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Momo Shimizu

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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 8:43 pm

Well...I'm new. ^_^ Here is my latest drawing and I know there is a LOT wrong with it. So please tell me what to fix??? She's not done yet...so the missing arms and such shall be fixed!

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Please help! *Meep*

Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 8:53 pm

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Momo Shimizu

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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 6:08 am

She's supposed to have her head tilting down, which may explain why her eye is low. I just have to continue with shading and stuff to actually make it look like it.

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 12:09 pm

Oh, if her head is tilting down, then there should be more of a curve to it. (The shape of her eyes, nose and even her mouth.) But her ears still need to be lined up with her eyes even though her head is tilting down.

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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 1:28 pm

The shoulders are a bit broad, but I do that ALOT too. Your shading is magnificent and I really like her expression. Something about the ears just bothers me... they look kinda like they are connected to the hair, some how. If that didn't make sence just ignore the comment. xd I have a tendency to not make sence.

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 5:36 pm

yeah, I love the shadowing and agree with everyone else on shoulders/ eye to face placement. If she's looking down, the eyes need to curve...? Don't know how to explain it...but someone intelligent should be around shortly, ya? sweatdrop lol.
ANyways, love the hair, corsette, and the shadowing on her body. Lovely start! You're definately on your way whee
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