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 Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:00 pm
Heh, I guess the Kingdom will have to fall inbetween the Prelude and the DFS era then. Because remember Curio never finished training Diablo.
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:03 pm
Yeah. I suppose that would make sense, no?
Especially when you consider that Diablo is the strongest fighter in the group in the beginning of the story.
Speaking of which. Would you mind making another subforum later, dedicated to the DFS and maybe another one for the prelude.
It'd more or less be for my own enjoyment. XD
But it could also give the users a good idea as to what's going on. Cause I'm sure we'll bring both storys up sooner or later.
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:06 pm
I would make the sub forum... But alas I am broke at the moment. I have only 1k. XD
And we should make a fourth one for anyone who wants to start their own side stories.
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:10 pm
Well, we'll throw it into the pot of 'ideas' for now. Nothing to worry about at this moment.
I just want to eventually complete the DFS and the Prelude.
These things have been a part of my life for a very long time.
Half of the time, when I sit down to draw characters, I try to create characters for those stories.
Sometimes I fail, sometimes I don't.
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:05 pm
Okay, story line of the prelude.
As I said, it was just meant to be a short story.
It was basically gonna be an extended Duelest tournament.
Also, the part where the Kingdom was looking for their long lost prince.
Well, in the King and Queen had 3 kids. 2 sons, and one daughter. The oldest was killed in battle while protecting the kingdom. The daughter turned down her rights to the heir to get married and settle down. Leaving only one child left to claim the throne. But at the age of 4, the youngest son was kidnapped. The kingdom spent 10 years looking for him. Until they got a tip from the Darkfire Kigndom (whom they were allied with) that their son was found in some distant town on the other end of the continent.
This is where the story begins. Two of the Kings elite gaurds were sent to find him. On the way, they are stopped by two cloaked strangers (who turn out to be Curio and the young Diablo. They too are looking for the lost Prince. So there is a slight rivalry in finding him.
Though the elfs get to him first, the Kings gaurds are who he ends up with. For the past 10 years, the Prince was orphaned by a theif, and has lived off of stolen food and gold for years. So they tell him about his heir to the throne, to which he does not believe. He runs away from them.
The elves find him again, and explain to him about the prophecy of the Great Elemental War. And it'll begin with him. Because there is a prelude to the war, that states a young boy will become known as the worlds strongest duelest. And that his wife will give birth to one of the elemental guardians. Curio also tells him that he must go back to his roots.
And so he goes back to the kings gaurds and spends the next 3 years training. The current King, who lays on his death bed, orders that there be the worlds biggest Duelest tournament, where the winning recieves the title of the worlds strongest duelest and his place on the throne. So naturally, thousands of people all over the world decide to take part in it.
Most of the story was gonna be fighting anyways. XD
So the final round is a doubles tournament. Where two competitors fight against two others at the same time. The Prince is matched up with the kings right hand guard, Cid. And in the final match, they go up against Diablo and Curio. Diablo doesn't pose much of a threat, but he is very well guarded by his bigger, tougher brother, Curio.
I haven't worked out the battles yet, but in the end, the Prince is the only one left standing. So he rightfully take place on the throne.
Over the next 40 years, his rule over the land is very well known, and he is also labeled 'The Worlds Greatest King'.
I've already told you about his relation with Kens mother, and I was basically going to end this story with the birth of Ken and Mellany.
And yeah... That's how it goes down.
So what do you think?
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 7:14 am
It sounds good to me.
And yeah I understand where you are going.
We never did get any closure to DFS since it just had died. XD
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 7:25 am
Alright, if you had not noticed yet, I made a seperate thread for our Storylines that way they do not get lost in this thread once we get going. xD
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 8:10 pm
Yeah, I saw it. But you called it 'future storylines'.
I changed it, since those are past events.
Unless there was a reason you called it 'future'.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:48 pm
It fits both in a way I guess?
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 5:35 pm
Well either way.
Oh, and have you found your notebook yet?
If you don't find it by...say... August ish, then I suggest you just do things by memory, and change it later based on the notebook.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 6:01 pm
Haven't found it. And I am just going to wing it for now.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 8:42 pm
Alright. Just que me when I'm up.
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