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Well, remember back in elementary school when your drama teacher would have everybody sit in a circle and tell a story sentebce-by-sentence? Well, this is kind of like that, only you write it paragraph-by-paragraph!
Paragraphs have to be 1-6 sentences long. They also have to make sence.

EXAMPLE:

Good Paragraph:
Sakura happily skipped into her best friend, and greatest rival, Ino's flower shop, she was wearing her best dress and had pulled her hair back with green clips to match her eyes; She had just had the greatest idea in the history of the earth! She was going to bring Sasuke flowers in the hospital: surely he would like her then!

A good paragraph should be descriptive and have relatively good grammar.

Bad Paragraph:
Joe Boband Norm had a cool-as idea! they were gonna go get high behind the old gass station! so, joe Bob adn Norm ran like ed edd and eddy and got some pot outta their garden, then they ran behind the gas station and got high! but all the sudden, Tsunade came out and kicked their asses! LETS-GET-HIGH-NO-JUTSU! THE END!

Thats a baaaaaad paragraph.
1: It has NOTHING to do with the Naruto series. Not the past, present or future.
2: We don't even know what Joe, Bob and Norm look like.
3: People can't just appear. If they use that apperating jutsu, then make it sound believeable, like:
All of the sudden we heard a loud crack behind us! Oh crap, I thought as I turned around and his the book behind my back. To all of our horror, we saw Kakashi-sensei behind us, he was so mad he was red in the face!
"Where. Is. My. Book."
"N-no where sensei! We haven't seen it since we saw you last, right guys?"
"Yeah!"
People just CAN'T randomly appear.
4: Lets-get-high-no-jutsu? No, people shouldn't make up random jutsu unless it's believeable, and relavent.

One more thing:
You can't just write somthing like:
Then Kakashi-sensei did a set of all-too-famillar hand seals, "1000 Years Of Pain!" He shout--- Oh HI TRISHA!!! --- ed...

If you want to say hi to someone, PM them, or if you know them in real life, call them or somthing. Not here.

And if you have any questions, write your paragraph, then ask/answer questions.

ninja heart ninja

Neji looked deep into Shaku's coal-black eyes, he could feel a cold shiver run down his spine. Somthing's not right about him, he thought, I'd better take him to Hokage-sama and see what she says. Neji was about to take the boy into the village when he heard an all-too-famillar voice. " He turned around to see Tenten, Oi, Neji! I lost Lee somewhere, can you find him--- Who's that?" "I'm not sure, but he has somthing inside of him that shouldn't be there."

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AHH!!! I know, my spelling sucks! Plz don't kill me! No! Nooo anything but Mallet-sama! Nooooooooooooo!
*Thunk*
Pwetty starsss... Oh look... and there's a ducky too... Hi Mr. Ducky-san!
*Get's K.O.ed by Mallet-sama...*
OUCH!

Oh, and for all you Tsunade haters:
SANDAIME'S D-E-A-D!!! Get used to it. Damn Oro and his sick obsession with Sasuke's body *shivers*...

Shaku has that two-tailed dog in him, right?.... Oh, wait... Nekomura's the one with 2 tails.... I think the dog has 7, or 5.... IDK! its an odd number though...

Neji had looked behind him not seeing Shaku in his grasp, but Tenten in his place. "WHAT, h-how did he?" said Neji through clenched teeth. He let go of his comrade and started again after Shaku. "I see you can't be taken lightly demon-boy, FINE I'll finish this here!" Neji bolted in Shaku's direction flinging several kunai and pinning Shaku to a tree. "We end this here" warned Neji distainfully. He sepped into a stance Shaku had never seen before. "DIVINE 128!!!"
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since no 1 was writing, i decided i would continu the story...
gonk I WISH MORE PEOPLE WOULD POST!!!