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I am well aware I suck at poetry

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Tophtwin2212

PostPosted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 7:34 pm


I have made poems, but they are the worst poems in the world....... Here they are:

Life

Life is like a play,
You say your lines your own way
Once your scene is finally done,
Be aware that another scene has begun


And another one

Endless night

When I try to go to bed,
"Don't go to sleep!" Says the voice in my head,
Try try try as I might,
I feel I am stuck in endless night

And the torture of my awful poetry has been completed.... for now....

Feel free to be as harsh as needed on these poems. I'll start! THEY SUCK!
PostPosted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:47 am


i like the first one.

J~28
Crew


KeriBeri

PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:48 am


I like them you don't give yourself enough credit
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