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[ - Lord Ikon - ]

PostPosted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 8:23 pm


Here I will post about the current story I am writing..its in very early pre writing phases right now I just started it not to long ago. I enjoy to write although im afraid im still a novice.. so any criticizm is appreciated..no matter how bad..

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Title: Untitled so far.
Nothing to post yet. still early in development. here is all I have on the prewriting so far.

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Synopsis(i think thats the right word tell me if its not lol.)
The world ended in fire, just as the bible said it would. Demons, Evil Spirits, and the dark one himself have arisen and claimed the earth for themselves. Jesus never returned to save his followers. Most of the worlds population was either killed; or enslaved. Those who managed to escape live in small bands or clans, they are basically scavengers doing what they have to in order to survive this hell on earth.
There are rumors circulating of a band of humans plotting to overthrow the legions of hell. All traces of previous human technology have been destroyed, the only means of protection left are medieval weapons and pagan magic. Very few still believe in the Christian ways since the apocalypse. Most have returned to the religions of old.



unfortunately thats it so far im still fleshing it all out..but tell me what you think so far if you dont mind biggrin
PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 6:08 am


interesting story...
if you want more background info (on how writers do apocalypse) read "A Boy and His Dog"
it's one of my favorite apocalyptic takes... it's written by Harlan Ellison.

that whole abonedonement of christianity and taking up paganism could have a lot of implications on your story.

Considering the bible talked a lot about the devil and stuff... there are other people out there that aren't christian who believe in the bible (at least they have they're own bible that spoke of pretty much the same thing - crossed Jesus)... it be cool if your bands of humans meet other tribes who aren't into pagan and are still i.e. Jews or muslims...

Liway
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