█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress (the literal definition of a huntress) and a student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue (her eyes will glow in a golden yellow collor when an she creates an arrow untill the arrow disapears). █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile, can dodge since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 12. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where her father finally told her there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 180 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to 200 meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, 20 normal arrows and 8 dust infused arrows (she loves using ice dust). █ ▬ while the string isnt fregile, it can still easily cut. making its primary form completly useless.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade that effect up to a radius of 15 feet (5 per mission) █ ▬ Smoke bomb that effect up to a radius of 5 feet (5 per mission) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create golden glowing arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (about 1 meter) from the area the arrow landed. Once Valleria teleport to an arrow, they disappears (or after 3 posts of not being teleported to).Once an arrow is selected to teleport to she is unable to change to a different arrow do to the others disappearing █*LEVEL 0 ▬Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley; she can teleport up to 50 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, the other arrows will disappear as well. she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley; she can teleport up to 60 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 4 posts. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley; she can teleport up to 70 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 3 posts. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley;she can teleport up to 90 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 2 posts. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ its often very predictable to where Valleria will show up since the arrows are a bright shade of yellow and glowing with light, making her teleporting spots very easy to spot
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress of the Outskirts of Vale
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim and almost never misses. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile and quick-footed, and can dodge very easily and attack at the same time, since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 13. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where she found out that there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 150 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to dozens of meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, She uses a lot of different kinds of dust arrows but prefers using ice arrows. █ ▬ The weapon can be quite heavy, often puzzling people how such a small frame can carry it.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade (5) █ ▬ Smoke bomb (5) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬ Small firework rockets to attach on the arrows for longer range.
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow certain distances and with almost flawless accuracy. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (based on her level) from the area the arrow landed. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 50 meters. After 1 post, she can fire another arrow again. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 2 arrows; she can teleport up to 60 meters. After 2 posts, she can fire arrows again. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 4 arrows, she can teleport up to 70 meters. After 3 posts, she can fire arrows again. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 6 arrows, she can teleport up to 90 meters. After 3 posts, she can fire arrows again.(300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ The arrows are created and come directly from Valleria's aura. The more she shoots those arrows, the less she can protect herself defensively with her aura.
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Apathetic Writer
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- Firstly, I love this character! The background and personality will make for a really fun teammate!!
- The only thing id ask, is in the primary talent you can just include the 'Has an undaunted sense of aim'. This will include how strong her accuracy is, you don't need to state that she almost never misses.
Primary Weapon - Just a few smaller changes here:
- So within your profile (and this will expand eventually) you are allowed 8 rounds of dust and 3 rounds of raw dust. Having the ice arrows is a great idea, but can you explain if this is ice dust or something else? It also wouldn't be unlimited. You need to state how many different rounds of dust you have, so you can keep track of how many you are using.
- How many firework rockets does she have per event/thread? This isn't something that would be acceptable every 2 posts for example, but as a cool move now and again for sure! I'd maybe say 2/3 per event, since they don't have to be for a fight.
Semblance
- This semblance is really cool, it reminds me of FF15!
Level 0
- So you need to state the maximum range in which her arrows can travel at this level. Also, teleporting 50 metres around the arrow is too large an area. At lower levels, students are figuring their powers out etc. I'd adjust this to her being able to fire her arrows at a maximum distance of 50 metres, but she teleports directly to the arrow. This creates more room for development through the levels and doesn't create an overpowered semblance.
- Being able to use a semblance every two posts is too powerful, especially at level 0. I'd adjust this to something more approvable such as every 4/5 posts
Level 1
- You need to explain what happens when she fires two arrows and they land, can she teleport between them or can she only choose one to move to? IF she can teleport between them you need to include how long the post cooldown is for it and the distance she must be from them in order to teleport.
- You can begin introducing the radius teleportation, but it has to be smaller than what you have stated. A radius of 60 metres on top of having perfect accuracy and shooting two arrows is just a little too large. A long bow can shoot massive distances, so moving something like 10 feet away from an arrow is still her covering a huge distance.
All Levels
- The cooldowns need to be a little bit longer for this ability, it is such as strong semblance that could easily just become unfair to fight against if she is able to teleport technically every second or third post.
- What happens to the arrows once she teleports? Do they disappear or can she go to the ones she made earlier?
- If you include the maximum range that her arrows can cover, just so we can assess the maximum range she can cover when she uses this.
- Again, just let us know what happens once she's fired the arrows. It would be over powered if she can fire three arrows in one post and teleport to all three within that. So just think about what you fancy! whee
”Thank you!”
If you need anything explained in more detail, please don’t hesitate to ask myself or crew! I'm still a bit newer to this process so I also reserve the right to change and adapt questions if crew inform me of something I didn't notice!
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress (the literal definition of a huntress) and a student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue (her eyes will glow in a golden yellow collor when an she creates an arrow untill the arrow disapears). █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile and quick-footed, and can dodge very easily and attack at the same time, since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 13. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where she found out that there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 150 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to dozens of meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, normal arrows and 8 dust infused arrows (she loves using ice dust). █ ▬ The weapon can be quite heavy, often puzzling people how such a small frame can carry it.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade (5 per mission) █ ▬ Smoke bomb (5 per mission) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬ Small firework rockets to attach on the arrows for longer range. (3 per mission)
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create golden glowing arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (about 1 meter) from the area the arrow landed. Once Valleria teleport to an arrow, it disappears (or after 3 posts of not being teleported to). █*LEVEL 0 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 2 arrow; she can teleport up to 50 meters, and only once per 2 posts. After 8 posts, she can fire another arrow again. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 2 arrows; she can teleport up to 60 meters, and only once per 2 posts. After 6 posts, she can fire arrows again. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 2 arrows, she can teleport up to 70 meters, and only once per 2 posts. After 4 posts, she can fire arrows again. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 2 arrows, she can teleport up to 90 meters, and only once per 2 posts. After 3 posts, she can fire arrows again. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ The arrows are created and come directly from Valleria's aura. The more she shoots those arrows, the less she can protect herself defensively with her aura.
narxfang
xLulie
Deadly_Tiger
Youroka Kage
Alysian Virago
1234boo75
Apathetic Writer
”IT’S ME – LU!”
Here to judge your profile today is ME! Lucky you!
Selmblance
- The only thing I can see here is with regards to your cooldowns.
So for example 'Valleria is able to shoot 2 arrows; she can teleport up to 60 meters, and only once per 2 posts. After 6 posts, she can fire arrows again. (100-199 posts)'
This to me reads that she can shoot both of her arrows in one post, and every second post can teleport to each arrow. The cooldown begins once she has shot the arrows so she can technically use this ability for 4 posts, then making it technically a 2 post cooldown. Does that make sense?
If this is the case (as it reads) then this needs to be adjusted a bit more. Her level 4 ability would become unlimited and she would technically be able to just teleport every 2 posts, fire arrows, teleport every 2 posts, and so on.
If this is NOT the case and the cooldown resets when she teleports for example, please just change it so it reads like that. If it is, just have a look at adjusting the cooldowns, its a great ability but to be able to use it so often would just make a fight with her for a close range individual rather dull.
”Thank you!”
If you need anything explained in more detail, please don’t hesitate to ask myself or crew! I'm still a bit newer to this process so I also reserve the right to change and adapt questions if crew inform me of something I didn't notice!
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress (the literal definition of a huntress) and a student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue (her eyes will glow in a golden yellow collor when an she creates an arrow untill the arrow disapears). █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile and quick-footed, and can dodge very easily and attack at the same time, since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 13. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where she found out that there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 150 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to dozens of meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, normal arrows and 8 dust infused arrows (she loves using ice dust). █ ▬ The weapon can be quite heavy, often puzzling people how such a small frame can carry it.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade (5 per mission) █ ▬ Smoke bomb (5 per mission) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬ Small firework rockets to attach on the arrows for longer range. (3 per mission)
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create golden glowing arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (about 1 meter) from the area the arrow landed. Once Valleria teleport to an arrow, it disappears (or after 3 posts of not being teleported to). █*LEVEL 0 ▬Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 50 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 60 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 4 posts. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 70 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 3 posts. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 90 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 2 posts. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ The arrows are created and come directly from Valleria's aura. The more she shoots those arrows, the less she can protect herself defensively with her aura.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress (the literal definition of a huntress) and a student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue (her eyes will glow in a golden yellow collor when an she creates an arrow untill the arrow disapears). █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile and quick-footed, and can dodge very easily and attack at the same time, since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 13. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where she found out that there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 150 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to dozens of meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, normal arrows and 8 dust infused arrows (she loves using ice dust). █ ▬ The weapon can be quite heavy, often puzzling people how such a small frame can carry it.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade (5 per mission) █ ▬ Smoke bomb (5 per mission) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬ Small firework rockets to attach on the arrows for longer range. (3 per mission)
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create golden glowing arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (about 1 meter) from the area the arrow landed. Once Valleria teleport to an arrow, it disappears (or after 3 posts of not being teleported to). █*LEVEL 0 ▬Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 50 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 60 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 4 posts. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 70 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 3 posts. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 90 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 2 posts. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ The arrows are created and come directly from Valleria's aura. The more she shoots those arrows, the less she can protect herself defensively with her aura.
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✘ Judge, Jury, and Executioner ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄ Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.
Judgement:
Archetype:
1) "Other Skills ▬ Very agile and quick-footed, and can dodge very easily and attack at the same time, since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans."
You have Agile, quick footed, dodging, great reflexes, faster reaction time. I can see how these can be related and all so that it is three...but please make this more concise as 3 other skills.
History:
1) "So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where she found out that there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon."
Beacon would be in vale though. So was the fathers trip from atlas forests to vale then or?
Weapon:
1) Primary weapon: How far can it shoot up to? It just says dozens of meters, but need more specific.
2) Primary weapon: Need an actual drawback as "The weapon can be quite heavy, often puzzling people how such a small frame can carry it." hasn't seemed to come up much in rp as an actual drawback.
3) Flash grenade should have radius of 15 feet
4) Smoke bomb has a diameter of 10 feet ( or radius of 5 feet)
5) How much do the fireworks rockets increase range and does it do more besides that?
6) How many regular arrows will she have on her at any given time?
Semblance:
1) Need another drawback since "The arrows are created and come directly from Valleria's aura. The more she shoots those arrows, the less she can protect herself defensively with her aura." is a weakness all semblances inherently have.
∰-Conclusion
This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows. ✘ Status: Inquiring ▄ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ▄
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress (the literal definition of a huntress) and a student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue (her eyes will glow in a golden yellow collor when an she creates an arrow untill the arrow disapears). █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile, can dodge since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 12. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where her father finally told her there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 180 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to 200 meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, 20 normal arrows and 8 dust infused arrows (she loves using ice dust). █ ▬ while the string isnt fregile, it can still easily cut. making its primary form completly useless.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade that effect up to a radius of 15 feet (5 per mission) █ ▬ Smoke bomb that effect up to a radius of 5 feet (5 per mission) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create golden glowing arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (about 1 meter) from the area the arrow landed. Once Valleria teleport to an arrow, it disappears (or after 3 posts of not being teleported to). █*LEVEL 0 ▬Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 50 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 60 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 4 posts. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 70 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 3 posts. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 1 arrow; she can teleport up to 90 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another arrow for 2 posts. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ its often very predictable to where Valleria will show up since the arrow is a bright shade of yellow and glowing with light, making her teleporting spot very easy to spot
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet) █*PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any) █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Valley █OCCUPATION ▬ Free-range Huntress (the literal definition of a huntress) and a student
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 165 cm █WEIGHT ▬ 55 kg
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ Likes to dress in hunter’s clothing, particularly elf-like clothing. █ACCESSORIES ▬ A Ring with a Sapphire Gem on it █EYES ▬ Bright Teal Blue (her eyes will glow in a golden yellow collor when an she creates an arrow untill the arrow disapears). █BUILD ▬ Athletic, Slender █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ None
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Has an undaunted sense of aim █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Good at stealth. █Other Talents ▬ Very comfortable in cold, snowy areas. She can also bake amazing cinnamon cookies. (she loves those) █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Her archery skills. █Weakest Skill ▬ She cannot do any damage without her weapon. █Other Skills ▬ Very agile, can dodge since she has great reflexes, and has a faster reaction time than normal humans.
█LIKES █ ▬ Listening to Music █ ▬ Polite, Well-mannered people. █ ▬ Any kind of noodle or spaghetti. █ ▬ Headphones! █ ▬ Birds █DISLIKES █ ▬ Noisy and dramatic people. █ ▬ Anything with nuts in them. █ ▬ Hot, humid weather. █ ▬ Snakes █ ▬ Extremely dark places. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Valleria is a wordless sentinel with loner tendencies; she loves to stay quiet mostly in serene and calm places, such as the tranquility of the woods. She will usually keep silent and observe things from afar before engaging, and only speaks with people she particularly favors and knows well or when she has to speak-up in terms of the situation. █Vernacular ▬ Her voice is very neutral and soothing, with a slightly deep somber. █Positive Traits ▬ Even though she is a loner, she will do anything in her power to help people she cares about. █Negative Traits ▬ She has a rather frosty demeanor towards most people. She is easily annoyed and will usually straightforwardly ignore people if they manage to rub her the wrong way.
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ The smell of the burning field was what greeted her earliest memory when she woke up from her uneasy slumber. How long she had been on that ravaged battlefield, she did not know. But eventually an old man who had watched the whole thing in the safety of his abode above the hill found her and carried her semi-conscious form back to the safety of his hut. Ever since then he had told her stories of how he had found her in the middle of that scathed battlefield, with human bodies everywhere and no sign of the dead grim.
Valleria had always been skilled at hunting, as she constantly loved to hunt due to what her adopted father figure taught her. And she had a talent for it, too. From the smallest of animal to the biggest grim one can take alone; she was always used to using a long bow even before getting ‘Frozen Fangs’ at the tender age of 12. She never liked being at home alone; she preferred to keep herself busy, coming from party to party and from fleeting meeting to meeting. Valleria would sneak away on her own towards unwonted adventures, always going off to secret places, where she spent most of her time doing particularly nothing and just lying on the fresh snow and listening to music while resting.
Three years have passed since she was discovered in the burning field. For a time, Velleria felt like she was on top of the world. The forests bordering Atlas was her backyard, and she couldn’t have asked for anyone as caring as adopted father. Her past didn’t bother her all that much. After all, the past is in the past and she just wanted to get through every day by practicing with her bow skills and killing things that threatened the boarders of her huge forest home. But after some time, she got curious to how life was in the city. So, one day, she asked her father to take her on one of his trips to Atlas.
There is when she discovered a whole new life-style in the city. She was excited to be there, especially since its where her father finally told her there was a school for hunters: a school none other than Beacon. That was when her adopted father agreed to let her go there when she was of age, continuing to tell her that he won’t be around forever, but that his last wish for her was to become the greatest hunter that she can aspire to be.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Frozen Fangs █ ▬ A blue bow with bladed limbs about 180 cm long. █Melee Form ▬ Glaive with blades on both sides of the weapon. █Ranged Form ▬ A long-bow made out of durable metal that can shoot up to 200 meters. █Other Form(s) ▬ None █Ammo Type ▬ Physical, 20 normal arrows and 8 dust infused arrows (she loves using ice dust). █ ▬ while the string isnt fregile, it can still easily cut. making its primary form completly useless.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Flash grenade that effect up to a radius of 15 feet (5 per mission) █ ▬ Smoke bomb that effect up to a radius of 5 feet (5 per mission) █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Quiver █ ▬
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Teleportation Shooting █*AURA COLOR ▬ Golden Yellow █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Valleria can create golden glowing arrows made out of and imbued with her own aura; she is able to shoot out of her long-bow. Once the arrows lands on any objective, Valleria is able to teleport herself anywhere near a radius (about 1 meter) from the area the arrow landed. Once Valleria teleport to an arrow, they disappears (or after 3 posts of not being teleported to).Once an arrow is selected to teleport to she is unable to change to a different arrow do to the others disappearing █*LEVEL 0 ▬Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley; she can teleport up to 50 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, the other arrows will disappear as well. she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1▬ Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley; she can teleport up to 60 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 4 posts. (100-199 posts) █*LEVEL 2▬ Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley; she can teleport up to 70 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 3 posts. (200-299 posts) █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Valleria is able to shoot 3 arrows in a volley;she can teleport up to 90 meters for the next 3 posts. After teleporting to an arrow or the arrow disappears, she cannot shoot another set of arrows for 2 posts. (300-399 posts) █*DRAWBACKS ▬ its often very predictable to where Valleria will show up since the arrows are a bright shade of yellow and glowing with light, making her teleporting spots very easy to spot
