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 Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:11 am
The World That Never Was
Oh thy sheth
undo the malice of this world.
Erase it's qualms,
undo it's sins.
Purge into it
with thy hammer.
Let it's thunder roar
across it's land.
Eiminate it's hatred
and it's darkness.
Let it bathe in a sea of light,
and let it wash away it's troubles.
If this world rejects the light,
let it rest in it's moon.
Let the sun go away,
and let it purify it's world.
And then forget it,
cleanse it from your mind.
And let it become,
The World That Never Was.
So what do you guys think of it?
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:27 pm
Ohh...I like it! Calling it "The World That Never Was" totally gave away the answer to your poll question! xd
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 6:32 pm
Such fancy words, yo!
I did enjoy it though. It was crafted well.
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 9:48 pm
I loved it heart 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:58 am
It was a very good poem. A little water came into my eyes even. *sniff*
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 2:16 pm
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[Hisagi Shuuhei] Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 11:17 pm
I don't really know much about poems but i guess its good seeing that everyone says it is. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 2:44 pm
Ooo that was so awesome!! <3
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[ Kuchiki Rukia ] Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 6:52 pm
Great poem ^^ .. so beautiful ~
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:39 am
Sounds like it is based on Kingdom Hearts 2.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 4:11 pm
*claps hands* Very pretty, I like it. :3
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 8:17 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 1:52 pm
wow that was great i love it
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 4:23 pm
That is so awesome. You're really good and Kingdom Hearts is awesome.
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