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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 7:27 pm
"Nidoking! I choose you!" Giovonni shouted, spittle flying out of his mouth due to the fact that he was angryier then he had ever been. "Meowth I choose You!" James yelled back. For the first fime he stood up to his boss. Meowth the usually very lazy pokemon sprang from his spot in the corrner to stand in the shadow of the mighty Nidoking. (What am I doing). He thought as he stared down his opponent.
"Nidoking!, Use Dynamic Puch!" Giovonni's slave instantly obeyed and started to move, But James had been training in secret for years and the time had come to stop his former employer once and for all. He had gone to far when he had killed Jessie. This battle was going to be diffrent.
"Meowth! Use Agility!" James shouted quickly. Meowth would have been scared out of his wits right now had it not been for the bravery eminating from his brave confident freind James. Meowth sped up just in time to narrowly avoid the crippling punch. Giovonni's temples throbbed in his head. "Nidoking show this weakling whos boss! Hit him this time with Dynamic punch!" "Its coming straight at me!" Meowth screamed as he tried to dodge the fatal blow. "Meowth use endure!" Meowth focused his inner strength. He thought about all the good times he had had with his freinds. "Crack!" Meowth was hit full force with the powerfull attack. Meowth flew backwards and landed with a thud! But slowly got back up, blood dripping from a scar on his side. "What will you do now James? your pathtic freak show is nearly dead, and my pokemon have already defeated your others! Let alone My nidoking still has all his helth left! Theres no way a weakling pokemon such as yours has a powerfull enough attack to defeat nidoking anyway!" Giovonni wipped the sweat from his forhead and smiled evily at James.
James laughed out loud. "I'm going to beat you!" Giovonni's smile was whipped from his face. And with that meowth smiled. They knew what they had to do. "Meowth Lock on!" Meowth focused on the target. Givonni growwled. "Nidoking use Horn drill!" Meowth doged the clumsy attack. "And now!" James yelled with all his might. "Your reign comes to an end!" Giovonni looked like he was about to puke. "Meowth use your Hyper Beam Attack!" Meowth stood his ground as the huge beam shot from his mouth. "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!" Giovonni screamed as his pokemon fell to the ground with a clank! Giovonni fell to his knees. Suddenly Meowth started to glow. "Whats happening to me?" Meowths body glowed with a white light. Then a weird noise. Persian walked out of the light And james walked up beside it. They walked passed the defeated giovonni, out of the shadowy building, and into the light of a bright new life. Meowth didn't need to talk anymore, he had finally found someone who understood him
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 1:55 am
Its very good just one thing..what Happend to jessie?
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 2:35 pm
Nice idea, just a few things that bug me. Quote: Let alone My nidoking still has half his helth left Yeah, someone wouldn't really say that. Otherwise, decent. Isn't meowth like, level 13? He's fought max 5 times through the anime. A few months of training wouldn't equal up to years from giovani. But otherwise good.
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Posted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 7:33 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 11:28 pm
Yeah thats another thing but it was good. Other then the fact meowth evoled, he would never evole. XX
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:48 pm
TheBlackCoyote Yeah thats another thing but it was good. Other then the fact meowth evoled, he would never evole. XX true she right you know meowth can't use any other attacks except scratch cause it learned to talk
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 3:31 pm
setokenshin TheBlackCoyote Yeah thats another thing but it was good. Other then the fact meowth evoled, he would never evole. XX true she right you know meowth can't use any other attacks except scratch cause it learned to talk Yes thats a good point. Besides Meowth hates persions anyways
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Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2006 9:09 am
I thought it was okay. Not cannon at all to the real story line...but hey! That's why it's called 'FANFICTION' right?
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 4:23 pm
PEOPLE! James trains meowth and becomes closer than ever to him! Yea it dosn't happen in the series, but hey, it could happen. (oh and they probably wouldn't have trained so hard, had Giovonni not killed jessie. I mean what do you think would happen if giovonni killed Jessie? scream
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 6:34 pm
I thought it was really nice, the only thing is, what happenned to Jessie? I wanna know!
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