So this is one of my pencil drawings and while I'm somewhat pleased with it, I'd still like some feedback on it. I got a little sloppy on some of the shading of the folds and it's uneven with the top of the picture being so empty. I would've put the smaller version up, but it makes it look like crap.
So, critique away.
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:45 pm
The characters have personality, which is great. It's one of the most important things about character illustrations, but I'm always surprised how little people focus on it here (less so in this guild than otherwise).
Their faces look like dinner plates, though. I hope you don't mind, I've done a little draw-over:
Their fingers are also really skinny and long, but I'll let sombody else handle the rest of the image.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:20 pm
yea on the dinner plates thing. it looks kind of like you're afraid to let their faces overlap.
as for the fingers, they should be bent at another digit or lifting up more (if that makes any sense).
Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 7:07 pm
Yes, that makes sense. I often make things too thin and have trouble drawing things together, but it's something I'll work on. Thank you for your comments. <3
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:28 pm
Wow, very pretty! The faces are very long and thin, but then again so is everything else in this picture, so it kind of works...
Cool concept with the flowy skirt, and nice work on the folds. The only crit I can think of would be the girl's right arm - it seems very flat and angular, which doesn't go to well with the flowy-ness of the rest of her.
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