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ziiggystardust

PostPosted: Tue May 16, 2006 6:50 pm


This was also in PP forum.
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PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 7:25 am


Ooh, me likes! heart It reminds me of the shoes our captain drew. I like yours, they're wrinkly and and they have character! I like your realistic technique. Excellent job, though you may want to take a better picture! 3nodding

tatertot101010


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PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 12:35 pm


they are very nice heart i like your style.

oh, and here are shoes i had to draw for my class xd
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23845585/
PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 2:41 pm


tatertot101010
Ooh, me likes! heart It reminds me of the shoes our captain drew. I like yours, they're wrinkly and and they have character! I like your realistic technique. Excellent job, though you may want to take a better picture! 3nodding


Thanks. heart
Yeah I can't get a better one right now.. sweatdrop

ziiggystardust


ziiggystardust

PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 2:45 pm


Dirty_sox3
they are very nice heart i like your style.

oh, and here are shoes i had to draw for my class xd
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23845585/


Thank you. heart
I don't really see a "style"
I guess it's easier when you DIDN'T draw it.. sweatdrop
nice to know I have one..
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PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 5:00 pm


Wow...

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ziiggystardust

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 6:45 pm


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Wow...


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PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2006 1:04 pm


Dirty_sox3
they are very nice heart i like your style.

oh, and here are shoes i had to draw for my class xd
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23845585/

Wow. Part of it looks like a photograp. Especially the shoe in front. eek
I miss my vans shoes...shoe...I only have one left I lost the other one. (long story wich includes me being drunk and throws away both shoes, walks home barefoot, goes back the next day and find only one shoe on top of a car...)

Very popular for art teachers around the world to make all pupils draw their shoes it seems.

ChemieChan


Dirty_sox3
Captain

PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2006 4:29 pm


ChemieChan
Dirty_sox3
they are very nice heart i like your style.

oh, and here are shoes i had to draw for my class xd
http://www.deviantart.com/view/23845585/

Wow. Part of it looks like a photograp. Especially the shoe in front. eek
I miss my vans shoes...shoe...I only have one left I lost the other one. (long story wich includes me being drunk and throws away both shoes, walks home barefoot, goes back the next day and find only one shoe on top of a car...)

Very popular for art teachers around the world to make all pupils draw their shoes it seems.

eek lol.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 6:21 am


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not for an art class, and not as detailed as yours sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 4:39 pm


drawing shoes is great, each pair tells a different story.
as worn as those are, you start asking yourself how much they've seen.

i think this drawing is very well executed, the lighting is a bit confusing to me though. there's no shadow beneath either of the shoes for the shadows in the creases of the shoes to be that evident + the shading on the box should maybe be darker on the left pannel.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:49 pm


not for an art class, and not as detailed as yours sweatdrop

very nice
you should keep working on shading
& maybe smoothing it out a bit.. the light area around the hand and shoe looks a bit starange and random.
keep working on it.It's alwayz best to work from observation. heart
Thanks for the comment!~ whee heart

ziiggystardust


ziiggystardust

PostPosted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:54 pm


magaly
drawing shoes is great, each pair tells a different story.
as worn as those are, you start asking yourself how much they've seen.

i think this drawing is very well executed, the lighting is a bit confusing to me though. there's no shadow beneath either of the shoes for the shadows in the creases of the shoes to be that evident + the shading on the box should maybe be darker on the left pannel.



I agree about the lighting..
I was mostly working on the shading and EVN most of the shoes with out the actuall shoes/figures infront of me.I have been pretty bad with lighting and have recently relized how important it could be in a picture..
I'am really disapointed that I sent this in a slide to the collge board in my portfolio and to me it looks so crappy now..
I also agree about the box being darker on that side panel you mentioned. THANKS SOOOOO MUCh for you'r helpfull comment & I'am glad you liked it!~ heart heart


note it's really late...I'll come back & edit later..HEH sweatdrop ::: sleep
PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:08 pm


ziiggystardust
not for an art class, and not as detailed as yours sweatdrop


very nice
you should keep working on shading
& maybe smoothing it out a bit.. the light area around the hand and shoe looks a bit starange and random.
keep working on it.It's alwayz best to work from observation. heart
Thanks for the comment!~ whee heart


there wanst really a direct lightning source ( if I say this right) I was in a room with on three walls windows that are the lightning sourve rofl So I always have bad light in there xd

Hasel


ziiggystardust

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:37 pm


Atin Merle
ziiggystardust
not for an art class, and not as detailed as yours sweatdrop


very nice
you should keep working on shading
& maybe smoothing it out a bit.. the light area around the hand and shoe looks a bit starange and random.
keep working on it.It's alwayz best to work from observation. heart
Thanks for the comment!~ whee heart


there wanst really a direct lightning source ( if I say this right) I was in a room with on three walls windows that are the lightning sourve rofl So I always have bad light in there xd

yeah...hard stuff lighting can be.. stressed heart
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