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 Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 5:29 pm
This is a pic I drew a couple of days ago and I'm going to color it on my computer but before that I want it critiqued so I can fix any errors.  well, are there any errors?
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Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 10:12 pm
I'm taking the no responses as a no? neutral
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:21 am
shape is fine...
as pencils go it's a bit messy which is fine if you do your own inking biggrin
still try and solidify the line a little more then that even in the pencils.
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 6:17 pm
It seems to me that the visible arm seems a little short in length, but I'm not a real expert on the anime/manga style. xp
Can't wait to see it colored.
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Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 2:01 pm
I think it's great as a pencil sketch but I agree once you solidify the lines up a bit and give it a splash of coloring it'll look that much better. Very good job! biggrin
Kay
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Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 2:37 pm
Sorry, i'm not a artist, i'm a photographer. But i can say she's hot. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:52 am
it's good, but a little sketchy. ^^
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 10:09 am
The only thing I myself can see...is her knee caps and legs. Then again it just might be my site.
I think she is adorable, and I love her pose XD
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Posted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 8:47 pm
I think the face is adorable n.n Just had to say that, but I'd only fix from teh waist down...it looks a bit..."rushed". If you get what I mean 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:01 am
below the hips, the legs are way too skinny for her figure.
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Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 5:46 pm
i like this pic reminds me of riku from ff X probaly not intentional but its not a bad thing, good work
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