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 Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 3:49 am
I'll try to post the drawings that I've made here.
Please give me comments to inprove it.
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 3:50 am
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 6:35 am
Nice! I really like the necklace and the eyes.
You could try shade and highlight the face more to make it look less flat. You also need to work on the shape of the head/chin. The ears are from the side but the face is actually straight forward. You don't really see the curves in the ears. And where are her eyebrows?
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 7:17 am
Thanks for youre advice! I'll keep practice on the shades but it's difficult for me sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:56 am
the color choices are nice. i would suggest trying using more pigment to bring more depth into the picture.
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 2:26 pm
you've got a nice start here. even with the errors others have pointed out, i really like some of the detail you've put in, like the tendons in the neck and the eyes and lips. you've got some very good things going in this. i would personally say first to work with anatomy and then everything should fall into place. once you know anatomy, its easier to know where to put shadows and highlights. but anyway, i look forward to seeing more from you! nice to see someone else who likes to work with pastels quite a bit in this guild!
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 6:28 am
kirio26 you've got a nice start here. even with the errors others have pointed out, i really like some of the detail you've put in, like the tendons in the neck and the eyes and lips. you've got some very good things going in this. i would personally say first to work with anatomy and then everything should fall into place. once you know anatomy, its easier to know where to put shadows and highlights. but anyway, i look forward to seeing more from you! nice to see someone else who likes to work with pastels quite a bit in this guild! thanx for the compliments! I have a anatomie book I'll tink I'll use it more often 3nodding and I like youre elves you drawed in elfwood wink
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 6:33 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 8:24 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 3:45 pm
S o l e m b u m kirio26 you've got a nice start here. even with the errors others have pointed out, i really like some of the detail you've put in, like the tendons in the neck and the eyes and lips. you've got some very good things going in this. i would personally say first to work with anatomy and then everything should fall into place. once you know anatomy, its easier to know where to put shadows and highlights. but anyway, i look forward to seeing more from you! nice to see someone else who likes to work with pastels quite a bit in this guild! thanx for the compliments! I have a anatomy book I'll think I'll use it more often 3nodding and I like youre elves you drew in elfwood wink thankies! i love the pictures in the links you've posted. it could be the camera, but i think that you could benefit (just as i could) from some practice with texture, and, if you're going to draw lines, perhaps make them more defined instead of blurring everything together. its a hard habit to get out of, considering how easy it is. i also really like the sketches you've posted; i love your style, its all cute. i cant wait to see more from you!
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Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 12:36 pm
kirio26 S o l e m b u m kirio26 you've got a nice start here. even with the errors others have pointed out, i really like some of the detail you've put in, like the tendons in the neck and the eyes and lips. you've got some very good things going in this. i would personally say first to work with anatomy and then everything should fall into place. once you know anatomy, its easier to know where to put shadows and highlights. but anyway, i look forward to seeing more from you! nice to see someone else who likes to work with pastels quite a bit in this guild! thanx for the compliments! I have a anatomy book I'll think I'll use it more often 3nodding and I like youre elves you drew in elfwood wink thankies! i love the pictures in the links you've posted. it could be the camera, but i think that you could benefit (just as i could) from some practice with texture, and, if you're going to draw lines, perhaps make them more defined instead of blurring everything together. its a hard habit to get out of, considering how easy it is. i also really like the sketches you've posted; i love your style, its all cute. i cant wait to see more from you! thanks for the advice and compliments! I'll keep that in mind heart
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