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I started writing a fanfiction. It's based on Tales of Phantasia, however, it's set about 30 years after Dhaos is dead. MysTek technology is dug up again, and mana is being drained from the world... again. This time, though, there's a major surprise in store!

I've only written the prologue. But I really would like someone to read it so I know it isn't worthless to keep writing... So, would someone please read it? It's in my journal.

If you need notes about the characters just to know who they are, let me know...

No, actually, it has nothing to do with the original plot, Suki... except for MysTek and Suzu, really. Okay, Origin will probably show up too... as will Sylph... but still... *sigh* Whatever. I'm not going to make people read it. Though I probably won't write any more until someone gives me a suggestion...

And I don't want it to be you, Suki. You're the only one who reads/watches my stuff. I want it to be someone else this time. Not Shirley or Kira either.

You're a very good writer. I really enjoyed that prologue even though I know nothing about the original story itself. I liked how detailed your work was, it made the story seem more realistic, especially they way you described the settings. So far I'd say if you keep up with the descriptions you could have a very great story on your hands.