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 Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:37 pm
I don't do poems much, so its not great, but It reminds me of my friend marshall, who without better words, blew his brains out.
I pull the trigger
My note..unreadable
You figure
It was healable
This life got old
You were told
And now im cold
Forgive me if it sucked.
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:47 pm
I thought you did quite well.
Bear in mind, i'm an amature still. (Sorry if I spelled that wrong)
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:55 pm
Me too, one of my first poems.
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:58 pm
I posted one, i've been writing for over a year.
But I stopped periodicly to let my creativity build up.
Plus, my school caught me with my poems and took them away and sent me to a mental institution twice.
So my confidence has been hurt, and i've had to start over on ALOT of things.
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 10:02 pm
Lol. Dude the storie you just told about school taking away your poems, reminds me of sheris s**t.
It wasn't poems or anything, she got sent to the office for beating the s**t out of some other girl, and called our black vice principal a ******.
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 10:15 pm
Lol, wow.
I am not sure my school realized that despite how many times they take my works away or send me to a mental institution.
I'm going to keep writing.
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 10:39 pm
I don't really think thats legal, unless your parent agrees.
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 6:26 am
It is in Florida apparently.
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 6:58 am
Al-araaf It is in Florida apparently. I'm going to alabama for the summer. Where incest is legal.
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 7:05 am
Ummm....Intreresting.
Have fun with that.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 10:04 am
I definitely like the feeling behind that poem. I too am an amateur though.
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Posted: Tue Jul 04, 2006 1:52 pm
i too like the feeling, i've been writting for a year and a half and i don't think you suck as much as i did when i first started. it's good i like it.
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 5:32 pm
razorblade6060 i too like the feeling, i've been writting for a year and a half and i don't think you suck as much as i did when i first started. it's good i like it. yeah same for me and i still suck so your doing better then me lol
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 7:16 pm
when I first started writing poetry... people thought that I'd been writing for years O.o...... this poem is ok... saeshun.... it's so nice to be saeshun.... it means young XD I got is stuck in my head XD
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 12:14 am
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