█HEIGHT ▬ 5’2” █WEIGHT ▬ 105 lbs █SCARS/TATTOOS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Her Faunus Trait is not one that is visible, it’s a network of subdermal organs capable of generating and storing, and discharging Electrical charge.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Manipulation Onyxia is adept at applying what she's learned about people to manipulate them. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬Electrical Discharge, She is able to generate electrical charge naturally and can absorb electrical charge to a small degree and release it in pulses on physical contact up to 50,000 volts (power of a taser). She can sustain it up to 10 (2 posts) seconds before she drains her organs of their stored charge, requiring her to wait 24 hours for it to build back up or needing to artificially recharge it, which renders her immobile for the 2 minutes it takes to artificially recharge (10 posts). Alternatively, she can release it in bursts of shorter duration. Note: She requires consistent contact or a stable conductive medium to maintain the discharge. IE: If her opponent is in water, they have an uninsulated length of metal both are in contact with, or direct physical contact. █Other Talents ▬ Observant: She has learned to be very observant of those around her as well as her environment, aiding in her ability to read a person as well as a situation. Memory: She has an exceptional memory, able to recall minute or seemingly insignificant details and retain more information than average for a longer time. Anonymity (She is exceptional at keeping her identities separate from each other and covering her a**) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Reading People, She has learned to read others quite well, learning what kind of person they are and what might sway them to her benefit. █Weakest Skill ▬ Strength. She prefers manipulating others. This, coupled with her size and her unusual abilities means she has spent little time contesting raw muscular strength with others. █Other Skills ▬ Patience & Maintaining Composure █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬Onyxia is a confident person, but not foolish. Strong-willed, manipulative, cunning, and controlled, she has great potential. However, she is bitter and resentful towards humans, almost blindingly so. She has a strong urge to aid those who are ignored, though her focus has been placed on Faunus.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ She is unremarkable, legally speaking, with the exception that she had begun to train to be a huntress, but quit. Her parents, she has no memory of. She has very little information about them and what she does have leads her to believe she was the result of a one-night stand. Her mother died giving birth and she was raised in an orphanage her entire life. Faunus children were kept separate from the human ones and, often times, it seemed the only reason Faunus orphans were accepted at all was because it was required. Very seldomly were any of the faunus children adopted, and all too frequently had she seen them booted out with next to nothing and told to figure it out for themselves. Much like had been done with her. Due to her lack of any physical signs of being a faunus, she made headway at the start. At first, she thought perhaps just the Orphanage was that way. But, here and there, she had little episodes where she unintentionally discharged electricity and soon discovered humans were unnerved by her. She’d had episodes before and had been enrolled at signal back when she was at the orphanage in order to ‘get her s**t together’ as her not-so-kindly matron put it. But, she ultimately dropped out as this was no semblance at work and just a biological process of hers.
As years progressed, it became harder for her to find employment and she saw that while, on the whole, humans and Faunus coexisted, it seemed all too common humans simply endured her kind because of laws or fear. It pained her to see faunus constantly disrespected, being spoken about behind their backs, and be treated like animals in some cases. She simply couldn’t stand it. She needed to do something. She began to rally and protest, but it quickly became clear this just wasn’t enough to change anything. Gathering with other protesters who she had met at rallies, she began to form her own group in secret. She started off with only a dozen or so recruits. But, she knew they’d need force eventually and decided to create two separate branches, selecting two individuals from her initial recruits to head them. Quickly, their numbers began to swell as her members lobbied and kept their eyes out for recruits, never publicly approaching them to join what is now known as “The Crimson Fang”.
Today, The Crimson Fang is considered an extremist rights group with terroristic tendencies. They Lobby both publicly and in secret to elevate the station of all faunus. Obviously, with a history of attacking military installations, abductions, blackmail, extortion, and suspected assassination and espionage, those of their numbers who rally publicly are often rounded up. Though, she's made sure the ones who have a visible presence are the least informed. Whenever one is questioned, all the authorities are able to get are the names of the others who they've captured and locations of abandoned structures with no trail to any group. The first appearance of The Crimson Fang in public view was a rally outside the Capitol Building that quickly turned into a violent skirmish, ending with dozens on both sides dead and many more injured, including bystanders. It ended with a holodisplay appearing out of nowhere, massive in size, playing both Audio and Video of a local official discussing the sale of several Faunus citizens into slavery and a panning view of the horrible conditions in which they were kept. The Event became known as the Crimson Dawn Incident. Although the official was arrested and his assets seized, Onyxia and her inner circle knew the only reason was to save face. The Fang had started the fight, but, with that public display, it was very clear that they felt pressured by inaction to do so, so, the government tried to play it off as they would do something in response to appease the masses.
█FUTURE PLANS ▬ I have no outright plans to have this character killed, though, I am not opposed to it. If they were to die, I believe it should be in an incident relating to an attempt to bring down the Crimson Fang. I leave the final call to crew on this.
█DESIGNATED CONTROLLERS ▬ I may play her if asked, though, my plan is to hand control of her over to a member of Crew.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Reformation is a somewhat unusual weapon, and one she usually leaves at her headquarters. Located in an underground network of improvised bunkers under the front of a bookshop, her office is at the heart of it all. Dingy, sparse, and grey, the flag with her emblem stands behind her desk. This flag is in fact Reformation. A six-foot flagpole bearing the logo of the Crimson Fang on a white backdrop, the flag is segmented and unravels into a streamer of sorts, the base of the pole a spearhead. The pole can also separate into a sword measuring 3 feet from pommel to tip and a single barrel sawed-off auto-loader shotgun combo with the sword end being the section attached to this flag. The entire weapon, including the wire-mesh woven into the flag’s fabric is also highly conductive for electricity. Every component of the weapon contains metal of some sort in some measure, so, while it is excellent at transferring electricity, this also means it is exceptionally efficient at transferring heat. The shotgun has a 10-round mag and requires both hands to reload. And due to the recoil, it cannot fire rapidly. █Melee Form ▬ Spear █Ranged Form ▬ Shotgun █Other Form(s) ▬ Sword (Paired with shotgun after separating the spear into two parts) █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ It is not intended for long range
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ A basic 9mm handgun █ITEMS █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Friction Manipulation █*AURA COLOR ▬ Cyan █*DESCRIPTION Her Semblance allows her to alter the Friction of surfaces and substances around her. She needs a continuous path of connection from her to the edge of her range to affect something. This does not mean that she has to be touching it. However, if she’s attempting to change the friction of the ground she’s on, if her general range extends over a gap, she cannot affect the other side of the gap unless she finds a way to directly bridge that gap. She can affect solid surfaces, air, and water. In regards to air, manipulating it's friction can reduce effectiveness of projectile weapons dramatically, slowing the projectiles. Furthermore, doing so can render a melee weapon strike about as effective as swinging it underwater. █ ▬ (General Description: In the 4 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels. Please keep in mind that most NPCs will be at 50 posts, and level 3 NPCs will be exceptionally rare. In addition NPC semblances must be kept simple.) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ She can alter the friction of one Surface in a 25 foot radius around her and can maintain this change for up to five posts. Alternatively, she can do the same to a medium for half the radius. The effect encompasses the full area in a 360 degree 3-dimensional space around her as it would naturally apply.(1:2 Cooldown).(0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1▬ She can alter the friction of 1 Surface and 1 Medium in a 50/25 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 6 posts. The effect encompasses the full area in a 360 degree 3-dimensional space around her as it would naturally apply.(1:2 Cooldown)(100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ She can alter the friction of 1 Surface and 1 Medium in a 75/38 foot radius around her or 2 Mediums in a 38 foot radius or 2 Surfaces in a 75 foot radius and can maintain this control up to 7 posts. The effect encompasses the full area in a 360 degree 3-dimensional space around her as it would naturally apply.(1:3 Cooldown)(200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3▬ She can alter the friction of 2 Surfaces in a 100 foot radius and 2 Mediums in a 50 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 8 posts. The effect encompasses the full area in a 360 degree 3-dimensional space around her as it would naturally apply.(1:4 Cooldown)(300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Mediums refers to Air and Liquids specifically, such as the air around her or a body of water nearby. She cannot alter someone’s bodily friction at all or that of something they are holding not connected to a Surface she’s altering, ie: their weapon. She is not able to use this ability to hinder someone’s breathing either. Altering the friction on air will not affect supersonic projectiles such as bullets and cannot completely eliminate melee weapon threats. While a hammer or other bludgeoning weapon may be next to useless, a blade can still cut and a stab is still effective, only slowed. She cannot alter friction to a degree to remove it entirely or make it impossible to move. There will always be a workable amount of friction. Those with the ability to manipulate the mediums being altered, ability to adjust mass, who use massless attacks or use supersonic weapons will have a lessened disadvantage from reduced friction. Massless attacks are attacks comprised of Light, Dark, or pure energy. Things such as electricity, fire, gravity, etc. Greater Strength: LV0: the average person may be able to power through a Medium She has affected, provided they have something to push against it, but, it would likely be all they can manage to do. LV1: Someone who has trained to be stronger than average may be able to power through a Medium she has altered given the same conditions as LV0. LV2&3: Someone who has a natural aptitude for building strength to be stronger than average may be able to power through a Medium she has altered given the same conditions as LV0. Tiers of Strength following the tiers of Average, Trained Skill, Ability, Semblance. The limitations for each Level needed to pass get weaker the stronger you are. IE: Someone who is trained with strength will have an easier time powering through Level Zero than someone who has no skill in strength, and someone who has a natural talent for strength will find it easier at LV 1 than someone who trained. Characters who have a semblance that enhances strength can push through any medium she alters with little complication if they use their semblance.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Eddy_Soul5
Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2020 5:57 pm
OSIRIS Osiris's base text is standard. Osiris's Speech is in Bolded Crimson.
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█HEIGHT ▬ 5’2” █WEIGHT ▬ 105 lbs █SCARS/TATTOOS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Her Faunus Trait is not one that is visible, it’s a network of subdermal organs capable of generating and storing, and discharging Electrical charge.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Manipulation Onyxia is adept at reading people and manioulating them. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬Electrical Discharge, She is able to generate electrical charge naturally and can absorb electrical charge to a small degree and release it on physical contact up to 50,000 volts (power of a taser). She can sustain it up to 10 (2 posts) seconds before she drains her organs of their stored charge, requiring her to wait 24 hours for it to build back up or needing to artificially recharge it, which renders her immobile for the 2 minutes it takes to artificially recharge (10 posts). Alternatively, she can release it in bursts of shorter duration. █Other Talents ▬ Large Scale Organization (This translates to being very observant and having excellent memory), Anonymity (She is exceptional at keeping her identities separate from each other and covering her a**) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Reading People, She has learned to read others quite well, learning what kind of person they are and what might sway them to her benefit. █Weakest Skill ▬ Strength. She prefers manipulating others. This, coupled with her size and her unusual abilities means she has spent little time contesting raw muscular strength with others. █Other Skills ▬ Patience & Maintaining Composure █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬Onyxia is a confident person, but not foolish. Strong-willed, manipulative, cunning, and controlled, she has great potential. However, she is bitter and resentful towards humans, almost blindingly so. She has a strong urge to aid those who are ignored, though her focus has been placed on Faunus.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ She is unremarkable, legally speaking, with the exception that she had begun to train to be a huntress, but quit. Her parents, she has no memory of. She has very little information about them and what she does have leads her to believe she was the result of a one-night stand. Her mother died giving birth and she was raised in an orphanage her entire life. Faunus children were kept separate from the human ones and, often times, it seemed the only reason Faunus orphans were accepted at all was because it was required. Very seldomly were any of the faunus children adopted, and all too frequently had she seen them booted out with next to nothing and told to figure it out for themselves. Much like had been done with her. Due to her lack of any physical signs of being a faunus, she made headway at the start. At first, she thought perhaps just the Orphanage was that way. But, here and there, she had little episodes where she unintentionally discharged electricity and soon discovered humans were unnerved by her. She’d had episodes before and had been enrolled at signal back when she was at the orphanage in order to ‘get her s**t together’ as her not-so-kindly matron put it. But, she ultimately dropped out as this was no semblance at work and just a biological process of hers.
As years progressed, it became harder for her to find employment and she saw that while, on the whole, humans and Faunus coexisted, it seemed all too common humans simply endured her kind because of laws or fear. It pained her to see faunus constantly disrespected, being spoken about behind their backs, and be treated like animals in some cases. She simply couldn’t stand it. She needed to do something. She began to rally and protest, but it quickly became clear this just wasn’t enough to change anything. Gathering with other protesters who she had met at rallies, she began to form her own group in secret. She started off with only a dozen or so recruits. But, she knew they’d need force eventually and decided to create two separate branches, selecting two individuals from her initial recruits to head them. Quickly, their numbers began to swell as her members lobbied and kept their eyes out for recruits, never publicly approaching them to join what is now known as “The Crimson Fang”
█FUTURE PLANS ▬ I have no outright plans to have this character killed, though, I am not opposed to it. If they were to die, I believe it should be in an incident relating to an attempt to bring down the Crimson Fang. I leave the final call to crew on this.
█DESIGNATED CONTROLLERS ▬ I may play her if asked, though, my plan is to hand control of her over to a member of Crew.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Reformation is a somewhat unusual weapon, and one she usually leaves at her headquarters. Located in an underground network of improvised bunkers under the front of a bookshop, her office is at the heart of it all. Dingy, sparse, and grey, the flag with her emblem stands behind her desk. This flag is in fact Reformation. A six-foot flagpole bearing the logo of the Crimson Fang on a white backdrop, the flag is segmented and unravels into a streamer of sorts, the base of the pole a spearhead. The pole can also separate into a sword and shotgun combo with the sword end being the section attached to this flag. The entire weapon, including the wire-mesh woven into the flag’s fabric is also highly conductive for electricity. █Melee Form ▬ Spear █Ranged Form ▬ Shotgun █Other Form(s) ▬ Sword (Paired with shotgun after separating the spear into two parts) █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ It is not intended for long range
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ A basic 9mm handgun █ITEMS █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Friction Manipulation █*AURA COLOR ▬ Cyan █*DESCRIPTION Her Semblance allows her to alter the Friction of surfaces and substances around her. She needs a continuous path of connection from her to the edge of her range to affect something. This does not mean that she has to be touching it. However, if she’s attempting to change the friction of the ground she’s on, if her general range extends over a gap, she cannot affect the other side of the gap unless she finds a way to directly bridge that gap. She can affect solid surfaces, air, and water. In regards to air, manipulating it's friction can reduce effectiveness of projectile weapons dramatically, slowing the projectiles. Furthermore, doing so can render a melee weapon strike about as effective as swinging it underwater. █ ▬ (General Description: In the 4 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels. Please keep in mind that most NPCs will be at 50 posts, and level 3 NPCs will be exceptionally rare. In addition NPC semblences must be kept simple.) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ She can alter the friction of one medium or surfaces (Surfaces count as 1) in a fifty foot radius around her and can maintain this change for up to five posts. (1:2 Cooldown).(0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1▬ She can alter the friction of Two Mediums or Surfaces and One Medium in a 75 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 6 posts. (1:2 Cooldown)(100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ She can alter the friction of All Mediums and Surfaces 100 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 7 posts. (1:2 Cooldown)(200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3▬ She can alter the friction of All Mediums and Surfaces 150 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 8 posts. (1:2 Cooldown)(300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Mediums refers to Air and Liquids specifically, such as the air around her or a body of water nearby. She cannot alter someone’s bodily friction at all or that of something they are holding not connected to a Surface she’s altering, ei their weapon. She is not able to use this ability to hinder someone’s breathing either. Altering the friction on air will not affect supersonic projectiles such as bullets and cannot completely eliminate melee weapon threats. While a hammer or other bludgeoning weapon may be next to useless, a blade can still cut and a stab is still effective, only slowed. She cannot alter friction to a degree to remove it entirely or make it impossible to move. There will always be a workable amount of friction. Those with greater strength, ability to manipulate the mediums being altered, ability to adjust mass, who use massless attacks (ie Shadow or Light), or use supersonic weapons will have a lessened disadvantage from reduced friction.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Eddy_Soul5
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Allo there! My name is KnightsRoyal, and I'll be judging this profile tonight!
❖ Primary Talent: Manipulation: There's a double in this skill, please remove the reading people part in this skill and re-word it to be primarily focused on Manipulation and as to how she manipulates. ❖ Faunus Trait: Electrical Discharge: So she can sustain 50,000 Volts(Which is the Voltage Strength of a Taser) for up to 10 seconds. Is the electricity a pulse like a Standard Police Taser or continuous? If it's like a standard Police Taser then please include she needs to maintain touch to the target to apply for the full 2 posts. ❖ Other Talents: Rather than having it blanket named, please remove the Large Scale Organization as it's not an actual Talent name, rather it's just something she has. Then add in Observant and Memory as the actual Talent names with minor descriptions. ❖ While the Background is Two Paragraphs long, she is 40 years old. I request a Third Paragraph that explains as to what she has been doing as the 'Head' of the Crimson Fang Organization and how she leads and expects them to follow. Any big listed events that she spear-headed with her group? Considering this is also a Criminal Organization, we cannot have stuff be hidden or vague. If she is commanding as big of a group this background is alluding too, I need details as to how she ran it for I would assume at least a decade. ❖ The Weapon is a bit hard to imagine but please design a proper weapon weakness. As recently discovered, a Shotgun has a surprising reach. While we know the Spear/Flagpole is 6 ft long, we don't know the length of the Sword, or what type of shotgun she is using. ❖ Semblance: Considering the strength of actually Manipulating the friction of space, I suggest reducing her range of influence on all her abilities. 25 at 0th level, 40 at 1st level, 60 at 2nd Level, and 90 at 3rd level. ❖ Semblance: While stating that the Medium refers to Air and Liquid, how much of that space can you influence at any given time? If she alters a space of air within her range, how much of it is changed? Please give a range of any influenced space of her. ❖ Semblance: Levels 2 and 3 need to reduce from altering friction of everything in her range to how many spaces of frictions she can influence in regards to the previous statement. ❖ Semblance: Levels 2 and 3 needs an increased cooldown ratio, I would suggest 1:3 and 1:4 Respectively. ❖ When it comes the weakness of the semblance, I need a valued statement as to what level of Greater Strength would be able to beat a friction at what stated Level. ❖ Considering Massless attacks, I would suggest adding Fire and explosives as they aren't affected by friction of air, and if they are, they would ruin friction and create holes in the semblance parts.
█HEIGHT ▬ 5’2” █WEIGHT ▬ 105 lbs █SCARS/TATTOOS ▬ █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Her Faunus Trait is not one that is visible, it’s a network of subdermal organs capable of generating and storing, and discharging Electrical charge.
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Manipulation Onyxia is adept at reading people and manioulating them. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬Electrical Discharge, She is able to generate electrical charge naturally and can absorb electrical charge to a small degree and release it on physical contact up to 50,000 volts (power of a taser). She can sustain it up to 10 (2 posts) seconds before she drains her organs of their stored charge, requiring her to wait 24 hours for it to build back up or needing to artificially recharge it, which renders her immobile for the 2 minutes it takes to artificially recharge (10 posts). Alternatively, she can release it in bursts of shorter duration. █Other Talents ▬ Large Scale Organization (This translates to being very observant and having excellent memory), Anonymity (She is exceptional at keeping her identities separate from each other and covering her a**) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Reading People, She has learned to read others quite well, learning what kind of person they are and what might sway them to her benefit. █Weakest Skill ▬ Strength. She prefers manipulating others. This, coupled with her size and her unusual abilities means she has spent little time contesting raw muscular strength with others. █Other Skills ▬ Patience & Maintaining Composure █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬Onyxia is a confident person, but not foolish. Strong-willed, manipulative, cunning, and controlled, she has great potential. However, she is bitter and resentful towards humans, almost blindingly so. She has a strong urge to aid those who are ignored, though her focus has been placed on Faunus.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ She is unremarkable, legally speaking, with the exception that she had begun to train to be a huntress, but quit. Her parents, she has no memory of. She has very little information about them and what she does have leads her to believe she was the result of a one-night stand. Her mother died giving birth and she was raised in an orphanage her entire life. Faunus children were kept separate from the human ones and, often times, it seemed the only reason Faunus orphans were accepted at all was because it was required. Very seldomly were any of the faunus children adopted, and all too frequently had she seen them booted out with next to nothing and told to figure it out for themselves. Much like had been done with her. Due to her lack of any physical signs of being a faunus, she made headway at the start. At first, she thought perhaps just the Orphanage was that way. But, here and there, she had little episodes where she unintentionally discharged electricity and soon discovered humans were unnerved by her. She’d had episodes before and had been enrolled at signal back when she was at the orphanage in order to ‘get her s**t together’ as her not-so-kindly matron put it. But, she ultimately dropped out as this was no semblance at work and just a biological process of hers.
As years progressed, it became harder for her to find employment and she saw that while, on the whole, humans and Faunus coexisted, it seemed all too common humans simply endured her kind because of laws or fear. It pained her to see faunus constantly disrespected, being spoken about behind their backs, and be treated like animals in some cases. She simply couldn’t stand it. She needed to do something. She began to rally and protest, but it quickly became clear this just wasn’t enough to change anything. Gathering with other protesters who she had met at rallies, she began to form her own group in secret. She started off with only a dozen or so recruits. But, she knew they’d need force eventually and decided to create two separate branches, selecting two individuals from her initial recruits to head them. Quickly, their numbers began to swell as her members lobbied and kept their eyes out for recruits, never publicly approaching them to join what is now known as “The Crimson Fang”
█FUTURE PLANS ▬ I have no outright plans to have this character killed, though, I am not opposed to it. If they were to die, I believe it should be in an incident relating to an attempt to bring down the Crimson Fang. I leave the final call to crew on this.
█DESIGNATED CONTROLLERS ▬ I may play her if asked, though, my plan is to hand control of her over to a member of Crew.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Reformation is a somewhat unusual weapon, and one she usually leaves at her headquarters. Located in an underground network of improvised bunkers under the front of a bookshop, her office is at the heart of it all. Dingy, sparse, and grey, the flag with her emblem stands behind her desk. This flag is in fact Reformation. A six-foot flagpole bearing the logo of the Crimson Fang on a white backdrop, the flag is segmented and unravels into a streamer of sorts, the base of the pole a spearhead. The pole can also separate into a sword and shotgun combo with the sword end being the section attached to this flag. The entire weapon, including the wire-mesh woven into the flag’s fabric is also highly conductive for electricity. █Melee Form ▬ Spear █Ranged Form ▬ Shotgun █Other Form(s) ▬ Sword (Paired with shotgun after separating the spear into two parts) █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ It is not intended for long range
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ A basic 9mm handgun █ITEMS █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Friction Manipulation █*AURA COLOR ▬ Cyan █*DESCRIPTION Her Semblance allows her to alter the Friction of surfaces and substances around her. She needs a continuous path of connection from her to the edge of her range to affect something. This does not mean that she has to be touching it. However, if she’s attempting to change the friction of the ground she’s on, if her general range extends over a gap, she cannot affect the other side of the gap unless she finds a way to directly bridge that gap. She can affect solid surfaces, air, and water. In regards to air, manipulating it's friction can reduce effectiveness of projectile weapons dramatically, slowing the projectiles. Furthermore, doing so can render a melee weapon strike about as effective as swinging it underwater. █ ▬ (General Description: In the 4 following bullets please describe how your semblance improves over levels. Please keep in mind that most NPCs will be at 50 posts, and level 3 NPCs will be exceptionally rare. In addition NPC semblences must be kept simple.) █*LEVEL 0 ▬ She can alter the friction of one medium or surfaces (Surfaces count as 1) in a fifty foot radius around her and can maintain this change for up to five posts. (1:2 Cooldown).(0-99 posts) █*LEVEL 1▬ She can alter the friction of Two Mediums or Surfaces and One Medium in a 75 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 6 posts. (1:2 Cooldown)(100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ She can alter the friction of All Mediums and Surfaces 100 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 7 posts. (1:2 Cooldown)(200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3▬ She can alter the friction of All Mediums and Surfaces 150 foot radius around her and can maintain this control up to 8 posts. (1:2 Cooldown)(300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Mediums refers to Air and Liquids specifically, such as the air around her or a body of water nearby. She cannot alter someone’s bodily friction at all or that of something they are holding not connected to a Surface she’s altering, ei their weapon. She is not able to use this ability to hinder someone’s breathing either. Altering the friction on air will not affect supersonic projectiles such as bullets and cannot completely eliminate melee weapon threats. While a hammer or other bludgeoning weapon may be next to useless, a blade can still cut and a stab is still effective, only slowed. She cannot alter friction to a degree to remove it entirely or make it impossible to move. There will always be a workable amount of friction. Those with greater strength, ability to manipulate the mediums being altered, ability to adjust mass, who use massless attacks (ie Shadow or Light), or use supersonic weapons will have a lessened disadvantage from reduced friction.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Ghost254
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Eddy_Soul5
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Allo there! My name is KnightsRoyal, and I'll be judging this profile tonight!
❖ Other Talent: Observant: Upon careful observation of this skill, it seems to be pulling double shift again. Keep this talent to being observant to the environment around her rather than that and people please. ❖ Primary Weapon: Shotgun Form: Please list the effective range of the shotgun in the weapon forms, how many rounds it can fire before reloading, and what is the primary ammo-type of the shotgun: Birdshot, Buckshot, or Slug Rounds. ❖ Other Weapon: Basic 9mm Handgun: Please list the effective range of the 9mm Handgun here as well. Along with how many rounds it can fire before reloading. ❖ Semblance: Drawback: It has been pointed out that the drawbacks determining the level versus strength are a bit poorly written. Recommendation: Recorrect the statements to where Lv 0 can be ignored by those with strength talent of Strongest Skill or higher, Level 1 by Other Talent and higher, Level 2&3 by Secondary and Primary Strength. ❖ Semblance: Inquisitive: There are stated confusions on the semblance friction. It is recommended to add in how slowed projectiles, melee attacks, and bodily movement are in each level. This can be done via Percentages or fractions. ❖ Faunus/Bonus Talent: Electrical Discharge: It's been brought up that a standard police taser has a wide variety of effects, please state the most common end result of this attack: is it to leave scorch marks while shocking, stun the individual, shut their systems down, or does it vary by person to person? Please pick one of them.
