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 Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 4:58 pm
Rain
It's as If the rain didn't fall
If the thunder never called
And happiness is all I know
Cause you're still in my arms
I can still feel your lips on mine
like our hearts are intertwined
I'm afraid to open up my eyes
to find, you're still gone
A song I wrote about a book I read
I have never fallen in love xd
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 6:39 pm
Its so good and sweet. It reminds me of how i feel toward my girlfriend.
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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 3:07 pm
it makes me sad but good poems show emotion makes me think of my ex-boyfriend
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 6:38 pm
Kudos! Oh, and I hope you fall in love soon! It's pure bliss when you're in love!
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Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 10:03 pm
I love this poem!
Its so sweet.
Good job! heart
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 3:25 pm
I love it! It is short and beautiful perhaps you could build on it some I would love to write music to this if you ever write more to go with it.....but even so it is a nice poem!
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 1:31 pm
Rukia_Soul_Reaper I love it! It is short and beautiful perhaps you could build on it some I would love to write music to this if you ever write more to go with it.....but even so it is a nice poem! i think that would be a wonderful idea. she has a good heart that deserves alot. keep at it!
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:35 pm
I liked it a lot. It reminds me of a relationship I had once.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 5:29 am
i think some people suck at short poems but you know how to say so much with a few lines. great job!
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 9:05 am
I don't like it...
I LOVE it heart heart
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 7:57 pm
Rukia_Soul_Reaper I love it! It is short and beautiful perhaps you could build on it some I would love to write music to this if you ever write more to go with it.....but even so it is a nice poem!
I'm actually a musician myself and I was going to put music to this two years ago.
I actually forgot all about it though xD
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:29 pm
Sad rain. It was nice to read.
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