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 Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 8:45 am
My most current auction was autobought about a week ago, so I finally got to drawing the winner her art. Here's the current sketch:  Any anatomical issues with this? I just wanted to see if anyone had any suggestions before I start colouring it and whatnot. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 9:24 am
Maybe the leg could be a bit longer other than that it ROCKS!
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:19 am
Yer I agree, longer legs. Loving the facial features.
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:20 am
[Help]_[Spooked] Yer I agree, longer legs. Loving the facial features. Thanks. I'll fix up that leg. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:20 am
the leg looks like its at a weird angle.. especially looking at the way the knee seems to be bending, id say try making the foot look youre not looking at it directly from the side but more at an angle.. id show you what i mean but my tablets being crappy crying ;
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 12:08 pm
I love the head and facial expression, However:
The leg is weird+ the feet needs to be fixed also. The sword could look a bit better. The fingers are too straight they should be bent like real joints do. I am practicing on the joints of toes+fingers also. They are basically the hardest parts I think >.>'' The Neck seems to need a tiny bit of detail such as putting a line that seems like the neck muscle.
I read this from an anime book but the butt of your drawing should be bent in. Like real people sitting, cause when you sit your a** is flat xd
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 12:30 pm
well, I think you have heard enough about that leg.
Just watch the feet too. The right foot should be brought out a bit more, so it lis farther infront of the left leg. maybe with the toes pointing upwards abit more.
but yes. I liek that style of eyes. they are very cute. heart
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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 3:19 pm
S k y I love the head and facial expression, However: The leg is weird+ the feet needs to be fixed also. The sword could look a bit better. The fingers are too straight they should be bent like real joints do. I am practicing on the joints of toes+fingers also. They are basically the hardest parts I think >.>'' The Neck seems to need a tiny bit of detail such as putting a line that seems like the neck muscle. I read this from an anime book but the butt of your drawing should be bent in. Like real people sitting, cause when you sit your a** is flat xd I copied the design of the sword from the Gblade, so I don't think I can really change anything about that. It just generally looks weird. XD I always get lazy on hands in WIPs, but this is just the sketch, so the final one will definitely look better. Thanks for the suggestions. :3
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Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:13 am
I love the eyes. :3 The upper torso of the drawing looks great, the bottom needs a lil' work done...as the folks above me already stated. whee
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 3:31 pm
Finished it today. Made a few slight adjustments to the leg. 
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 6:56 pm
Wow, Tawney. <3
I love how you did her head. The hair and eyes just.. pop. This came out really well. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 7:56 pm
agreed, hairs and eyes really do seem like the high points of that piece ^^ I personally love how vivid the eye color is, and how the hair shines ^^ (plus it's green hair XD)
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:51 pm
Thank you! ^_^ I have fun with making the eye colour really bright and vivid. I think it's my favourite part to colour. x3
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