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 Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 2:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 3:00 pm
Is anyone going to read my book?
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 6:23 pm
sweet book take out most of those question marks that arent ending a sentence
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:37 am
[ Vash ] sweet book take out most of those question marks that arent ending a sentence could you tell me where?
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Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 7:16 pm
oy so much dialogue. Erm, try to elaborate more on details. it's ok for a start
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2005 1:42 pm
I love it.
It's a bit short but it's doing great!
smile heart
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Posted: Wed May 11, 2005 9:31 am
thanks all, it is all based on my poems, i will show you all of those later.
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