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**Edit- I'm going to switch to using this as a thread for my recently written poems. Feel free to give me as much feedback as you want.



So I wrote this poem..Not really in reference to anyone in particular..
Just empty thoughts floating around in my head put together to make things that rhyme. Thoughts? Criticisment? Praise? Go for it. While your at it, give me a 1-10.


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You lock up your heart
And throw away the key
You wont let anyone in,
Not ones you know and not me.

Somebody hurt you
Bad enough to make you cry
But who is it you wont tell
Your just waiting to die

You say you like to be alone
When your longing for embrace
For a shoulder to cry into
For some different hearts to chase

You'd like to learn to love again
Cause pain made you forget
Your afraid to learn to trust again
You'd rather be alone than regret.

You keep falling faster
Slipping out of my safetys' veiw
I can't hang on much longer
I'm afraid

thats a nice poem you have there but i dont believe it was written about no one in paticular

[Steal this and you will die a very painful death. So please don't.]

:: Deaths Nightmare ::

They call me deaths nightmare
and I'm coming for you
Your fear smells like blood
You don't know what to do

You can run you can hide
but not for very long
I'm the night air carressing
I'm the early bird's song

They call me deaths nightmare
And I'm coming for you
Your fear makes you weak
And you know it well too

I'm the devils brethren
And I'm satans best friend
I live in flames of fire
You know I'll kill you in the end

They call me deaths nightmare
And I'm coming for you
You'll die oh-so painfully
And theres nothing you can do.