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dietJESUS

PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:33 pm


Just now, I'm very visuall and those draw over things are like teh shiz <3
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now my art!
PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:35 pm


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Somthing just seems off with her, I don't know what.

dietJESUS


dietJESUS

PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:39 pm


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overall I like this one more than I thought I would
PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:42 pm


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The body needs work, thats all right? sweatdrop

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dietJESUS

PostPosted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:46 pm


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He's way out of porportion. I'm not even done yet... xd
PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:22 am


I think you could use a little bit of improvement in the anatomy department, here and there. =) You could look for photo references in magazines, or in the internet or buy books on stuff like that.

As for your second picture, I like his serene expression and the effect the shadow has. Here are just some things I'd like to point out, if you don't mind~ =)

-He looks like he's about to topple over because his body isn't very aligned.
-There are some anatomy projects which I'll leave to the more knowledgeable ones. =)
-His hands aren't really goint to fit in the pockets. Try looking at some jeans magazine ads. It'll help you with the look of the pants, and maybe even work as good anatomy reference. =D

I'd love to see some more. I actually like the "Please tell me you'll stay..." one.

Chemicality


dietJESUS

PostPosted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:33 am


Thanks!

Yea anatomy is the number one thing I seem to have problems with.

Acctually I was looking at the guy and was thinking (of course after I had posted it) "Wow, he looks like he's about to fall over...damn." xd

When I have $$ or a job rolleyes I'm gonna buy a whole bunch of how to draw books xp
PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:17 pm


Other than the heads being too big for the bodies, the anantomy looks pretty good to me.

I try to avoid that by drawing the whole outline of the person before adding any detail to the head, it's just a circle.

Fenburt


godoftherain

PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:23 pm


The biggest problem I'm seeing is that you're having trouble understanding the body as a volumetric form.

It isn't just lines on a page. It's a flesh creature, with muscles and bones that influence the way things are formed.

I'd say skip the books, and take some classes with a model instead.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:06 pm


Cool thanks guys! *gives a dorky thumbs up*

The most C&C I've ever gotton before

I win

dietJESUS


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 10:00 am


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On the first one you posted, the arm that is bent behind.... the line of the back should extend over the arm. Right now you have the line of the arm extending over the back.... If that didn't make sence I'll show you next time I see you. xd The arm on the right is a little off. And the feet look slightly weird. I can't draw them any better, honestly, I'm just saying.

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I'm editing this one because I think it has the most potential to be sick nasty! xp
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:17 pm


Aww why thanks.

I love that pose it's just bothering the shiz out of me at the moment.

That helps...Not that I'll edit it, I'm way to lazy...XP

dietJESUS


[-Nazzara-]

PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:18 pm


dietJESUS
Aww why thanks.

I love that pose it's just bothering the shiz out of me at the moment.

That helps...Not that I'll edit it, I'm way to lazy...XP
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Figured as much. Just for future refrence, old chap.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 7:38 pm


Why thanks old chum

dietJESUS

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