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Kittenmaster2

PostPosted: Sat May 27, 2006 1:17 pm


Thats all I ask of you

I thought you cared and that you would always be there for me
Was it only a mere "fling" you had when we were together?
When I was with you.... I felt as if no one could harm me.
I wanted to take it further, but you still wanted to play around.
I will never get over how you treated me.
You treated me like every woman desires to be treated.
Candle-light dinners out on terrace.
Going to the movies and buying everything I wanted.
Never REALLY knowing how much you REALLY cared about me.

It sucks because every time I hear this song I cry for you.
I want to be with you.
I want to be your love again.
I want to feel your arms around me to know that I AM safe.
I can not stand being away from you.
It kills me whenever I see you at a restraunt with another woman.
I still feel that you have feelings for me.
We used to be friends then we took it further.
Then you decided you did not want me anymore.

I feel ashamed at still wanting you back.
After all the pain you put me through.
I thought it would be you and I forever.
No one else but you and I.
I hate that I actually fell for your little games.
I was stunned when you left.
I thought you would come back.
I thoght you were just mad.

I still LOVE you and always will.
If you're reading this.....I want you back.
PLEASE come back to me.
I will be yours forever.
Just come back to atleast to see me.
Call me once in a while to see how its going.
Just ask how I am feeling.
Please.
Thats all I ask of you.



----- Ally Parker
PostPosted: Sun May 28, 2006 9:41 am


I heart it. You should make some more and put them on here. Keep up the great writing. heart

~dreaded_zombie~


nikki_lea

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 3:38 pm


that is so sweet. i heart it. if i was that guy -i am NOT a guy- i would tae you back within an instant
PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 4:58 pm


i think ur poem was good. i write poems so i should no.

Metal-Face


Fallen_Angel_Lunaria

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 5:13 pm


Great poem. It made me smile. biggrin
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