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 Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:04 am
1 - All characters must be in different posts, as this is obviously not a tem
2 - ALL PICTURES MUST BE LINKED! That is a rule here, and you should remember that. I have tried not to bother people, but if you must show the pictures like that, you MUST MUST MUST Upload it to your own hoasting. I don't care if you got the regular appearences off of TekTek, Hachimitsu's weapon is not uploaded onto imageshack or photobucket, and I know that because I looked at preferances.
Otherwise you should be fine, unless one of the other mods sees something else wrong.
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:44 am
Ryore:
Interesting characters. Although what Kira said is true about the images - please upload them to Imageshack and link them. This saves a lot of bandwidth: instead of every single computer having to load the picture every single time it comes to this page (and each loading consumes bandwidth), it allows for only the people who wish to see the images to see them, creating considerably less downloads and thus less bandwidth used.
Also... attack names are usually "Ribbon", followed by the character's name and then whatever else they want to choose. Although there is no set rule stating that this has to happen, "Ribbon Might" does not completely follow this rule... but if that's what you wish to have, I won't complain about it...
And one more thing. This isn't anything wrong, but Amai-san's weapon is a Chakram. Would you happen to be a fan of the television show Xena: Warrior Princess?
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:57 am
Hmm... nice job using the scientific name. Latin=good.
Anyway, in terms of your normal peoples (the non-mews), they're supposed to be in separate posts (like Kira said). Link the pictures, please, since those are the rules. Other than that, I see no problems.
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 3:48 pm
Thank you, I will change these things immediatly. Here are the revised profiles. FIXED Shizoku MewsMewmew: Name: Amai Hachimitsu (Hachimitsu= honey, Amai= Sweet) Aka: Hachi-kun Age: 16 Gender: Female Appearance: Hair: Honey Blonde eyes: Rusted brown Skin: Asian http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3198/hachimitsuhn2.png (from left to right: School, morph, street) Crush: Rui Chijin DNA: Vulpes Macrotis (desert fox) Henshin Phrase: Mew Mew Hachimitsu Metamorphosis! Weapon: Chakram Blossoms http://www.toddscostumes.com/images/xena/two_piece_chakram_apart.jpg Attack: Hachi Ribbon Sting, Amai Hive (takes a lot of power, its a desperate situation attack) Name: Amai Kabocha (Kabocha= Pumpkin) AKA: Kabo-san Age: 18 Gender: Male Appearance: Hair: White, white, white! eyes: Baby blue Skin: Asian http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/1319/tek060911258989nq2.png http://img483.imageshack.us/img483/7349/tek0609110fc072uo9.png Crush: --- DNA: Zenaida Macroura Mourning Dove Henshin Phrase: Mew Mew Kabocha Metamorphosis! Weapon: Slicer Scythe Attack: Pumpkin Spice Name: Amai Koohii (Koohii= coffe) Aka: Hii-chan Age: 12 Gender: male Appearance: Hair: Black eyes: Red Skin: Asian http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8638/tek06091125a388kp1.png http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6585/tek0609115b9f19ar8.png Crush: --- DNA: Pteropus Conspicillatus Flying Fox (bat) Henshin Phrase: Mew Mew Nashi Metamorphosis! Weapon: Jiujiebian (nine section chain whip) Attack: Metal Hii Ribbon Name: Amai Cha (Cha= Tea) Cha-Chan Age: 12 Gender: Male Appearance: Hair: Black eyes: Red Skin: Asian http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/8695/tek060911d3888wd3.png http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4341/tek060911f83513jw1.png Crush: --- DNA: Pteropodinae Rousettus Egyptian fruit bat Henshin Phrase: Mew Mew Mikan Metamorphosis! Weapon: Cha Bo (Bo staff) Attack: Green Tea Ribbon Splash, Ocha-zuke quake (different variations of basically the same attack) Stands: The Shizoku Mews fight for the world. A family of four they know there duties as mews, to protect the earth from evil at all times. The are very self relient and basically refuse to work with other mews. Some say that is stuck up, but they have been betrayed one to many times to trust anyone but family. ((Bridgitkiido: As to the Chrakrams, i actually got the idea from a video game called Tales of Symphonia. In truth I have only seen Xena like twice when I was about 7... I am now 16.))
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 3:51 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 6:11 pm
*Laugh* Red vs. Blue.
I haven't personally watched it, but my friends tell me SO much about it that I feel like I know it, to some extent.
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fine engineering Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 7:22 am
Marshiemallows *Laugh* Red vs. Blue. I haven't personally watched it, but my friends tell me SO much about it that I feel like I know it, to some extent. Oh you really should, it is the super coolest show and down right funny as well.
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 5:11 pm
Okay, Umm...
Mew Hachimitsu is perfectly fine
Mew Kabocha is fine, although it's Mourning Dove, not Morning Dove.(I will not complain about mew Kira already having that as her DNA, as she also has the Snow Leopard)
Mew Nashi is fine
And although I don't like Repeated DNA, Mew Mikan is Fine
BUT Team Shizoku Mews are CURRENTLY not accepted as a team. All teams have a difference from the main mews. It might be that they are a different race(Example: The Alien Mews), they are from somewhere else/a different time(Example: The Alien Mews), or they fight for a different cause(Example: Team DIMM). Please give some detail at the end of all of the Shizoku Mews' profiles.
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fine engineering Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 6:03 pm
Mew Purin~chan Okay, Umm... Mew Hachimitsu is perfectly fine Mew Kabocha is fine, although it's Mourning Dove, not Morning Dove.(I will not complain about mew Kira already having that as her DNA, as she also has the Snow Leopard) Mew Nashi is fine And although I don't like Repeated DNA, Mew Mikan is Fine BUT Team Shizoku Mews are CURRENTLY not accepted as a team. All teams have a difference from the main mews. It might be that they are a different race(Example: The Alien Mews), they are from somewhere else/a different time(Example: The Alien Mews), or they fight for a different cause(Example: Team DIMM). Please give some detail at the end of all of the Shizoku Mews' profiles. *Cough* Actually, the name Mikan is already taken.
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 4:22 am
Marshiemallows Mew Purin~chan Okay, Umm... Mew Hachimitsu is perfectly fine Mew Kabocha is fine, although it's Mourning Dove, not Morning Dove.(I will not complain about mew Kira already having that as her DNA, as she also has the Snow Leopard) Mew Nashi is fine And although I don't like Repeated DNA, Mew Mikan is Fine BUT Team Shizoku Mews are CURRENTLY not accepted as a team. All teams have a difference from the main mews. It might be that they are a different race(Example: The Alien Mews), they are from somewhere else/a different time(Example: The Alien Mews), or they fight for a different cause(Example: Team DIMM). Please give some detail at the end of all of the Shizoku Mews' profiles. *Cough* Actually, the name Mikan is already taken. Hmm? I thought that was someone who had edited a picture of Zakuro, and left because we were 'making her take care of it too quickly' even though we weren't...?
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 1:15 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:46 pm
Okay, that's fine... But you know that the origonal mews already fight for the whole world... Right? But I really should accept it because you did make a paragraph about it.
See, what I mean by fights for a different cause is that they aren't exactly with the Mew Mews, and not exactly with the aliens, and they might fight for something else. Team DIMM(Distroy Icky Mew Mews) Is kind of Self-ecxplanitory... From what I understand, they kind of fight for themselves, but I'm not sure.
Anyway, this is an announcement for EVERYONE:
I will be creating a second characters thread, and so you will have to RE POST your characters to maintain playing them. They are still playable throughout any plots that you have posted as them in, but after that, you will NEED to Re-post them.
This is so that inactive people will get their characters removed, and popular names that are taken will be usable.
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