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 Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 5:34 pm
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Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 5:02 pm
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 10:18 am
I love it
But if you had more description in their actions as they were talking
it would play better in people's mind.
Such as the movement of the women's head as she spoke or the sound of her voice as she answered the questions
Something to add to the visual in one's mind
But, I love the theme and the style.
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 4:35 pm
Thank you very much I shall keep all this in mind!
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 7:07 am
Not bad at all. Is this your first attempt at writing a book?
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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 10:54 am
Blade_Icestorm Not bad at all. Is this your first attempt at writing a book? Yes it is. I come up with story lines in my head but nerver actually write them down and if I do, its more like character sketches, story lines and brain storming but I never acctually follow through with it.
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Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 1:31 pm
For me, when I'm writing, I just have to write and write and write, because if i stop, I'll lose my train of thought and never be able to pick it up again wtih the original intent. I'll have new idea's and things that just weren't meant for it.
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Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 6:16 am
Ature Manti For me, when I'm writing, I just have to write and write and write, because if i stop, I'll lose my train of thought and never be able to pick it up again wtih the original intent. I'll have new idea's and things that just weren't meant for it. Y aI know where your coming from, I have that too some times but after about an hour or so I lose all insperation and I have no more Idea's.
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Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 2:49 pm
J_walker_anonymous Ature Manti For me, when I'm writing, I just have to write and write and write, because if i stop, I'll lose my train of thought and never be able to pick it up again wtih the original intent. I'll have new idea's and things that just weren't meant for it. Y aI know where your coming from, I have that too some times but after about an hour or so I lose all insperation and I have no more Idea's. Wow, you get it worse than I do, walker. I'm sorry.
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Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 6:25 am
You should keep a notepad with you so whenever any ideas strike you, you can write them down. Observe the world around you and use some of the actions you see around you in the book. That is how I do it anyway.
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Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 9:56 am
Thank you I will keep this all in mind!
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 9:36 am
Blade_Icestorm You should keep a notepad with you so whenever any ideas strike you, you can write them down. Observe the world around you and use some of the actions you see around you in the book. That is how I do it anyway. That's a good tip, Blade_Icestorm. I'll keep it in mind.
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 8:14 am
Awesome story!!
I know a thing or two about murder
(psst.. look at my name.. ninja )
lol 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 8:06 pm
PerfectMurder Awesome story!!
I know a thing or two about murder
(psst.. look at my name.. ninja )
lol 4laugh Have you seen Murder By Numbers?
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