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Poem I wrote last night

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KinaMorii

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PostPosted: Tue May 16, 2006 10:46 am


So...I wrote a poem last night...my first ever GOOD poem...please read it!!
I wrote it for a friend who is going off to join the Marines this summer, and I wrote it because I want him to know exactly how much I care for him.

Before you go
I want to hold your hand again
Before you go
I want you to hold me because you've never actually gotten the chance
Before you go
I want the chance to tell you that I don't want you to leave
But I won't
And I can't
Because it was your dream
To leave this place
And I don't want to be the one to keep you from that
Just come back
PostPosted: Wed May 17, 2006 11:55 pm


not bad, could possibly use some polishing, but i like it. I think it is good, it has potential...

fregQAG

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