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 Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 2:32 am
Yay~! I am glad I could help ^.^ If you think of anything for either of my concepts please let me know <3
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 11:39 am
Personality edited- hopefully it is more self-explanatory and less contradictory. heart
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 11:57 am
Apologies for picking at your personality descriptions more, but...I'm very at a loss with the second personality. How exactly does she act good and yet still be very evil? That seems a little silly to me. It'd be better, I think, if she was just outright evil, or outright good.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 12:14 pm
Shiaree Apologies for picking at your personality descriptions more, but...I'm very at a loss with the second personality. How exactly does she act good and yet still be very evil? That seems a little silly to me. It'd be better, I think, if she was just outright evil, or outright good.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 12:35 pm
Ahhh, okay. ^^ So, that would just be Traits-- appears good, beautiful, kind, etc and then Personality: Vindictive evil, etc. Yes? ^^ Just, at first glance you'd think she's nice, not that she puts up some kind of front?
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 2:03 pm
Ou. 3nodding I like the deception inherent in this concept, and the eventual transformation. All I could really ask for is a little more information written in on the profile.
Does she have any powers? Or is all of her spiritual energy tied up in maintaining her deception?
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:23 pm
Shiaree Ahhh, okay. ^^ So, that would just be Traits-- appears good, beautiful, kind, etc and then Personality: Vindictive evil, etc. Yes? ^^ Just, at first glance you'd think she's nice, not that she puts up some kind of front?
@Coronaviridae- Powers...I'm about to do a last minute revamp on that xD She has the power to create illusions, as her entire persona is mostly illusional.
Edit: Thank you all for the helpful comments! Much luff heart
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