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 Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 3:00 pm
lol, Here is a stupid one paragraph story I made. This obviously isn't my BEST work. I made it in about 10 minutes and only for people who are really bored. lol. Here goes nothing.
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One day Marvin the Martian and Marshy decided to get married. A group of fellow humans and I got invitations. The wedding was on Mars but then Mars exploded. So we went to Pluto. Pluto was getting to cold so we went to Venus. Once we were at Venus the owner said ‘get off my planet’. So Marvin blew him and his planet up. Then we went to Jupiter. Jupiter was perfect so we had the wedding there. Then when we all were trying to leave, Marvin said ‘anyone who leaves gets blown up’. But the Marshy accidentally pressed the self-destruct button and Jupiter blew up. Then we all went home. A month later we got an invitation to a divorce. It turns out that Marvin and Marshy didn’t work out. So we went to Saturn for the divorce. Once we were all there, we all got laser guns and we started a planet war. After the divorce, Marvin and Marshy split the remaining planets and they claimed them theirs except for Earth. So we went home again. The 2 months later, everyone got an invitation again. It said ‘Please come to our wedding’ and it was signed ‘Marvin the Martian and future Marshy Martian’.
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 4:12 pm
I'm not quite sure what to say.
I mean...I don't know if you want a critique of it or not, so I'm hesitant to do that. And as far as the story goes...well...meh.
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2004 10:55 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 12:51 am
I dont know what to say. Im stunned and I dont know if thats a good or bad thing
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 1:48 pm
sweatdrop Its not a real story. Just something I made up 2 years ao because I was bored. ^-^
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