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 Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 9:10 pm
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:14 pm
intresting but very lacklustre for the time being. i realise that the character are varied but there is so much fore to explore with their personalites. what do they enjoy what do they hate. Are they brave or fearfull and how do they relate to oen another. you have a the beginnings of character but they should be fleshed out. otherwise how do know how they will respond to certain situations
powerwise
Ayrestis'// to turn self into something strange, to know truth when it is not spoken, to walk the lines between what is and isn't.
an intrestign set of powers but rather vauge and hard to understand please elaborate.
Aneristic's// to become smaller than she is, to spin a web of magic.
i like these i really do but why are they those powers.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 9:33 pm
*nods* I realize that, in a way, everything it supposed to be a big vague and confusing ... but it's almost too much so.
At least for a concept. A lot of detail would be better, probably, at this stage ... then if you do get the FeeDee, you can set up the journal more in this manner ^^
Hope that helps you!
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 10:03 pm
*nods!* thanks! i don't do specifics too well, but i'm going to try and add some right now! thank you both for the comments! whee
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