyways, enough babbles. Thanks all! mrgreen If that's sooo... ninja You wouldn't mind if I whored art off you, would you? XD
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 3:15 pm
Hmmmmm, depends on what kinda request you were referring to ninja lol! I love art trades if you're up to the challenge? 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 1:39 pm
I love them all.. epsecially the one of squall! Im only fifteen to! go Ffifteen year old artists!
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:14 pm
I have no time to critique & help out with anything that might be odd in your drawings right now.
But when I get back I will.
I just needed to post & say that what I've glanced at so far is excellent. I really like your sketchy style. Wether you mean it to be or not (:
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 2:20 pm
Love the one at the end. You can tell it took some time.
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 12:29 pm
#1: He's a sexy beast. God, I'm not gonna be able to critique this at all. You're 15!? O__O I'm going on 17 and you pwn me!
#2: I think it's because the head and torso are more normal-esque, whereas the limbs are just little and skinny. It's a chibi, yes, but it's just a different type of it.
#3: I want to rape your Cirion.
#4: ....-faints-
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