█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (ASNT) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (None at the moment but is willing to be open for some teammates if the opportunity presents itself) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Oma
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ (6*3) █WEIGHT ▬ (180)
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ * varies in layers and has multiples of the same outfits. █ACCESSORIES ▬ Always carries his sword with him everywhere *Yokai inside of the sword can talk to Omamari* █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean, Fit almost perfect body, Has A high pain tolerance as his body over loads with adrenaline. Also Engulfs him self his in flame orbs and meditates in them he is virtually unfazed by fire because his tolerance is so high █SCARS - Back is covered in blade slashes from his past as his father was quite brutal in training him in Kenjutsu. █MARKINGS ▬ Left eye has a Demented marking that shows up when in combat or sensing danger.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ (Sword play) █Bonus Talent ▬ (Dust Affinity (Fire) May have his way with the flame. Able to ignite his blade causing more damage able to cut through Aura. (Duration: 5 posts) Also Able to (Over Heat) causes a flame Wave to disperse searing flesh of enemies (Range 25m in every direction of Oma) █Other Talents ▬ (Tactful Thinker- able to think with a cool head when put in a tough situation and is always looking for the upper hand in a battle.) █-Secondary Other Talent: (Gymnast he is great with movement as he has to fine smart ways to approach his opponents.) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ (Modified Kenjutsu training. while he was taught in the traditional arts he has modified it to up his pace and precision give traditional swordsman a hard time because up his fast and precise movement without exposing himself to much for attack) █Weakest Skill ▬ (Sensitive Back: though he is quite strong he is quite weary of his back after being trained by his father he has developed quite a weak point at his back.) █Other Skills ▬ (Light Weight)- Speed is everything in a sword fight. In his spare time he loves to go on runs and keep a fast pace. -Secondary Other Skill: (Memorization): Has a habit of observation and studying as well as memorizing anything that interest him that can further his prowess. Where collecting information on an opponent to his everyday life. -Tertiary Other Skill: (Persistence): When he is at his lowest point he keeps fighting till his last breath in dire situations as he was put to that position many times when we was training with his father. Which means his stamina is quite well so he can stay in the fight longer.
█LIKES █ ▬ (Taking ice baths) █ ▬ (Loyal, Brave, Out Spoken, Intelligent, Loyal, Shows humility) █ ▬ (Vanilla Ice Cream) █ ▬ (Not a very materialistic person but Loves gifts from friends, love interest. Loves experiences more that objects) █ ▬ (Animals) █DISLIKES █ ▬ (Liars, Stupidity) █ ▬ (Wasabi) █ ▬ (Have no purpose in life. Being alone forever.)
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ (Mostly Quiet almost introvert at time take a show of loyalty and trust to allow him to open up to you.) █Vernacular ▬ (Speaks with a intoxicating deep voice that you can hear in your chest when he speak people tend to listen to him when he speaks if he speaks to you) █Positive Traits ▬ (Values Loyalty and trust there for his comrades if you become one with him, also always there for his love interests as well) █Negative Traits ▬ (Very blunt and truthful when making a point. Has no care for feelings when speaking of the truth or making a point that needs to get across)
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ (Omamari was once led a simple life yet harsh life His parents immigrated from Mistal before vale lost contact with them so he was raised with Traditional Mistral Morals but not from that land as his parents were seeking a new start to create there own clan as they were out casted from mistral for being to harsh on there young as a clan and training them to be cold hearted and show mercy or love for anything in a sense using there young to indoctrinate a new way of order in the lands of Mistral so they were ousted and banished out of the Mistral lands. So they migrated to Vale as they were taking people into there lands to protect them from the Grimm. They saw that as an opportunity to start a new. His Father was quite harsh often pushing him to the brink of death at sometimes with his training. His father showed no love to Oma, no mercy to him he wanted his son to be the ultimate weapon to bring forth a new order in the lands. Until one night his village was pillaged and murdered burnt down to embers. His clan and family slaughtered. Him the sole survivor the only thing he manage to grab was able to save out of the rubble was his family sword Mitzukashi. Once unsheathing the Katana he read the words forged in the blade (Devil's Wrath) after he read those word all of his emotions came out he was beginning to embrace his rage wanting revenge at all cost for who ever did this to his world. A demonic seal began to engrave itself around his left eye. he began to hear voices and it was the Katana Mitzukashi taking to him it had given him the powers of the Yokai Mitzukashi. A seal bound for every these grant him the abilities he has to this day. At first this spike of power was almost uncontrollable it was raw dark Demented power imbuing him with abilities to control hell fire at will. After he was on his own he was searching for something he could call home something to give him purpose. That's when he discovered Beacon Academy he used this opportunity to test and gain his strength. The ability to suppress and control his emotions so that he could control the Demented Fire that rages inside of him it *He heard some rumor of Hell Fire wielding Mercenaries in these lands. This begins his hunt for Revenge.*)
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ (Name) Mitzukashi █ ▬ (Description) Sword that was forged by his family and passed down from generation to generation to bring peace in the way his father saw fit. █Melee Form ▬ (Katana 3.5FT) █Ranged Form ▬(Revolver) *very decorative fire arm. Keeps hide in coat* (Range 90m). █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ .357 Magnum █ ▬ (Revolver Has immense amount of recoil on occasions may miss. Also a last resort he is not very skilled with this weapon.)
█*NAME ▬ Yokai's Sunder █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red/ Trim of Black █*DESCRIPTION ( a form created by his rage and hatred, Unrelenting and a terrifying sight to see. Gives him the complete ability to wield the Art of Flames █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ (0-99 posts) Yokai's Blessing Increases temperature in immediate area. Give him ability to for flame pools surrounding him (3) able to block incoming projectiles and aura attacks. Also able to Flame Burst them out wards cause damage range (5m) once bursted they are rendered back to aura. Also if over encumbered with attacks pools render back to aura as well. Lasts for 5 posts. once rendered back to normal state cant got back to this state for 3 posts █*LEVEL 1▬ (100-199 posts) Revanent's Blessing. Gives him the ability to slash his sword and cause a pool of fire to create a fire wave height of wave is (7m) length of wave is (10m.) His blade is increased in length and size by triple reached up to (15m) in length and cause more damage because of the mass of the blade and his arms are engulfed in flames and his blade is engulfed in flames as a result. Can use Wave 3 time initially and then on 1 per post after the first there are used. Fade immediately after being used. also his attack are slow due to the increased mass of the blade. lasts for 5 posts and once rendered back to normal state he can enter Yokai's Blessing for 4 posts █*LEVEL 2▬ (200-299 posts) Demon's Blessing. Overall increase in Yokai's blessing and Revanet's Blessing. Fire pools increase to (5) also burst turns in to him summoning Demons that throw Fire Spears causing more damage range (10m) Fire waves increase in height and length of the way (12m Height) (30m) Length. Also his blade feels lighter and is able to swing and move faster with the blade. Body beginnings to be filled with demonic symbols and a Yokai Aura figure. Hovers just behind and Above Omamari. eyes begin to glow red. Shirt is burnt off to reveal symbols. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ (300-399 posts) Omamari's Ultimate Form Yokai's Sunder. Begins to emit Heat Wave burst stunning opponents every 2 posts. Also a second blade is formed completely out of flames which is the same length and mass as is Mitzukashi able to perform a Flames X Slash of Flames called (Devil's Wrath) range is (40m) Height is (20m) can only use every 2 posts. Pools last Twice as long so he can Use 10 Demon spears or 10 Fires waves. of the 4 Posts they do not regenerate after being used. Yokai is fully visible eyes are glow the same red as Omamari's also has a demonic erie smile fully of Demented energy. Omamari's body is covered in Glowing red symbols with the same smile as the Yokai. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Oma can only use this state 2 times a day because it is quite harmful to his aura as far as use after the second use he has almost no aura left and he is getting closer and closer to becoming a demon himself. Losing his control over his body. In this for his Strikes don't Pierce aura but stuns for a brief allowing him to make a move in. Devil's Wrath is a predictable move and can be avoided be the strike is casted.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (None at the moment but is willing to be open for some teammates if the opportunity presents itself) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Oma
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ (6*3) █WEIGHT ▬ (200)
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ * varies in layers and has multiples of the same outfits. █ACCESSORIES ▬ Always carries his sword with him everywhere *Yokai inside of the sword can talk to Omamari* █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean, Fit almost perfect body, Has A high pain tolerance as his body over loads with adrenaline. Also Engulfs him self his in flame orbs and meditates in them he is virtually unfazed by fire because his tolerance is so high █SCARS - Back is covered in blade slashes from his past as his father was quite brutal in training him in Kenjutsu. █MARKINGS ▬ Left eye has a demonic marking that shows up when in combat or sensing danger.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ (Flame Dancing. He is quite agile since his primary weapon is a katana to he is very fast and precise with his blade. stamina is great) █Bonus Talent ▬ (Dust Affinity (Fire) May have his way with the flame able to turn all dust particles and singe his blade with hell fire causing more damage in combat Last for 4 posts and able to absord dust and create and (Over Heat) Causing a singular wave that Stunning opponents a brief time leaving the open for and attack or give him the ability to bring the fight closer so he can use his blade. Regens Every 2 posts █Other Talents ▬ (Also able to use his flame to block most projectiles but a precise shot can land easily if they can punch through the flame unpredictable movement when he uses his aura to block.) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ (Modified Kenjutsu training. while he was taught in the traditional arts he has modified it to up his pase and percision give traditional swordmans a hard time because up his fast and precise movement without expose himself to much for attack) █Weakest Skill ▬ (ice can nullify is Overheats Cause him to burn out for a moment and be stunned for a post) █Other Skills ▬ (Very observant and His intelligence on the battlefield is impeccable some times able to evade attack before the can get the strike out. Only able to use every 3 posts. )
█LIKES █ ▬ (Taking ice baths) █ ▬ (Loyal, Brave, Out Spoken, Intelligent, Loyal, Shows humility) █ ▬ (Vanilla Ice Cream) █ ▬ (Not a very materialistic person but Loves gifts from friends, love interest. Loves experiences more that objects) █ ▬ (Animals) █DISLIKES █ ▬ (Liars, Stupidity) █ ▬ (Wasabi) █ ▬ (Have no purpose in life. Being alone forever.)
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ (Mostly Quiet almost introvert at time take a show of loyalty and trust to allow him to open up to you.) █Vernacular ▬ (Speaks with a intoxicating deep voice that you can hear in your chest when he speak people tend to listen to him when he speaks if he speaks to you) █Positive Traits ▬ (Values Loyalty and trust there for his comrades if you become one with him, also always there for his love interests as well) █Negative Traits ▬ (Very blunt and truthful when making a point. Has no care for feelings when speaking of the truth or making a point that needs to get across)
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ (Omamari was once led a simple life yet harsh life the young were trained to be warriors. Unrelenting with no remorse for there enemy his Father was quite harsh often make pushing him to the brink of death at sometimes with his training. His father showed no love to Oma, no mercy to him he wanted his some to be the ultimate weapon. until one night his village was pillaged and murdered burnt down to embers. family slaughtered. Him the sole survivor of his clan the only thing he manage to grab was able to save out of the rubble was his family sword Mitzukashi. Once unsheathing the Katana he read the words forged in the blade (Devil's Wrath) after he read those word all of his emotions came out he was beginning to embrace his rage wanting revenge at all cost for who ever did this to his world. A demonic seal began to engrave itself around his left eye. he began to hear voices and it was the Katana Mitzukashi taking to him it had given him the powers of the Yokai Mitzukashi.A seal bound for every these grant him the abilities he has to this day. At first this spike of power was almost uncontrollable it was raw dark demonic power imbuing him with abilities to control hell fire at will. After he was on his own he was searching for something he could call home something to give him purpose. That's when he discovered Beacon Academy he used this opportunity to test and gain his strength. The ability to suppress and control his emotions so that he could control the Hell Fire that rages inside of him it *He heard some rumor of Hell Fire wielding Mercenaries in these lands. This begins his hunt for Revenge.*)
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ (Name) Mitzukashi █ ▬ (Description) Sword that was forged by his family and passed down from generation to generation before his village was completely Slaughter and Engulfed in Hell Fire. █Melee Form ▬ (Katana) █Ranged Form ▬ N/A █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ N/A █ ▬ (Drawbacks)
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flame throwing Knives (Made of hell fire can only use 12 before having to create more. █ ▬ N/A █ ▬ N/A █ITEMS █ ▬ N/A █ ▬N/A █ ▬N/A
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Yokai's Sunder █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red/ Trim of Black █*DESCRIPTION ( a form created by his rage and hatred, Unrelenting and a terrifying sight to see. Gives him the complete ability to wield the Art of Flames █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ (0-99 posts) Yokai's Blessing Increases temperature in immediate area. Give him ability to for flame pools surrounding him (3) able to block incoming projectiles and aura attacks. Also able to Flame Burst them out wards cause damage range (5m) once bursted they are rendered back to aura. Also if over encumbered with attacks pools render back to aura as well. Lasts for 5 posts. once rendered back to normal state cant got back to this state for 3 posts █*LEVEL 1▬ (100-199 posts) Revanent's Blessing. Gives him the ability to slash his sword and cause a pool of fire to create a fire wave height of wave is (7m) length of wave is (10m.) His blade is increased in length and size by triple reached up to (15m) in length and cause more damage because of the mass of the blade and his arms are engulfed in flames and his blade is engulfed in flames as a result. Can use Wave 3 time initially and then on 1 per post after the first there are used. Fade immediately after being used. also his attack are slow due to the increased mass of the blade. lasts for 5 posts and once rendered back to normal state he can enter Yokai's Blessing for 4 posts █*LEVEL 2▬ (200-299 posts) Demon's Blessing. Overall increase in Yokai's blessing and Revanet's Blessing. Fire pools increase to (5) also burst turns in to him summoning Demons that throw Fire Spears causing more damage range (10m) Fire waves increase in height and length of the way (12m Height) (30m) Length. Also his blade feels lighter and is able to swing and move faster with the blade. Body beginnings to be filled with demonic symbols and a Yokai Aura figure. Hovers just behind and Above Omamari. eyes begin to glow red. Shirt is burnt off to reveal symbols. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ (300-399 posts) Omamari's Ultimate Form Yokai's Sunder. Begins to emit Heat Wave burst stunning opponents every 2 posts. Also a second blade is formed completely out of flames which is the same length and mass as is Mitzukashi able to perform a Flames X Slash of Flames called (Devil's Wrath) range is (40m) Height is (20m) can only use every 2 posts. Pools last Twice as long so he can Use 10 Demon spears or 10 Fires waves. of the 4 Posts they do not regenerate after being used. Yokai is fully visible eyes are glow the same red as Omamari's also has a demonic erie smile fully of demonic energy. Omamari's body is covered in Glowing red symbols with the same smile as the Yokai. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Oma can only use this state 2 times a day because it is quite harmful to his aura as far as use after the second use he has almost no aura left and he is getting closer and closer to becoming a demon himself. Losing his control over his body. In this for his Strikes don't Pierce aura but stuns for a brief allowing him to make a move in. Devil's Wrath is a predictable move and can be avoided be the strike is casted.
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Allo there! My name is KnightsRoyal, and I'll be judging your awesome profile tonight!
After discussing things with the elder gods, we have all come to the conclusion. ❖ I would recommend Resizing the Image but that is just for me to be able to read the Profile more easily. ❖ Without a Strength talent/skill: For your character's height, a healthy weight is between 152 and 199 lbs. ❖ Flame Dancing: Just so you are aware, this Primary Talent contains 3 skills in one: Attack Speed, Accuracy, and Stamina. This means while it is better than average, you won't be able to outperform someone who is specialized in one of those as their primary talent: I.e. someone who is faster can dodge your katana strikes or with endurance could outlast you in a stamina battle. ❖ Dust Affinity[Fire]: So.... this isn't really a well-explained Talent as it seems you're performing what dust normally do anyways(Apply Element to the weapon for either 3 hits or 5 posts in duration but you have it set for 4 posts in duration.) but I do see you gain access to generating a Wave of fire that.... 'Stuns'? Fire isn't known for stunning people, it's known to ignite stuff or sear flesh but not stunning. 2 post cooldown for that same wave is also a bit of a no. If you want the Flame Wave for this Talent you need to list a range of effect, remove stun, and either state how many times he can do it with either a dust shard or Dust Crystal before it fades and then give it an increased cool down. ❖ Other Talents: So you can use flames to block projectiles huh? If that is the case then your 2nd other Talent as you have not added it in will need to be Aura Manipulation or Aura Projection as that is the only way you can use Fire as a Shield, which is using Flames being controlled by your aura(i.e. Dust or semblance). ❖ Weakest Skill: Recommend naming the skill Ice Vulnerability with that description. ❖ Other Skills: You need to separate these into proper skill listing and remove the ability to predict and dodge every three posts as that is pushing on some needles. I recommend the following skill of Intelligent and Agility if you want something close to it. ❖ Weapon: Length of the Katana's weapon is needed. ❖ Flame-throwing Knives: Length of the blades is needed, clarification if these are Knives MADE of fire, Shoot Fire like small flamethrowers, or Fire Dust Knives. If these knives are made of fire dust you can only carry 8 and that takes up your Dust Shard Allotment. Considering your semblance does not make weapons, these cannot be made out of the same hellfire your semblance produces. ❖ Your character's Species and Sex needs to be established. Are they a Human, a Faunus? Are they a boy, girl, herm? ❖ IMPORTANT: Where does your character hail from in terms of Region. I understand he is an Independent character but what nation does he hail from?: Vale, Vacuo, Mistral, or Atlas? This is important to determining his Age and his Background.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (ASNT) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (None at the moment but is willing to be open for some teammates if the opportunity presents itself) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Oma
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ (6*3) █WEIGHT ▬ (180)
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ * varies in layers and has multiples of the same outfits. █ACCESSORIES ▬ Always carries his sword with him everywhere *Yokai inside of the sword can talk to Omamari* █EYES ▬ Red █BUILD ▬ Lean, Fit almost perfect body, Has A high pain tolerance as his body over loads with adrenaline. Also Engulfs him self his in flame orbs and meditates in them he is virtually unfazed by fire because his tolerance is so high █SCARS - Back is covered in blade slashes from his past as his father was quite brutal in training him in Kenjutsu. █MARKINGS ▬ Left eye has a Demented marking that shows up when in combat or sensing danger.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ (Sword play) █Bonus Talent ▬ (Dust Affinity (Fire) May have his way with the flame. Able to ignite his blade causing more damage able to cut through Aura. (Duration: 5 posts) Also Able to (Over Heat) causes a flame Wave to disperse searing flesh of enemies (Range 25m in every direction of Oma) █Other Talents ▬ (Tactful Thinker- able to think with a cool head when put in a tough situation and is always looking for the upper hand in a battle.) █-Secondary Other Talent: (Gymnast he is great with movement as he has to fine smart ways to approach his opponents.) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ (Modified Kenjutsu training. while he was taught in the traditional arts he has modified it to up his pace and precision give traditional swordsman a hard time because up his fast and precise movement without exposing himself to much for attack) █Weakest Skill ▬ (Sensitive Back: though he is quite strong he is quite weary of his back after being trained by his father he has developed quite a weak point at his back.) █Other Skills ▬ (Light Weight)- Speed is everything in a sword fight. In his spare time he loves to go on runs and keep a fast pace. -Secondary Other Skill: (Memorization): Has a habit of observation and studying as well as memorizing anything that interest him that can further his prowess. Where collecting information on an opponent to his everyday life. -Tertiary Other Skill: (Persistence): When he is at his lowest point he keeps fighting till his last breath in dire situations as he was put to that position many times when we was training with his father. Which means his stamina is quite well so he can stay in the fight longer.
█LIKES █ ▬ (Taking ice baths) █ ▬ (Loyal, Brave, Out Spoken, Intelligent, Loyal, Shows humility) █ ▬ (Vanilla Ice Cream) █ ▬ (Not a very materialistic person but Loves gifts from friends, love interest. Loves experiences more that objects) █ ▬ (Animals) █DISLIKES █ ▬ (Liars, Stupidity) █ ▬ (Wasabi) █ ▬ (Have no purpose in life. Being alone forever.)
█PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ (Mostly Quiet almost introvert at time take a show of loyalty and trust to allow him to open up to you.) █Vernacular ▬ (Speaks with a intoxicating deep voice that you can hear in your chest when he speak people tend to listen to him when he speaks if he speaks to you) █Positive Traits ▬ (Values Loyalty and trust there for his comrades if you become one with him, also always there for his love interests as well) █Negative Traits ▬ (Very blunt and truthful when making a point. Has no care for feelings when speaking of the truth or making a point that needs to get across)
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ (Omamari was once led a simple life yet harsh life His parents immigrated from Mistal before vale lost contact with them so he was raised with Traditional Mistral Morals but not from that land as his parents were seeking a new start to create there own clan as they were out casted from mistral for being to harsh on there young as a clan and training them to be cold hearted and show mercy or love for anything in a sense using there young to indoctrinate a new way of order in the lands of Mistral so they were ousted and banished out of the Mistral lands. So they migrated to Vale as they were taking people into there lands to protect them from the Grimm. They saw that as an opportunity to start a new. His Father was quite harsh often pushing him to the brink of death at sometimes with his training. His father showed no love to Oma, no mercy to him he wanted his son to be the ultimate weapon to bring forth a new order in the lands. Until one night his village was pillaged and murdered burnt down to embers. His clan and family slaughtered. Him the sole survivor the only thing he manage to grab was able to save out of the rubble was his family sword Mitzukashi. Once unsheathing the Katana he read the words forged in the blade (Devil's Wrath) after he read those word all of his emotions came out he was beginning to embrace his rage wanting revenge at all cost for who ever did this to his world. A demonic seal began to engrave itself around his left eye. he began to hear voices and it was the Katana Mitzukashi taking to him it had given him the powers of the Yokai Mitzukashi. A seal bound for every these grant him the abilities he has to this day. At first this spike of power was almost uncontrollable it was raw dark Demented power imbuing him with abilities to control hell fire at will. After he was on his own he was searching for something he could call home something to give him purpose. That's when he discovered Beacon Academy he used this opportunity to test and gain his strength. The ability to suppress and control his emotions so that he could control the Demented Fire that rages inside of him it *He heard some rumor of Hell Fire wielding Mercenaries in these lands. This begins his hunt for Revenge.*)
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ (Name) Mitzukashi █ ▬ (Description) Sword that was forged by his family and passed down from generation to generation to bring peace in the way his father saw fit. █Melee Form ▬ (Katana 3.5FT) █Ranged Form ▬(Revolver) *very decorative fire arm. Keeps hide in coat* (Range 90m). █Other Form(s) ▬ N/A █Ammo Type ▬ .357 Magnum █ ▬ (Revolver Has immense amount of recoil on occasions may miss. Also a last resort he is not very skilled with this weapon.)
█*NAME ▬ Yokai's Sunder █*AURA COLOR ▬ Red/ Trim of Black █*DESCRIPTION ( a form created by his rage and hatred, Unrelenting and a terrifying sight to see. Gives him the complete ability to wield the Art of Flames █ ▬ (General Description: In the 3 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ (0-99 posts) Yokai's Blessing Increases temperature in immediate area. Give him ability to for flame pools surrounding him (3) able to block incoming projectiles and aura attacks. Also able to Flame Burst them out wards cause damage range (5m) once bursted they are rendered back to aura. Also if over encumbered with attacks pools render back to aura as well. Lasts for 5 posts. once rendered back to normal state cant got back to this state for 3 posts █*LEVEL 1▬ (100-199 posts) Revanent's Blessing. Gives him the ability to slash his sword and cause a pool of fire to create a fire wave height of wave is (7m) length of wave is (10m.) His blade is increased in length and size by triple reached up to (15m) in length and cause more damage because of the mass of the blade and his arms are engulfed in flames and his blade is engulfed in flames as a result. Can use Wave 3 time initially and then on 1 per post after the first there are used. Fade immediately after being used. also his attack are slow due to the increased mass of the blade. lasts for 5 posts and once rendered back to normal state he can enter Yokai's Blessing for 4 posts █*LEVEL 2▬ (200-299 posts) Demon's Blessing. Overall increase in Yokai's blessing and Revanet's Blessing. Fire pools increase to (5) also burst turns in to him summoning Demons that throw Fire Spears causing more damage range (10m) Fire waves increase in height and length of the way (12m Height) (30m) Length. Also his blade feels lighter and is able to swing and move faster with the blade. Body beginnings to be filled with demonic symbols and a Yokai Aura figure. Hovers just behind and Above Omamari. eyes begin to glow red. Shirt is burnt off to reveal symbols. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ (300-399 posts) Omamari's Ultimate Form Yokai's Sunder. Begins to emit Heat Wave burst stunning opponents every 2 posts. Also a second blade is formed completely out of flames which is the same length and mass as is Mitzukashi able to perform a Flames X Slash of Flames called (Devil's Wrath) range is (40m) Height is (20m) can only use every 2 posts. Pools last Twice as long so he can Use 10 Demon spears or 10 Fires waves. of the 4 Posts they do not regenerate after being used. Yokai is fully visible eyes are glow the same red as Omamari's also has a demonic erie smile fully of Demented energy. Omamari's body is covered in Glowing red symbols with the same smile as the Yokai. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Oma can only use this state 2 times a day because it is quite harmful to his aura as far as use after the second use he has almost no aura left and he is getting closer and closer to becoming a demon himself. Losing his control over his body. In this for his Strikes don't Pierce aura but stuns for a brief allowing him to make a move in. Devil's Wrath is a predictable move and can be avoided be the strike is casted.
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Allo there! My name is KnightsRoyal, and I'll be judging your awesome profile tonight!
After discussing things with the elder gods, we have all come to the conclusion. This is your 2nd judging. ❖ Your Katana's Revolver form needs to have an effective range stated to how far it can shoot. ❖ Bonus Talent: You'll have to remove the granting your sword that fire quality as Dust normally does that, but you cannot use the dust to grant it the Aura-piercing effect you want to achieve with it. We also need size dimensions of the fire wave and a use limit per shard or crystal. ❖ Primary Talent: Please expand on this Talent as simply Swordplay could be up for interpretation and vague. What about his sword play is phenomenal. ❖ General Changes: Some of the names do not make much sense as per the description so I am suggesting at least skill name changes: Tactful Thinker -> Calm Mind, Light Weight -> Finesse Striker, Persistance -> Enduring ❖ I do want you to know that Memorization is being interpretated as having 3 skills in one, which is still fine but we want you to understand that it'll be slightly above average for each skill as to if you were to have it just be Good Memory. ❖ -Semblance-❖ ❖ First off, it is very hard to understand this semblance due to Grammar. It has been recommended that we could have someone to edit and fix the grammar mistakes in this semblance if you want it done. ❖ Level 0: Clarification is needed on several parts. Are these Pools on the ground, are they floating around him? Are they actually pools of fire or spheres of fire? What are the dimensions of these 'Pools' since they act as a shield? How hot are the flames naturally to normal objects and nature? How strong are the Flame Bursts from these Pools? How much damage can they take before breaking back down into Aura? Also, when it breaks down to Aura, you are aware you do not get it back correct? ❖ Level 1: Edits are needed for this, when creating these 'Waves' of fire you need to reduce the height of the waves dramatically as these are not wave slashes but rather literally walls you are throwing.at someone. I recommend dropping the height from 7m to 1-1.5m and reducing the width from 10m to 5m. Range is needed to be stated for these wave slashes from being fired. Blade length needs to be changed from being a passive 15m increase to either be reduced in range or act like Gin's sword in bleach. Example. You will also need to reduce the amount of waves you can create initially down to 1, making it 1 per post each time. ❖ Level 1: Clarifications are needed: Considering the fact your flames are soul-piercing, do they still follow the natural laws of fire and are stopped by physical objects like a stone wall and windows? How strong are these Waves when they hit someone? How heavy does your sword become when you enter this form? Can he use Level 0's Flame pools while in Level 1? ❖ Level 2: Clarifications are needed: Flame bursts now become Demons throwing Fire Spears, others have mis-read this due to lack of proper periods but do these Fire Spears also generate the waves of fire or are just spears? Do the demons remain after being summoned or are the flame bursts just visages of demons that throw fire spears and fade after bursting? How light does the sword become and is it only lighter in Level 0 or Level 1? As Level 1 would become contradictive if the sword is suppose to be heavier and lighter at the same time, unless that is the purpose to counterbalance. How big is the Yokai Aura figure? ❖ Level 2: Edits are needed for the Fire Wall once more, reducing the size from 12m height to at least 3-4m in height, length reduce from 30m to 20m and range is still needing to be listed. ❖ Level 3: Parts of this semblance have been out-right denied as it does not fit the Motif and do too much: Emitting a Heat Wave burst that stuns is a straight no-go as it gives no way to react and fire is not known to stun people. The pools and fire waves doubling to this amount are also denied as there is not enough information to list how this form works to use these abilities as well so Level 3 will need rework. ❖ Level 3: Edits required for some parts of the level: Your X-Slash is a bit on the large size for 40x20m, it is recommended to drop the size by half at least. ❖ Level 3: Clarifications are required, does the 2nd blade of fire/aura remain throughout the form or is it only for the X-Slash technique? ❖ Drawbacks: Despite the fact this semblance can only be used twice a Day, it does not give it a clear idea of what can and cannot be used or count. Does entering the forms in general count to the daily use? You'll need to remove the Stun part in this drawback as you're no longer stunning with any fire from this semblance. However new drawbacks will need to be added. ❖ ❖
* varies in layers and has multiples of the same outfits.
