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 Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 7:49 pm
I am trying to write a short story called crooked. It is about a teenage boy who gets a wish from a crooked wizard frog he saves from getting hit by a car. So he gets one wish, "I wish for a girl, besides my mother or any relatives, that loves me." but the crooked wizard transforms Chris's cat (main character) into a girl.
Since i am not a boy and i suck at writing can someone give me some incite?
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:27 pm
i wish i could, but i'm not a boy either... but the story line sounds really good!
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Posted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 4:04 pm
Your idea sounds interesting! Are you considering making it a comedy story? You could add akward scenes of the main girl acting like a cat or something like that.
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