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 Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:17 am
For once, I'm drawing a picture for myself *gasp*
And I really actually want to finish this one. But her hands are killing me! I'm terrible at forshortening (I can't even spell it right), especially with the horror that is hands (I both love and hate to draw them).
So, help me please! I love draw-overs too whee
And yes, she's not symmetrical. Sorry gonk
lineart only
under-sketch only
Thanks! heart
PS: This is my first art f** post! eek I'm so scared!
*sees other amazing art* how did I get into this guild anyways?
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 4:59 pm
Huh! Her left (our right) shoulder is longer than the other. Granted, I know you already said she isn't symmetrical, but I'd really fix that. It stands out.
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 7:57 pm
The Iconoclast Huh! Her left (our right) shoulder is longer than the other. Granted, I know you already said she isn't symmetrical, but I'd really fix that. It stands out. Noted and it will be fixed, thanks! xd
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:03 pm
her face is very pretty, i really like the little curls in her hair and the details on her bun
yeah it seems like the entire bust down isn't symetrical, i know you mentioned she isnt symmetrical in your post but if you just selected that area and moved it to the right then fill in the missing lines you should be fine [the centre of the clavicle should align with the cleavage in her bust area]
+the cloth on her apron isn't belivable, it stick on the top yet she's able to lift it so that little piece doesn't move
it seems like a lot more cloth than there should be for an apron [if it is an apron at all i'm not entirely sure]
and i feel the dress would look better if the bottom portion were more exagerrated, if the skirt were more poofy on the sides
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Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 12:21 am
magaly her face is very pretty, i really like the little curls in her hair and the details on her bun
yeah it seems like the entire bust down isn't symetrical, i know you mentioned she isnt symmetrical in your post but if you just selected that area and moved it to the right then fill in the missing lines you should be fine [the centre of the clavicle should align with the cleavage in her bust area]
+the cloth on her apron isn't belivable, it stick on the top yet she's able to lift it so that little piece doesn't move
it seems like a lot more cloth than there should be for an apron [if it is an apron at all i'm not entirely sure]
and i feel the dress would look better if the bottom portion were more exagerrated, if the skirt were more poofy on the sides
Thanks for the comment! I deffinately see what you mean on all parts. 3nodding The apron was bugging me for a long time now, and I think I've finally realized how to fix it. And yes, poofy dress! I defiantely will make it more poofy and elaborate. I'll most likely add more layers and plenty of textures to it. Thanks again!
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