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 Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 9:59 pm
How's the description so far?
Suggestions.
Spelling corrections.
Etc.
XD
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:01 pm
 It's good. But you should add a fight between the participants and the GCD, I might write ine tommorow if I get bored in class...And use the word Exiled! thats a good word... 3nodding
~<3
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:02 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:04 pm
I love it so far. <3
[subliminal]weneedaday10plz[/subliminal]
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:05 pm
I got an Idea!
(You might need to start this Game 7 though. sweatdrop )
Have the Sniper PM where they would like to kill their victim, and The Killer can PM how they killed theirs. 3nodding It will make it easier for you to write the story. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:22 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 10:26 pm
Zae, in the first few lines you spelled "however" - "Hoewever" xd heart
Otherwise it's spiffeh and shiny. O:
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 12:12 am
Somewhere it should say "All are accepted" or something.
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 12:15 am
emotion_jawdrop Love the image.
By the way, you spelled "That's" wrong on the last part. xD
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