Thank you everyone for your critique on my other pic, but I need some for this one now before I start shading blaugh The scanner pretty much messed this up because the rest of her legs and the angelic staff/rod aren't showin up stressed Please tell me how my anotomy is before I murder it by shading xd : (sorry about the water mark but i'm also posting this in the PP sweatdrop )
Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 7:47 pm
Definately looks like you cropped out her hands.
Maybe if you add some personality to her facial expression and all around depth to your linework you could create a fuller image.
Also, try drawing through your figure to capture the anatomical relations properly.
That way it won't look like there's a face attached to a hidden neck and an arm coming out of said neck.
Her breasts definately need form to them instead of appearing as obstructive masses.
As for the folds; try varying your gradiation to give a better sense of depth and flow.
You have a problem that a lot of beginners have- you are working on details instead of anatomy, and form.
You got to relise, details are around to make a picture look nice- but a picture of a person without person-like shapes will just look messy.
Just work on your underdrawing, and shapes before you move on to the next step of a picture.
Also draw from real life- it will teach you better cloths-foldies then anything.
Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 2:24 am
where the side of her face (the eye side) and hair meet, i think you rally need to fill in the shading all the way up to the contour of her face. The jagged white between the pencil strokes is distracting.
Her breasts seem to need a bit of reshaping, and at the angle she's standing, i dont think they'd be pointing in opposite directions. Likely, the left one would be facing forward, the other pointing outward.
i also agree that more definition to your line work would look nice.
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:32 pm
Think I fixed it:
Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 9:19 pm
I am dissapointed. We gave you advice, and it doen't seem like you took any of it.
I am dissapointed. We gave you advice, and it doen't seem like you took any of it.
I can't even tell what's being discussed, because the previous picture no longer exists. D:
EDIT: Oh jeez, I don't even need to see the previous image, I think you're right. :[
Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:35 am
lol. I like how her cape disappears when it's behind her.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:52 am
Where is the underside of her cape??
Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 6:50 pm
THIS NAME IS QUITE SMART
I am dissapointed. We gave you advice, and it doen't seem like you took any of it.
I'm really sorry. Maybe I'll stick to drawing inanimate objects for awhile. Or pick up a few more anotomy books. And do it over. emo But thank you everyone for your wonderful critique. And sorry for not posting, but I kinda forgot about this sweatdrop
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