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I need critics bevore I go further [pencil sketch]

Hasel

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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 12:57 pm

it's for an tatoo design but there's something wrong with the anotomy, I cant figure out what it is, if someone could help me find out and know how to fix it, ore know's a picture of a jumping rabbit I would apreciate that verry much!

Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:32 pm

hmmm. i'm not good with animal anatomies. maybe something looks not exactly right, but i can't say what. maybe someone will be able to help you better. sweatdrop can't wait to see the finished design. looks interesteing for a tatto design. 3nodding

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earthkid

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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:44 pm

I'm no animal anatomy pro either... but...

I think the back leg that's furthest away should be a little smaller, and the front leg in the foreground's joint looks awkward.

These pictures aren't exactly your pose, but maybe you can piece stuff together from them. biggrin

http://www.ssimicro.com/~wildart/large.htg/wolfhare.jpg
http://www.chenowith.k12.or.us/tech/subject/science/ArcticAnimals/rabbit.jpg
http://www.taxidermists.co.uk/img/dht_110404/running_hare.jpg

It's a really cool design, though. I like the movement. 3nodding