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 Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 3:19 am
Imprisoned
Slender beams of illumination enter
this darkened prison as I kneel,
always despairing, always silent,
frozen here,
waiting.
Tortured forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
penetrating my exposed flesh.
Blood on a child's face.
I raise my head, now defying
this uncaring reality
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:48 pm
I like it and it sounds very dark.
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 10:53 pm
heart heart heart ^^ I like it too. It sounds awesome and I love the way you worded it.
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 7:12 am
That's deep, good choice of words too... mrgreen
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