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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 12:24 pm
the greatest love was on the cross it was from above and for each of us
the greatest sacrifice, He gave everything giving up even life, because he's loving
because He loved, for us he died, He suffered, but now he's alive
He did it so we may live, so that's why i give my life for Him
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 12:25 pm
Anyway that is my best poem i written and yeah. its the only poem that rhymes. i can't write poems that rhyme. God was really helping me on that poem.
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 7:48 pm
Thanks for sharing it, and it sounds great! It's great that you're willing to give your life to Him. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 12:32 pm
That's real pretty! I can't write any poems.
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 1:42 pm
I've written some poetry, but am rather shy about sharing. So it's great that God helped you and that you wrote something so encouraging and beautiful.
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:21 pm
Very nice! Writing poetry for God can be challenging when there is not enough words sometimes to give Him justice - LOL. Your poem is lovely and sweet.
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