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PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2018 8:02 pm


[Alysian Virago & Remilyn]
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╫ C O R E ╫


        *NAME ▬ Remilyn
        *AGE ▬ 17
        *FACTION ▬ Independent
        *ROLE ▬ Student
        *SEX ▬ Female
        *SPECIES ▬ Butterfly Faunus

        *CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet)
        *PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any)
        NICKNAME(S) ▬ Remi
        OCCUPATION ▬ Student



╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

        HEIGHT ▬ 5'1"
        WEIGHT ▬ 109 lbs

        HAIR ▬ Pale sea foam green
        CLOTHINGUsual Attire Her clothes are usually somewhat tight fitting with the added frills and lace for style. They cover the essentials but not much more. Often she prefers to go bare foot but when she doesn't she wears tall boots.
        ACCESSORIES ▬ Lots of braided and beaded bracelets and necklaces, vines, flowers, etc.
        EYES ▬ Pale sea foam green
        BUILD ▬ Petite, athletic build
        TATTOOS ▬ Just like the other members of her tribe, Remi is marked with their insignia. Hers is located in the center of her sternum beneath her chest.
        SCARS ▬ Remi's body is marked heavily by her own trials. The most prominent of which are those that she earned in her battle with the beowolf. Three long slashes along her back as well as matching ones on her right thigh and left forearm.
        MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES
Beautiful iridescent wings adorn her back, sprouting from each shoulder blade and shimmering with the same pastel colors that mark her hair and her eyes.

╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

        NATURAL ABILITIES
        Primary Talent ▬ Evasive maneuvers: Remi is exceedingly good at staying just out of ones reach, flitting around them and dodging their attacks until they exhaust themselves.
        Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Butterfly eyes are unique and function differently compared to the human eye. Although butterflies may not have a human’s sharp eye and tend to be nearsighted, their vision beats ours in other ways! The different colours and patterns that butterflies can see are invisible to the human eye. This is because their eyes are better at picking up fast moving objects and they can distinguish ultraviolet and polarised light, which the human eye cannot.
        Other Talents ▬ Increased Stamina: Remi is highly energetic. She can usually outlast most others and exert herself further before growing tired herself when it comes to training, combat, and exercise.
        Speed: Since she is always putting her self at risk by putting the lives of even her enemies above her own, in order to stay alive and survive she has had to learn and train to be quicker than most to avoid getting caught by her opponents
        LEARNT ABILITIES
        Strongest Skill ▬ Defensive Manuevers: Through training and learning Remi has found away to put her inability to harm others into a working combat style. Her fighting style revolves around a series of defensive te unique that keep her safe without hurting her opponent.
        Weakest Skill ▬ While Remi's eyes can pick up a variety of things the human eye can't and give her a distinct advantage, she is nearsighted which severely impacts her aim as well as other factors in battle. More so, Remi cannot fly when she is wet or cold. Other body motor skills suffer as well if she gets too cold. Remi is not particularly large or strong and combined with her fact that she would rather die herself than be the cause of another's pain, she is usually left vulnerable.
        Other Skills ▬ Flexibility, she can bend and twist her body further than most. Music: She has a good ear and can pick up most instruments though singing has always been her favorite. Dancing: She has always loved to dance and fly through the trees and does so with a graceful charm.


        LIKES
        ▬ Dancing, gardening, singing
        ▬ Friendly, humorous, kind
        ▬ Fruit juices
        ▬ Flowers, seeds, pollen
        ▬ Trees
        DISLIKES
        ▬ Rude, ignororant
        ▬ Anything Solid
        ▬ Cages, technology
        ▬ Cold, snow or rain
        ▬ Remi is afraid of the water and cannot swim but she also hates the feeling of being restrained, be it by ropes, a person, or a cage.
        PERSONALITY TRAITS
        Nature ▬ Remi is an extreme extrovert. Hardly ever does she get shy and she is never embarrassed by her words her actions, even when she should be. She is overwhelmingly sweet and would quite literally never hurt a fly, even if her own life depended on it. By definition she is a lover not a fighter. When in dangerous situations, she would rather use evasive maneuvers to either trap of knock out her opponent without causing pain or harm. The girl is easily excitable, even over the little things. She has a tendency to be loud and boisterous and has very little regard to personal space. She also cries a lot, and very easily, both because she is happy or when she is sad. However she doesn't get angry and never tells unless it's the excited kind of yelling.
        Vernacular ▬ Remi has a melodic voice, high in its pitch more akin to a soprano. Neither her voice or her expression will ever hide how she is feeling. The girl is very expressive in her tone and her expressions, however anger or annoyance is not something one would ever hear or see from her. She also tends to speak rather loudly, often forgetting when its appropriate to use an outside voice and when its not.
        Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, Generous, Loveable, Curious, Gentle
        Negative Traits ▬ Naive, Easily Influenced, Won't protect t herself if it means hurting another

╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

        BACKGROUND ▬ Remilyn was born into the Rhopalocera tribe, a group of butterfly faunus living in a beautiful forest, far away from the means of normal society. The tribe's purpose was to raise warriors, elite female warriors. Beautiful as they may be, the butterflies were trained and capable. Beautiful but alluring. Deadly in their grace and precision. Dangerous, but they also weren't the type to seek out war or conflict. They had their feuds with the moths nearby who often ransacked their storage and food supplies, but other than that the tribe kept mostly to themselves. They fought, trained, and protected each other from any harm that sought them out. They worked and learned together, but that didn't mean there wasn't any time for fun. Remi lived a happy childhood full of fun and laughter. Often the girl could be found flitting through the trees, chasing after her older sister, that melodic giggle always trailing behind her. Remilyn had always been completely enthralled by her older sister, following in her footsteps from the day she could walk. They were always close, and Remi looked up to Koryn, always aspiring to be more like her. However, from the day that training started, it was always apparent that there was something a little different about the pale haired girl. While most of the tribe would fight to protect and defend, going as far as to hurt, maim, and possibly kill if it became a necessity, that was not the case with Remi. She would not fight, even if her own life defended on it. Many times she was struck down for that major flaw, Elders trying to teach the child a lesson before the consequences became much more dire than a bruise or a scrape. They needed her to learn before she was faced with a life or death situation, because anyone who knew Remi knew she would pick her own death over violence.

        Despite her unwillingness to submit to the ways of her tribe and her unorthodox way of going about things, As Remi grew she progressed and as she progressed she excelled. While she still refused to raise a hand to any other living creature, she found a way to survive just the same. Remilyn's combat style, if it could really be called that, revolved around defensive and evasive maneuvers. Often times she could go up against aged tribe members, much more advance in their skill than she was, and win simply because she managed to stay out of their grasp long enough. The girl had always had a remarkable amount of energy and stamina, combined with her noninvasive fighting style, she was often able to outlast her peers and win by default. Granted, she never came out of the matches unscathed, but she succeeded all the same and by doing so, proved her worth. It was discovering her semblance that truly allowed her to excel and surpass the expectations of everyone including herself. By manipulating the flowers around her and enhancing the effects of their pollen, she was able to use the outcome to her advantage and often take out her opponents without ever laying a finger on them. It allowed her to contain them, so that they could not hurt or or anyone else, without her having to harm them either. The semblance was a perfect fit for the girl and only furthered to prove her worth and her place within the tribe.

        However, despite her success, the journey was a long and grueling one. As a part of the Rhopalocera tribe, training starts from a very young age. They also go through their very first trial before ever even reaching puberty. If successful in this trial, the butterfly is marked with the insignia of the tribe and participates in the cherished ceremony that marks them an official member. Remi failed her first trial many times, something that was almost unheard of within this group of butterflies. Time and time again they would send her alone into the wilds to face the moths and whatever other dangers awaited and time and time she would only just escape with her life. Often times the trial had to be observed closely and when it became clear it was going to end in death, they stopped it short before its icy grasps could grab her. Remilyn was forced to return with the shame of failing such an important part of her culture, time and time again. However, she never gave up and she never let it get her down. Despite her struggles, there was always a smile upon her face. The day that she finally passed that first trial and was welcomed into the tribe with open arms and cheers was one of the happiest of her life. She wears her insignia with pride, but her struggles didn't stop there. Along the road of discovering her own very unique combat style, Remi failed many other trials and progressed through the ranks much slower than other members. Often she was left gravely injured, but she always set to work to train and try once more. She was detirmined to succeed and prove her worth, just as Koryn had done, and in time she did just that.

        As the years progressed, issues began arising within their happy little tribe. The pesky nuisance that were their moth neighbors were one thing, easy enough to handle, but more and more grim kept finding their way in. The attacks resulted in many injuries, some fatal. It was a dark time for the tribe. Close as they were. While separate families existed within the tribe, they considered themselves all tied together with the bonds of family. Hence the reason no one carried a last name. The men were working over time, treating the injured as well as recrafting damaged weapons. The woman were giving it their all, fighting with every once of strength within them to keep their homeland safe. It was after a particularly gruesome battle that Remi's older sister left the tribe to attend the prestigious school for hunters and huntress, Beacon Academy. Here she would learn how to better take on the grim and she could return to protect the tribe once more. Remi was said to see her go, but she also knew that Koryn had always been curious of the outside world. For her this was going to be an adventure of a life time. It was a curiosity Remi shared. The girl wanted nothing more than to leave with her sister, but the elders didn't believe she was ready. Not after the nearly detrimental outcome of her last trial. Despite her disappointment Remi would offer her sister a teary eyed smile and a long hug before bidding her farewell. She would miss her, but she was also happy for her.

        The woods almost seemed different without Koryn, but that was likely mostly Remi's own opinion. In her sister's absence, she found herself spending more and more time with a friend that had long been by her side. A boy near her age, apprenticing as a blacksmith. It was him who had designed and crafted her weapon for her, as well as adding to it the small blade that Koryn had given her long ago. A blade that while Remi hated the idea of ever using, had promised Koryn she would keep it on her just in case. Caelum engineered it to be hidden unless activated by a hidden switch, which was ideal for Remi for actually having to see the thing on her person made her sick to her stomach. In the weeks and months that followed, Remi grew increasingly close to this boy. It made the separation from her sister a bit easier and while the woods still felt empty without her, he helped fill the void. They spent most of their days together, apart from their own separate training. They were on a walk through the woods when true tragedy struck. Giving Remi's nature and Caelum's lack of battle experience, they shouldn't have been out on their own. By the time they realized that fact, it was much too late. They were ambushed by a hoard of moths. They were outnumbered, but it was something that Remilyn would have been able to handle under normal circumstances. Enacting her semblance, she ensnared the faunus in the tangles stems and vines of her flowers while using the mutated pollen to cause them to grow drowsy. All she had to do was keep them there long enough and they would surely fall asleep, giving them a chance to escape. No one would be injured, they would get gone safe and sound, and no one would no the wiser. That hope came crashing down when the grim appeared on sight. Caelum was too far away. She could get to him before the Beowolf slashed its gigantic claws through his chest. But even if she had been able to get to him, what would she have done? Thrown herself in front of him to die on his behalf. That's exactly what she would have done and she would have done it gladly. Instead she turned just in time to see claws rip through tender flesh, felt the blood, hot and sticky as it splashed against his chest. The thud of his body hitting the ground was the most deafening sound to have ever breached her ears. Her blood had run cold, heart racing frantically in her chest.

        She thought all was lost until she saw the slightest rise and fall of his chest, strained with the efforts. What happened next was something that haunts the girl to this day. Rushing forward, she switched that secret button that turned her staff into a spear. The battle was wearing and gruesome. She did her best to distract it without truly attacking. Her aura was draining rapidly, trying to keep the moths in place while still battling the grim. By the time the battle neared completion, Remi was drenched in read, crimson oozing from several slashes and cuts marking her pale skin. She acted in desperation, striking the beast through the chest and watching it turn to dust. The feeling that consumed her was sickening. It was the first creature she had ever killed and it did nor matter that from were foul beasts. It did not matter it had tried to kill Caelum. It didn't matter that it had tried to kill her. All that mattered was the fact it had died at her hands, she had taken its life. The sobs that shook her small, battered body were heart wrenching. Streams of tears smearing through the blood streaked across her face. It took all of her effort to craw to Caelum's limp body. Gentle fingers pressed against his throat. There was a pulse, but it was faint and she did not have the strength or the energy to carry him back on her own. Not to mention the moths were still struggling to escape her snare. She fought to keep the effects of her semblance active for as long as possible. The moths eventually fell unconscious, but so did she. She had never pushed herself that far past her limitations.

        Eventually the elders of the tribe had coming looking. To this day Remi is unsure of how she managed to open her eyes again. She doesn't remembered much, but she remembered the gruesome sounds. She remembered being so utterly terrified to open her eyes again, but just as strong as her desire, was the feeling that if she didn't, something horrible would happen. Only, something horrific had already happened. Her vision was blurry, black creeping in along the edges. But the image of those lifeless bodies littering the ground was one that would be permanently burned into the back of her mind. It didn't matter that they were moths. It didn't matter that they were her supposed to be her enemy. It didn't even matter that they had tried to kill her. All that mattered was that their lives had been wiped away so needlessly. Her mouth tasted sour as bile rose in the back of her throat. She swallowed hard, biting down on her lip. That was when she saw him. She couldn't make out his features, not clearly, but she remembered his dark hair and how it was such a stark contrast to his pale skin, opalescent in the moonlight. More clearly, she remembered his eyes, blue like the sky, the sun shining from the center. She knew they would kill him too, and even though she hardly had the strength left to move, she couldn't let them too it. She screamed, so loud it burned her throat and made her lungs ate. She screamed until her Elders looked at her, turning their astonished expressions towards her tiny frame. Tears poured from her sea foam eyes, splashing down her cheeks, smearing through dirt and blood alike. When she spoke, her voice was left hoarse and week. "Don't. Please don't. Don't kill him." She begged, she begged until they begrudgingly agreed. Only, it wouldn't be without consequence. Her heart blood ran cold at the metal gleaming viciously beneath the stars, flashing as it came down towards the boys wings. More tears burned her eyes, blurring her already blurred vision. She cried for him, and while it was not nearly enough, it was the only thing left for her to do. She did not have the strength to move, already it was failing away, her consciousness tugged away by the darkness until she collapsed once more. The Elders carried her and Caellum back when they were finished with their gruesome task, leaving the moth boy to fend for himself. When Remi finally woke days later, it was to learn that Caelum had not made it. All of her efforts had been for not. She had taken a life to safe his and he had died anyway. The girl was a wreck, but after seeing what she had accomplished on the battlefield, the tribe agreed to to do the one thing she had never thought they would. They were sending her to Beacon after Koryn. So with a heavy heart, she packed her things and braved a whole new world.

╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

        PRIMARY WEAPON
        ▬ Flower Power
        ▬ Remi's weapon is a simple staff crafted from the tree bough from that of her homeland, measuring 4 ft 7 in. While it has three forms the transformations between each are very minimal. The weapon its self does not change much but rather allows her to use it in three different ways. The staff itself is decorated with both fiber enriched ribbons and flowers, making it look rather harmless. However there are purposes behind such cute flourishes.
        Melee Form ▬ The primary form is a wooden staff that simply looks like a tree branch with flowers sprouting from the ends. When activating her semblance she can manipulate the pollen on these flowers for added effects. Wrapped around the staff are flower fiber crafted ribbons, bright in their colors, that she can control when her semblance is active. If her semblance isn't active, she can chose to leave the ribbons tied around the staff or use them much like baton ribbons. Whether the ribbons are being controlled or not, they allow her to trip or restrain people without actually hurting them using the staff as a defensive mechanism, she can use it the same way, hitting and tripping, possibly even knocking one unconscious if it comes down to it, but never leaving lasting harm.
        Ranged Form ▬ As simplistic and natural as the staff looks, inside are some basic mechanics that allow her to launch flower seeds from the tip in massive quantities as well as at high rates of speed. The aim is not very a accurate as the seeds are not intended to be shot at actual targets. If they happened to hit a person, they wouldn't cause any really harm and would hurt less than someone tossing a pebble at you. The true purpose of this form is to fuel her semblance. By launching the seeds she can then use her semblance to both grow them as well as manipulate the pollen within the flowers. She can launch the seeds up to 50 feet.
        Other Form(s) ▬ This final form is a form that Remi has used only once, as well as one that was not put there by her choice. After getting into a number of dangerous situations where she had no way to lethally harm either an enemy or grim, her sister made her promise to keep this last form as a last result to protect herself. This final form is a hidden blade that has to be activated with a hidden button. The blade, 5 inches in length, is a rounded point that protrudes from the tip of her staff, turning it into a spear.
        Ammo Type ▬ Physical: Seeds.
        ▬ Other than the spear form of her weapon, the staff can not cause any lethal damage. It is used for defense and evasion but can leave her rather vulnerable. The fact that it is made out of wood, even though it is durable, it is stil weaker than other weapons and can be more easily damaged or destroyed in a fight if she is not careful. It is also flammable.

        OTHER WEAPONS
        ▬ 
        ▬ 
        ▬ 
        ITEMS
        ▬ Seeds 20 packages of 25




╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

        *NAME ▬ Razzle Dazzle
        *AURA COLOR ▬ Pastel Sea Foam Green
        *DESCRIPTION 
        ▬ Remi's semblance gives her the ability to rapidly excel the growth of flowers as well as further manipulate their stems, petals, and pollen. She can strengthen and lengthen stems in order to ensnare and/capture her opponents. The petals are good way to obscure ones vision or act as distraction if she needs to make a speedy escape. The core of her semblance focuses around the ability to manipulate and diffuse different types of pollen that cause different types of reactions when they are touched or breathed in. She doesn't have to touch a flower in order to effect it, but it does have to be within range of her semblance. Once the field is set, it cannot move, however she can maneuver herself around it. Beyond that, all pollen, petals, and vines can only be controlled and expanded within that same range. She can only use one type of pollen per semblance use. After she deactivates her semblence, the pollen will remain in the air but will lose all of its potency. It will slowly disperse on its own.
        *LEVEL 0 ▬ In this level Remi is able to control the flowers and diffuse pollen into the air of 20 by 20 foot circle kept within 3 feet of her person. She can only create and manipulate one type of pollen in which breathed in will cause drowsiness and will cause an individual to fall asleep if they are exposed to it for 3 posts. While she can choose to disperse the pollen with in the entire field, she can also chose to isolate it into smaller clouds. She can maintain the control of the flowers for 4 posts. Drowsiness will remain for 2 posts once they have been exposed and 4 posts if they have fallen asleep. After using her ability, Remi will need a 10 post cool down before using it again.
        *LEVEL 1▬ As her abilities improve, Remi is able to expand the field of her flowers to a circle of 30 by 30 feet circle that must be kept 5 feet from her person. She also unlocks a new type of pollen that clouds ones senses, blurs vision, mutes hearing, and disrupts scent. It is effective as soon as one is exposed. The effects will wear off after 2 posts of being removed from the pollen. Remi is now able to maintain her control for 6 posts while still requiring a 10 post cool down.
        *LEVEL 2▬ With further training Remi will be able to control the plants within a 40 foot circle that must be kept within 7 feet of her person. Once again she unlocks another type of pollen. It will cause increased difficulty of movement and motor functions the moment one is exposed and complete paralysis if exposed for more than 5 posts. The effects will wear off within 2 posts of being removed from the field. She is now able to maintain her control for 8 posts while needing a 12 post cool down.
        *LEVEL 3 ▬ In this final level her range expands to a field of 50 by 50 feet circle that must be within 9 feet of her person. The final type of pollen she unlocks is actually a poison. It is completely painless but will continually drain ones aura the longer they are exposed. It will not kill an enemy, but has the potential to drain a person to complete exhaustion and possibly cause them to pass out. Aura is not instantly regained by removing oneself from the field, however, it will not continue draining their aura once they've escaped and their aura will replenish at normal speeds afterwards. They must remain in the field for 10 consecutive posts to be drained completely, otherwise their aura is simply drained by 10% for every post they remain. Remi can maintain her control for 10 posts while still needing a 12 post cool down.
        *DRAWBACKS ▬ First and foremost, Remi is not immune to her own pollen. If she were to be exposed she would face the same effects, as would her team. For that reason Remi has to use a lot of focus to be sure she does not accidently hit her allies with its potency. Beyond that, all it would take to defend against her ability would be to never even enter her field of work or to escape it. Once the effects wear off her ability becomes essentially useless. If she drains herself entirely, she will be faced to deal with the same symptoms of whatever pollen she was manipulating before passing out until her aura has been restored.


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2018 11:01 am


Alysian Virago
[Alysian Virago & Remilyn]
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╫ C O R E ╫


        *NAME ▬ Remilyn
        *AGE ▬ 16
        *FACTION ▬ Independent
        *ROLE ▬ Student
        *SEX ▬ Female
        *SPECIES ▬ Butterfly Faunus

        *CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet)
        *PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any)
        NICKNAME(S) ▬ Remi
        OCCUPATION ▬ Student



╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

        HEIGHT ▬ 5'1"
        WEIGHT ▬ 109 lbs

        HAIR ▬ Pale sea foam green
        CLOTHINGRemi in her usual attire. Her clothes are usually somewhat tight fitting with the added frills and lace for style. They cover the essentials but not much more. Often she prepers to go bare foot but when she doesn't she wears tall boots.
        ACCESSORIES ▬ Lots of braided and beaded bracelets and necklaces, vines, flowers, etc.
        EYES ▬ Pale sea foam green
        BUILD ▬ Petite, athletic build
        TATTOOS ▬ Just like the other members of her tribe, Remi is marked with their insignia. Hers is located in the center of her sternum beneath her chest.
        SCARS ▬ Remi's body is marked heavily by her own trials. The most prominent of which are those that she earned in her battle with the beowolf. Three long slashes along her back as well as matching ones on her right thigh and left forearm.
        MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES
Beautiful iridescent wings adorn her back, sprouting from each shoulder blade and shimmering with the same pastel colors that mark her hair and her eyes.

╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

        NATURAL ABILITIES
        Primary Talent ▬ Evasive maneuvers: Remi is exceedingly good at staying just out of ones reach, flitting around them and dodging their attacks until they exhaust themselves.
        Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Butterfly eyes are unique and function differently compared to the human eye. Although butterflies may not have a human’s sharp eye and tend to be nearsighted, their vision beats ours in other ways! The different colours and patterns that butterflies can see are invisible to the human eye. This is because their eyes are better at picking up fast moving objects and they can distinguish ultraviolet and polarised light, which the human eye cannot. Butterfly eyes are made up of many smaller image forming eyes called ommatidia. One of the main advantages of these eyes is that it provides the animal with increased wide field of vision. In fact, it is said that a butterfly can see approximately 314 degrees around itself. This helps them identify potential predators and food or water sources.
        Other Talents ▬ Increased Stamina: Remi is highly energetic. She can usually outlast most others and exert herself further before growing tired herself when it comes to training, combat, and exercise.
        Speed: Sonce she is always putting her self at risk by putting the lives of even her enemies above her own, in order to stay alive and survive she has had to learn and train to be quicker than most to avoid getting caught by her opponents
        LEARNT ABILITIES
        Strongest Skill ▬ Defensive Manuevers: Through training and learning Remi has found away to put her inability to harm others into a working combat style. Her fighting style revolves around a series of defensive te unique that keep her safe without hurting her opponent.
        Weakest Skill ▬ While Remi's eyes can pick up a variety of things the human eye can't and give her a distinct advantage, she is nearsighted which severely impacts her aim as well as other factors in battle. More so, Remi cannot fly when she is wet or cold. Other body motor skills suffer as well if she gets too cold. Remi is not particularly large or strong and combined with her fact that she would rather die herself than be the cause of another's pain, she is usually left vulnerable.
        Other Skills ▬ Flexibility, she can bend and twist her body further than most. Music: She has a good ear and can pick up most instruments though singing has always been her favorite. Dancing: She has always loved to dance and fly through the trees and does so with a graceful charm.


        LIKES
        ▬ Dancing, gardening, singing
        ▬ Friendly, humorous, kind
        ▬ Fruit juices
        ▬ Flowers, seeds, pollen
        ▬ Trees
        DISLIKES
        ▬ Rude, ignororant
        ▬ Anything Solid
        ▬ Cages, technology
        ▬ Cold, snow or rain
        ▬ Remi is afraid of the water and cannot swim but she also hates the feeling of being restrained, be it by ropes, a person, or a cage.
        PERSONALITY TRAITS
        Nature ▬ Remi is an extreme extrovert. Hardly ever does she get shy and she is never embarrassed by her words her actions, even when she should be. She is overwhelmingly sweet and would quite literally never hurt a fly, even if her own life depended on it. By definition she is a lover not a fighter. When in dangerous situations, she would rather use evasive maneuvers to either trap of knock out her opponent without causing pain or harm. The girl is easily excitable, even over the little things. She has a tendency to be loud and boisterous and has very little regard to personal space. She also cries a lot, and very easily, both because she is happy or when she is sad. However she doesn't get angry and never tells unless it's the excited kind of yelling.
        Vernacular ▬ Remi has a melodic voice, high in its pitch more akin to a soprano. Neither her voice or her expression will ever hide how she is feeling. The girl is very expressive in her tone and her expressions, however anger or annoyance is not something one would ever hear or see from her. She also tends to speak rather loudly, often forgetting when its appropriate to use an outside voice and when its not.
        Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, Generous, Loveable, Curious, Gentle
        Negative Traits ▬ Naive, Easily Influenced, Won't protect t herself if it means hurting another

╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

        BACKGROUND ▬ Remilyn was born into the Rhopalocera tribe, a group of butterfly faunus living in a beautiful forest, far away from the means of normal society. The tribe's purpose was to raise warriors, elite female warriors. Beautiful as they may be, the butterflies were trained and capable. Beautiful but alluring. Deadly in their grace and precision. Dangerous, but they also weren't the type to seek out war or conflict. They had their feuds with the moths nearby who often ransacked their storage and food supplies, but other than that the tribe kept mostly to themselves. They fought, trained, and protected each other from any harm that sought them out. They worked and learned together, but that didn't mean there wasn't any time for fun. Remi lived a happy childhood full of fun and laughter. Often the girl could be found flitting through the trees, chasing after her older sister, that melodic giggle always trailing behind her. Remilyn had always been completely enthralled by her older sister, following in her footsteps from the day she could walk. They were always close, and Remi looked up to Koryn, always aspiring to be more like her. However, from the day that training started, it was always apparent that there was something a little different about the pale haired girl. While most of the tribe would fight to protect and defend, going as far as to hurt, maim, and possibly kill if it became a necessity, that was not the case with Remi. She would not fight, even if her own life defended on it. Many times she was struck down for that major flaw, Elders trying to teach the child a lesson before the consequences became much more dire than a bruise or a scrape. They needed her to learn before she was faced with a life or death situation, because anyone who knew Remi knew she would pick her own death over violence.

        Despite her unwillingness to submit to the ways of her tribe and her unorthodox way of going about things, As Remi grew she progressed and as she progressed she excelled. While she still refused to raise a hand to any other living creature, she found a way to survive just the same. Remilyn's combat style, if it could really be called that, revolved around defensive and evasive maneuvers. Often times she could go up against aged tribe members, much more advance in their skill than she was, and win simply because she managed to stay out of their grasp long enough. The girl had always had a remarkable amount of energy and stamina, combined with her noninvasive fighting style, she was often able to outlast her peers and win by default. Granted, she never came out of the matches unscathed, but she succeeded all the same and by doing so, proved her worth. It was discovering her semblance that truly allowed her to excel and surpass the expectations of everyone including herself. By manipulating the flowers around her and enhancing the effects of their pollen, she was able to use the outcome to her advantage and often take out her opponents without ever laying a finger on them. It allowed her to contain them, so that they could not hurt or or anyone else, without her having to harm them either. The semblance was a perfect fit for the girl and only furthered to prove her worth and her place within the tribe.

        However, despite her success, the journey was a long and grueling one. As a part of the Rhopalocera tribe, training starts from a very young age. They also go through their very first trial before ever even reaching puberty. If successful in this trial, the butterfly is marked with the insignia of the tribe and participates in the cherished ceremony that marks them an official member. Remi failed her first trial many times, something that was almost unheard of within this group of butterflies. Time and time again they would send her alone into the wilds to face the moths and whatever other dangers awaited and time and time she would only just escape with her life. Often times the trial had to be observed closely and when it became clear it was going to end in death, they stopped it short before its icy grasps could grab her. Remilyn was forced to return with the shame of failing such an important part of her culture, time and time again. However, she never gave up and she never let it get her down. Despite her struggles, there was always a smile upon her face. The day that she finally passed that first trial and was welcomed into the tribe with open arms and cheers was one of the happiest of her life. She wears her insignia with pride, but her struggles didn't stop there. Along the road of discovering her own very unique combat style, Remi failed many other trials and progressed through the ranks much slower than other members. Often she was left gravely injured, but she always set to work to train and try once more. She was detirmined to succeed and prove her worth, just as Koryn had done, and in time she did just that.

        As the years progressed, issues began arising within their happy little tribe. The pesky nuisance that were their moth neighbors were one thing, easy enough to handle, but more and more grim kept finding their way in. The attacks resulted in many injuries, some fatal. It was a dark time for the tribe. Close as they were. While separate families existed within the tribe, they considered themselves all tied together with the bonds of family. Hence the reason no one carried a last name. The men were working over time, treating the injured as well as fecrafting damaged weapons. The woman were giving it their all, fighting with every once of strength within them to keep their homeland safe. It was after a particularly gruesome battle that Remi's older sister left the tribe to attend the prestigious school for hunters and huntress, Beacon Academy. Here she would learn hiw to better take on the grim and she could return to protect the tribe once more. Remi was said to see her go, but she also knew that Koryn had always been curious of the outside world. For her this was going to be an adventure of a life time. It was a curiousity Remi shared. The girl wanted nothing more than to leave with her sister, but the elders didn't believe she was ready. Not after the nearly detrimental outcome of her last trial. Despite her disappointment Remi would offer her sister a teary eyed smile and a long hug before bidding her farewell. She would miss her, but she was also happy for her.

        The woods almost seemed different without Koryn, but that was likely mostly Remi's own opinion. In her sister's absense, she found herself spending more and more time with a friend that had long been by her side. A boy near her age, apprenticing as a blacksmith. It was him who had designed and crafted her weapon for her, as well as adding to it the small blade that Koryn had given her long ago. A blade that while Remi hated the idea of ever using, had promised Koryn she would keep it on her just in case. Caelum engineered it to be hidden unless activated by a hidden switch, which was ideal for Remi for actually having to see the thing on her person made her sick to her stomach. In the weeks and months that followed, Remi grew increasingly close to this boy. It made the separation from her sister a bit easier and while the woods still felt empty without her, he helped fill the void. They spent most of their days together, apart from their own separate training. They were on a walk through the woods when true tragedy struck. Giving Remi's nature and Caelum's lack of battle experience, they shouldn't have been out on their own. By the time they realized that fact, it was much too late. They were ambushed by a hoard of moths. They were outnumbered, but it was something that Remilyn would have been able to handle under normal circumstances. Enacting her semblance, she ensared the faunus in the tangles stems and vines of her flowers while using the mutated pollen to cause them to grow drowsy. All she had to do was keep them there long enough and they would surely fall asleep, giving them a chance to escape. No one would be injured, they would get gone safe and sound, and no one would no the wiser. That hope came crashing down when the grim appeared on sight. Caelum was too far away. She could get to him before the Beowolf slashed its gigantic claws through his chest. But even if she had been able to get to him, what would she have done? Thrown herself in front of him to die on his behalf. That's exactly what she would have done and she would have done it gladly. Instead she turned just intim to see claws rip through tender flesh, felt the blood, hot and sticky as it splashed against his chest. The thud of his body hitting the ground was the most deafening sound to have ever breached her ears. Her blood had run cold, heart racing frantically in her chest.

        She thought all was lost until she saw the slightest rise and fall of his chest, strained with the efforts. What happened next was something that haunts the girl to this day. Rushing forward, she switched that secret button that turned her staff into a spear. The battle was wearing and gruesome. She did her best to distract it without truly attacking. Her aura was draining rapidly, trying to keep the moths in place while still battling the grim. By the time the battle neared completion, Remi was drenched in read, crimson oozing from several slashes and cuts marking her pale skin. She acted in desperation, striking the beast through the chest and watching it turn to dust. The feeling that consumed her was sickening. It was the first creature she had ever killed and it did nor matter that from were foul beasts. It did not matter it had tried to kill Caelum. It didn't matter that it had tried to kill her. All that mattered was the fact it had died at her hands, she had taken its life. The sobs that shook her small, battered body were heart wrenching. Streams of tears smearing through the blood streaked across her face. It took all of her effort to craw to Caelum's limp body. Gentle fingers pressed against his throat. There was a pulse, but it was faint and she did not have the strength or the energy to carry him back on her own. Not to mention the moths were still struggling to escape her snare. She fought to keep the effects of her semblance active for as long as possible. The moths eventually fell unconscious, but so did she. She had never pushed herself that far past her limitations. Eventually the elders of the tribe had coming looking. They brought the pair back home, but when Remi finally woke days later, it was to learn that Caelum had bit made it. All of her efforts had been for not. She had taken a life to safe his and he had died anyway. The girl was a wreck, but after seeing what she had accomplished on the battlefield, the tribe agreed to to do the one thing she had never thought they would. They were sending her to Beacon after Koryn. So with a heavy heart, she packed her things and braved a whole new world.

╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

        PRIMARY WEAPON
        ▬ Flower Power
        ▬ Remi's weapon is a simple staff crafted from the tree bough from that of her homeland, measuring 4 ft 7 in. While it has three forms the transformations between each are very minimal. The weapon its self does not change much but rather allows her to use it in three different ways. The staff ita self is decorated with both fiber enriched ribbons and flowers, making it look rather harmless. However there are purposes behind such cute flourishes.
        Melee Form ▬ The primary form is a wooden staff that simply looks like a tree branch with flowers sprouting from the ends. When activating her semblance she can manipulate the pollen on these flowers for added effects. Wrapped around the staff are flower fiber crafted ribbons, bright in their colors, that she can control when her semblance is active. If her semblance isn't active, she can chose to leave the ribbons tied around the staff or use them much like baton ribbons. Whether the ribbons are being controlled or not, they allow her to trip or restrain people without actually hurting them using the staff as a defensive mechanism, she can use it the same way, hitting and tripping, possibly even knowing one unconscious if it comes down to it, but never leaving lasting harm.
        Ranged Form ▬ As simplistic and natural as the staff looks, inside are some basic mechanics that allow her to launch flower seeds from the tip in massive quantities as well as at high rates of speed. The aim is not very a accurate as the seeds are not intended to be shot at actual targets. If they happened to hit a person, they wouldn't cause any really harm and would hurt less than someone tossing a pebble at you. The true purpose of this form is to fuel her semblance. By launching the seeds she can then use her semblance to both grow them as well as manipulate the pollen within the flowers.
        Other Form(s) ▬ Rhis final form is a form that Remi has never used as well as one that was not put there by her. Choice. After getting into a number of dangerous situations where she had no way to lethally harm either an enemy or grim, her sister made her promise to keep this last form as a last result to protect herself. This final form is a hidden blade that has to be activated with a hidden button. The black is a rounded point that protrudes from the tip of her staff, turning it into a spear.
        Ammo Type ▬ Physical: Seeds.
        ▬ Other than the spear form of her weapon, the staff can not cause any lethal damage. It is used for defense and evasion but can leave her rather vulnerable. The fact that it is made out of wood, even though it is durable, it is steel weaker than other weapons and can be more easily damaged or destroyed in a fight if she is not careful.

        OTHER WEAPONS
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        ITEMS
        ▬ Seeds 20 packages of 25




╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

        *NAME ▬ Razzle Dazzle
        *AURA COLOR ▬ Pastel Sea Foam Green
        *DESCRIPTION 
        ▬ Remi's semblance gives her the ability to rapidly excel the growth of flowers as well as further manipulate their stems, petals, and pollen. She can strengthen and lengthen srems in order to ensnare and/capture her opponents. The petals are good way to obscure ones vision or act as distraction if she needs to make a speedy escape. The core of her semblance focuses around the ability to manipulate and diffuse different types of pollen that cause different types of reactions when they are touched her breathed in.
        *LEVEL 0 ▬ In this level Remi is able to control the flowers and diffuse pollen into the air of 15 by 15 foot circle that must also be kept within 25 feet of her person. Once the field is set, it cannot move, however she can maneuver herself around it. She can only create and manipulate one type of pollen in which being breathed in will cause drowsiness and will cause an individual to fall asleep if they are exposed to it for 3 posts. While she can choose to disperse the pollen with in the entire field, she can also chose to isolate it into smaller clouds. She can maintain the control of the flowers for 5 posts. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse. Drowsiness will remain for 2 posts once they have been exposed and 4 posts if they have fallen asleep. After using her ability, Remi will need a 7 post cool down before using it again.
        *LEVEL 1▬ As her abilities improve, Remi is able to expand the field of her flowers to a circle of 30 by 30 feet that must be held within 50 ft of her person. She also unlocks a new type of pollen that clouds ones senses, blurs vision, mutes hearing, and disrupts scent. It is effective as soon as one is exposed. The effects will wear off after 3 posts of being removed from the pollen. She can use one pollen or the other but not both at once. Remi is now able to maintain her control for 7 posts while still requiring a 7 post cool down. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse.
        *LEVEL 2▬ With further training Remi will be able to control the plants within a 45 by 45 foot field that must be kept within 75 feet of her person. Once again she unlocks another type of pollen. It will cause increased difficulty of movement and motor functions the moment one is exposed and complete paralysis if exposed for more than 3 posts. The effects will wear off within 2 posts of being removed from the field if their movement was only hindered and 4 posts if they were completely paralyzed. She can still only use one type of pollen st a time. She is now able to maintain her control for 9 posts while only needing a 5 post cool down. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse.
        *LEVEL 3 ▬ In this final level her range expands to a field of 60 by 60 feet that must be obtained within 100 feet of her body. The final type of pollen she unlocks is actually a poison. It is completely painless but will continually drain ones aura the longer they are exposed. It will not kill an enemy, but has the potential to drain a person to complete exhaustion and possibly cause them to pass out. Aura is not regained by removing oneself from the field, it must be regained by normal means, however, it will not continue draining their aura once they've escaped. In this level Remi can chooseto use two of her pollens at once. Remi can maintain her control for 11 posts while still needing a 5 post cool down. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse.
        *DRAWBACKS ▬ First and foremost, Remi is not immune to her own pollen. If she were to be exposed she would face the same effects, as would her team. For that reason Remi has to use a lot of focus to be sure she does not accidently hit her allies with its potency. Beyond that, all it would take to defend against her ability would be to never even enter her field of work or to escape it. Once the effects wear off her ability becomes essentially useless. If she drains herself entirely, she will be faced to deal with the same symptoms of whatever pollen she was manipulating before passing out until her aura has been restored.


narxfang

xLulie

Deadly_Tiger

Youroka Kage

Xcon299

Alysian Virago

1234boo75

Eddy_Soul5



+Review-


Hola Ali! You get a bowtie review for this butterfly. Anyways going to be going over the aspects here for you. Well lets not doddle and get on with the review.

Achetype/Traits

+ Having a dodgy sort of skirmishing like character matches a butterfly faunus. So no harm there.

- Alas I need to talk about this. You're faunus trait with the eye sight. While being able to ultraviolet and polarized light, is fine. The enhanced field of vision is a no go. Mainly due to it being considered a second faunus trait. On top of that, a faunus's body type doesn't allow a 314 degree range of sight.


Weapon
+ The weapon itself is a neat idea. I love the idea of natural weapons or even based on a druidic staff.

• Having the weapon be really reliant on her semblance is kind of a cool idea. Hopefully it isn't that much of a down side for her.

Semblance
+ Sticking with the plant and nature theme is great. Really blends the character well.

• Now I have a question regarding the vines/stems she controls. While the basic description mentions that vines can be controlled, how long are they able to grow? You mention a radius of 15 feet at level 0 for example, I figured you were talking about the pollen but does this also determine the length of the vines/stems?

• You mention that the controlling must be within a certain distance between her and the flower she is effecting. Now to start using the semblance on said plant does she need physical contact with it, some sort a connector *aka staff*, or can she just start effecting them at a distance by will? This is something I would personally like clarified.

• Do the spores only effect people that breath them in or do they go through the skin?

- One thing that I will admit should be looked at is the radius of those spore clouds. At level 0 its fine, but later down the line it goes to some extreme levels of area coverage. I would suggest lowering the size of the clouds and the distance she has to control them.

- Going to be honest, not too fond of the paralyzing spores. Now I don't mind there being a different variety of spores, but paralyzing a target is incredibly powerful. Sleep is as well, but at least then they can use something or get someone to help wake them. I would suggest early lowering the duration of the paralyzing effect or changing this level of the semblance to some different aspect.

- Oh boy that level 3 is a rough one. Aura draining poison is nothing to scoff at in the slightest. What I want to know, how potent is the aura draining spores? Like how long does a person need to be within the spores to be drained completely? Does it depend on the targets own aura level or is it the same for everyone?

Bowiethenifty

Interesting Dabbler



HauntedxBeauty


Beloved Fairy

PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2018 2:34 pm


Xcon299



Heya, Bowie! I think I caught all the edits but let me know if I missed something or need to change anything else. ^^

Achetype/Traits

- I just went ahead and removed the second bit of her faunus triat. ^^


Weapon

• Its definitely risky, but I just wanted to let you know that I did it completely intentionally. Given her nature she wouldn't carry anything too lethal, but I did add the spear bit for precarious situations.

Semblance

• I had in mind that she could control them without ever having to touch them but they have to be within her range. I went ahead and added that to the general description.

• I had included in the general description that the pollen is effective whether it is breathed in or touched. I can also add this throughout all of the levels if you think that's necessary. I also added that anything she controls, IE vines and petals as well as the pollen, can only be expanded within that range. It's also in the general description but let me know if it needs more clarification or if you think I should add that statement throughout the levels.

- I went ahead and messed with the numbers and decreased the ranges of the field as well as the distance she can use them at. If you feel they need to be decreased further, pleas just let.me know.

- With the paralyzing it's not effective immediately. They are only slowed down, so moving would be difficult and motor skills would be strained. They would still have a chance to get out though. I did add that for full paralysis to take effect they have to remain in the field for five consecutive posts and all effects wear off after 2 posts. If you still think that's too much, let me know and I'll change it.

- So I added that in order for them to be drained completely they most remain in the field for the full 11 posts. Otherwise it drains 15% for every post they remain, essentially reducing the length they can use their own abilities by 1 post. I'm willing to negotiate with this though, if you have a better limitation in mind.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 01, 2018 12:41 pm


Alysian Virago
[Alysian Virago & Remilyn]
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╫ C O R E ╫


        *NAME ▬ Remilyn
        *AGE ▬ 16
        *FACTION ▬ Independent
        *ROLE ▬ Student
        *SEX ▬ Female
        *SPECIES ▬ Butterfly Faunus

        *CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet)
        *PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any)
        NICKNAME(S) ▬ Remi
        OCCUPATION ▬ Student



╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

        HEIGHT ▬ 5'1"
        WEIGHT ▬ 109 lbs

        HAIR ▬ Pale sea foam green
        CLOTHINGRemi in her usual attire. Her clothes are usually somewhat tight fitting with the added frills and lace for style. They cover the essentials but not much more. Often she prepers to go bare foot but when she doesn't she wears tall boots.
        ACCESSORIES ▬ Lots of braided and beaded bracelets and necklaces, vines, flowers, etc.
        EYES ▬ Pale sea foam green
        BUILD ▬ Petite, athletic build
        TATTOOS ▬ Just like the other members of her tribe, Remi is marked with their insignia. Hers is located in the center of her sternum beneath her chest.
        SCARS ▬ Remi's body is marked heavily by her own trials. The most prominent of which are those that she earned in her battle with the beowolf. Three long slashes along her back as well as matching ones on her right thigh and left forearm.
        MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES
Beautiful iridescent wings adorn her back, sprouting from each shoulder blade and shimmering with the same pastel colors that mark her hair and her eyes.

╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

        NATURAL ABILITIES
        Primary Talent ▬ Evasive maneuvers: Remi is exceedingly good at staying just out of ones reach, flitting around them and dodging their attacks until they exhaust themselves.
        Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Butterfly eyes are unique and function differently compared to the human eye. Although butterflies may not have a human’s sharp eye and tend to be nearsighted, their vision beats ours in other ways! The different colours and patterns that butterflies can see are invisible to the human eye. This is because their eyes are better at picking up fast moving objects and they can distinguish ultraviolet and polarised light, which the human eye cannot.
        Other Talents ▬ Increased Stamina: Remi is highly energetic. She can usually outlast most others and exert herself further before growing tired herself when it comes to training, combat, and exercise.
        Speed: Sonce she is always putting her self at risk by putting the lives of even her enemies above her own, in order to stay alive and survive she has had to learn and train to be quicker than most to avoid getting caught by her opponents
        LEARNT ABILITIES
        Strongest Skill ▬ Defensive Manuevers: Through training and learning Remi has found away to put her inability to harm others into a working combat style. Her fighting style revolves around a series of defensive te unique that keep her safe without hurting her opponent.
        Weakest Skill ▬ While Remi's eyes can pick up a variety of things the human eye can't and give her a distinct advantage, she is nearsighted which severely impacts her aim as well as other factors in battle. More so, Remi cannot fly when she is wet or cold. Other body motor skills suffer as well if she gets too cold. Remi is not particularly large or strong and combined with her fact that she would rather die herself than be the cause of another's pain, she is usually left vulnerable.
        Other Skills ▬ Flexibility, she can bend and twist her body further than most. Music: She has a good ear and can pick up most instruments though singing has always been her favorite. Dancing: She has always loved to dance and fly through the trees and does so with a graceful charm.


        LIKES
        ▬ Dancing, gardening, singing
        ▬ Friendly, humorous, kind
        ▬ Fruit juices
        ▬ Flowers, seeds, pollen
        ▬ Trees
        DISLIKES
        ▬ Rude, ignororant
        ▬ Anything Solid
        ▬ Cages, technology
        ▬ Cold, snow or rain
        ▬ Remi is afraid of the water and cannot swim but she also hates the feeling of being restrained, be it by ropes, a person, or a cage.
        PERSONALITY TRAITS
        Nature ▬ Remi is an extreme extrovert. Hardly ever does she get shy and she is never embarrassed by her words her actions, even when she should be. She is overwhelmingly sweet and would quite literally never hurt a fly, even if her own life depended on it. By definition she is a lover not a fighter. When in dangerous situations, she would rather use evasive maneuvers to either trap of knock out her opponent without causing pain or harm. The girl is easily excitable, even over the little things. She has a tendency to be loud and boisterous and has very little regard to personal space. She also cries a lot, and very easily, both because she is happy or when she is sad. However she doesn't get angry and never tells unless it's the excited kind of yelling.
        Vernacular ▬ Remi has a melodic voice, high in its pitch more akin to a soprano. Neither her voice or her expression will ever hide how she is feeling. The girl is very expressive in her tone and her expressions, however anger or annoyance is not something one would ever hear or see from her. She also tends to speak rather loudly, often forgetting when its appropriate to use an outside voice and when its not.
        Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, Generous, Loveable, Curious, Gentle
        Negative Traits ▬ Naive, Easily Influenced, Won't protect t herself if it means hurting another

╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

        BACKGROUND ▬ Remilyn was born into the Rhopalocera tribe, a group of butterfly faunus living in a beautiful forest, far away from the means of normal society. The tribe's purpose was to raise warriors, elite female warriors. Beautiful as they may be, the butterflies were trained and capable. Beautiful but alluring. Deadly in their grace and precision. Dangerous, but they also weren't the type to seek out war or conflict. They had their feuds with the moths nearby who often ransacked their storage and food supplies, but other than that the tribe kept mostly to themselves. They fought, trained, and protected each other from any harm that sought them out. They worked and learned together, but that didn't mean there wasn't any time for fun. Remi lived a happy childhood full of fun and laughter. Often the girl could be found flitting through the trees, chasing after her older sister, that melodic giggle always trailing behind her. Remilyn had always been completely enthralled by her older sister, following in her footsteps from the day she could walk. They were always close, and Remi looked up to Koryn, always aspiring to be more like her. However, from the day that training started, it was always apparent that there was something a little different about the pale haired girl. While most of the tribe would fight to protect and defend, going as far as to hurt, maim, and possibly kill if it became a necessity, that was not the case with Remi. She would not fight, even if her own life defended on it. Many times she was struck down for that major flaw, Elders trying to teach the child a lesson before the consequences became much more dire than a bruise or a scrape. They needed her to learn before she was faced with a life or death situation, because anyone who knew Remi knew she would pick her own death over violence.

        Despite her unwillingness to submit to the ways of her tribe and her unorthodox way of going about things, As Remi grew she progressed and as she progressed she excelled. While she still refused to raise a hand to any other living creature, she found a way to survive just the same. Remilyn's combat style, if it could really be called that, revolved around defensive and evasive maneuvers. Often times she could go up against aged tribe members, much more advance in their skill than she was, and win simply because she managed to stay out of their grasp long enough. The girl had always had a remarkable amount of energy and stamina, combined with her noninvasive fighting style, she was often able to outlast her peers and win by default. Granted, she never came out of the matches unscathed, but she succeeded all the same and by doing so, proved her worth. It was discovering her semblance that truly allowed her to excel and surpass the expectations of everyone including herself. By manipulating the flowers around her and enhancing the effects of their pollen, she was able to use the outcome to her advantage and often take out her opponents without ever laying a finger on them. It allowed her to contain them, so that they could not hurt or or anyone else, without her having to harm them either. The semblance was a perfect fit for the girl and only furthered to prove her worth and her place within the tribe.

        However, despite her success, the journey was a long and grueling one. As a part of the Rhopalocera tribe, training starts from a very young age. They also go through their very first trial before ever even reaching puberty. If successful in this trial, the butterfly is marked with the insignia of the tribe and participates in the cherished ceremony that marks them an official member. Remi failed her first trial many times, something that was almost unheard of within this group of butterflies. Time and time again they would send her alone into the wilds to face the moths and whatever other dangers awaited and time and time she would only just escape with her life. Often times the trial had to be observed closely and when it became clear it was going to end in death, they stopped it short before its icy grasps could grab her. Remilyn was forced to return with the shame of failing such an important part of her culture, time and time again. However, she never gave up and she never let it get her down. Despite her struggles, there was always a smile upon her face. The day that she finally passed that first trial and was welcomed into the tribe with open arms and cheers was one of the happiest of her life. She wears her insignia with pride, but her struggles didn't stop there. Along the road of discovering her own very unique combat style, Remi failed many other trials and progressed through the ranks much slower than other members. Often she was left gravely injured, but she always set to work to train and try once more. She was detirmined to succeed and prove her worth, just as Koryn had done, and in time she did just that.

        As the years progressed, issues began arising within their happy little tribe. The pesky nuisance that were their moth neighbors were one thing, easy enough to handle, but more and more grim kept finding their way in. The attacks resulted in many injuries, some fatal. It was a dark time for the tribe. Close as they were. While separate families existed within the tribe, they considered themselves all tied together with the bonds of family. Hence the reason no one carried a last name. The men were working over time, treating the injured as well as fecrafting damaged weapons. The woman were giving it their all, fighting with every once of strength within them to keep their homeland safe. It was after a particularly gruesome battle that Remi's older sister left the tribe to attend the prestigious school for hunters and huntress, Beacon Academy. Here she would learn hiw to better take on the grim and she could return to protect the tribe once more. Remi was said to see her go, but she also knew that Koryn had always been curious of the outside world. For her this was going to be an adventure of a life time. It was a curiousity Remi shared. The girl wanted nothing more than to leave with her sister, but the elders didn't believe she was ready. Not after the nearly detrimental outcome of her last trial. Despite her disappointment Remi would offer her sister a teary eyed smile and a long hug before bidding her farewell. She would miss her, but she was also happy for her.

        The woods almost seemed different without Koryn, but that was likely mostly Remi's own opinion. In her sister's absense, she found herself spending more and more time with a friend that had long been by her side. A boy near her age, apprenticing as a blacksmith. It was him who had designed and crafted her weapon for her, as well as adding to it the small blade that Koryn had given her long ago. A blade that while Remi hated the idea of ever using, had promised Koryn she would keep it on her just in case. Caelum engineered it to be hidden unless activated by a hidden switch, which was ideal for Remi for actually having to see the thing on her person made her sick to her stomach. In the weeks and months that followed, Remi grew increasingly close to this boy. It made the separation from her sister a bit easier and while the woods still felt empty without her, he helped fill the void. They spent most of their days together, apart from their own separate training. They were on a walk through the woods when true tragedy struck. Giving Remi's nature and Caelum's lack of battle experience, they shouldn't have been out on their own. By the time they realized that fact, it was much too late. They were ambushed by a hoard of moths. They were outnumbered, but it was something that Remilyn would have been able to handle under normal circumstances. Enacting her semblance, she ensared the faunus in the tangles stems and vines of her flowers while using the mutated pollen to cause them to grow drowsy. All she had to do was keep them there long enough and they would surely fall asleep, giving them a chance to escape. No one would be injured, they would get gone safe and sound, and no one would no the wiser. That hope came crashing down when the grim appeared on sight. Caelum was too far away. She could get to him before the Beowolf slashed its gigantic claws through his chest. But even if she had been able to get to him, what would she have done? Thrown herself in front of him to die on his behalf. That's exactly what she would have done and she would have done it gladly. Instead she turned just intim to see claws rip through tender flesh, felt the blood, hot and sticky as it splashed against his chest. The thud of his body hitting the ground was the most deafening sound to have ever breached her ears. Her blood had run cold, heart racing frantically in her chest.

        She thought all was lost until she saw the slightest rise and fall of his chest, strained with the efforts. What happened next was something that haunts the girl to this day. Rushing forward, she switched that secret button that turned her staff into a spear. The battle was wearing and gruesome. She did her best to distract it without truly attacking. Her aura was draining rapidly, trying to keep the moths in place while still battling the grim. By the time the battle neared completion, Remi was drenched in read, crimson oozing from several slashes and cuts marking her pale skin. She acted in desperation, striking the beast through the chest and watching it turn to dust. The feeling that consumed her was sickening. It was the first creature she had ever killed and it did nor matter that from were foul beasts. It did not matter it had tried to kill Caelum. It didn't matter that it had tried to kill her. All that mattered was the fact it had died at her hands, she had taken its life. The sobs that shook her small, battered body were heart wrenching. Streams of tears smearing through the blood streaked across her face. It took all of her effort to craw to Caelum's limp body. Gentle fingers pressed against his throat. There was a pulse, but it was faint and she did not have the strength or the energy to carry him back on her own. Not to mention the moths were still struggling to escape her snare. She fought to keep the effects of her semblance active for as long as possible. The moths eventually fell unconscious, but so did she. She had never pushed herself that far past her limitations. Eventually the elders of the tribe had coming looking. They brought the pair back home, but when Remi finally woke days later, it was to learn that Caelum had bit made it. All of her efforts had been for not. She had taken a life to safe his and he had died anyway. The girl was a wreck, but after seeing what she had accomplished on the battlefield, the tribe agreed to to do the one thing she had never thought they would. They were sending her to Beacon after Koryn. So with a heavy heart, she packed her things and braved a whole new world.

╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

        PRIMARY WEAPON
        ▬ Flower Power
        ▬ Remi's weapon is a simple staff crafted from the tree bough from that of her homeland, measuring 4 ft 7 in. While it has three forms the transformations between each are very minimal. The weapon its self does not change much but rather allows her to use it in three different ways. The staff ita self is decorated with both fiber enriched ribbons and flowers, making it look rather harmless. However there are purposes behind such cute flourishes.
        Melee Form ▬ The primary form is a wooden staff that simply looks like a tree branch with flowers sprouting from the ends. When activating her semblance she can manipulate the pollen on these flowers for added effects. Wrapped around the staff are flower fiber crafted ribbons, bright in their colors, that she can control when her semblance is active. If her semblance isn't active, she can chose to leave the ribbons tied around the staff or use them much like baton ribbons. Whether the ribbons are being controlled or not, they allow her to trip or restrain people without actually hurting them using the staff as a defensive mechanism, she can use it the same way, hitting and tripping, possibly even knowing one unconscious if it comes down to it, but never leaving lasting harm.
        Ranged Form ▬ As simplistic and natural as the staff looks, inside are some basic mechanics that allow her to launch flower seeds from the tip in massive quantities as well as at high rates of speed. The aim is not very a accurate as the seeds are not intended to be shot at actual targets. If they happened to hit a person, they wouldn't cause any really harm and would hurt less than someone tossing a pebble at you. The true purpose of this form is to fuel her semblance. By launching the seeds she can then use her semblance to both grow them as well as manipulate the pollen within the flowers.
        Other Form(s) ▬ This final form is a form that Remi has never used as well as one that was not put there by her. Choice. After getting into a number of dangerous situations where she had no way to lethally harm either an enemy or grim, her sister made her promise to keep this last form as a last result to protect herself. This final form is a hidden blade that has to be activated with a hidden button. The black is a rounded point that protrudes from the tip of her staff, turning it into a spear.
        Ammo Type ▬ Physical: Seeds.
        ▬ Other than the spear form of her weapon, the staff can not cause any lethal damage. It is used for defense and evasion but can leave her rather vulnerable. The fact that it is made out of wood, even though it is durable, it is steel weaker than other weapons and can be more easily damaged or destroyed in a fight if she is not careful.

        OTHER WEAPONS
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        ITEMS
        ▬ Seeds 20 packages of 25




╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

        *NAME ▬ Razzle Dazzle
        *AURA COLOR ▬ Pastel Sea Foam Green
        *DESCRIPTION 
        ▬ Remi's semblance gives her the ability to rapidly excel the growth of flowers as well as further manipulate their stems, petals, and pollen. She can strengthen and lengthen srems in order to ensnare and/capture her opponents. The petals are good way to obscure ones vision or act as distraction if she needs to make a speedy escape. The core of her semblance focuses around the ability to manipulate and diffuse different types of pollen that cause different types of reactions when they are touched or breathed in. She doesn't have to touch a flower in order to effect it, but it does have to be within range of her semblance. Beyond that, all pollen, petals, and vines can only be controlled and expanded within that same range.
        *LEVEL 0 ▬ In this level Remi is able to control the flowers and diffuse pollen into the air of 20 by 20 foot circle that must also be kept within 20 feet of her person. Once the field is set, it cannot move, however she can maneuver herself around it. She can only create and manipulate one type of pollen in which being breathed in will cause drowsiness and will cause an individual to fall asleep if they are exposed to it for 3 posts. While she can choose to disperse the pollen with in the entire field, she can also chose to isolate it into smaller clouds. She can maintain the control of the flowers for 5 posts. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse. Drowsiness will remain for 2 posts once they have been exposed and 4 posts if they have fallen asleep. After using her ability, Remi will need a 7 post cool down before using it again.
        *LEVEL 1▬ As her abilities improve, Remi is able to expand the field of her flowers to a circle of 30 by 30 feet that must be held within 30 feet of her person. She also unlocks a new type of pollen that clouds ones senses, blurs vision, mutes hearing, and disrupts scent. It is effective as soon as one is exposed. The effects will wear off after 3 posts of being removed from the pollen. She can use one pollen or the other but not both at once. Remi is now able to maintain her control for 7 posts while still requiring a 7 post cool down. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse.
        *LEVEL 2▬ With further training Remi will be able to control the plants within a 40 by 40 foot field that must be kept within 40 feet of her person. Once again she unlocks another type of pollen. It will cause increased difficulty of movement and motor functions the moment one is exposed and complete paralysis if exposed for more than 5 posts. The effects will wear off within 2 posts of being removed from the field. She can still only use one type of pollen st a time. She is now able to maintain her control for 9 posts while only needing a 5 post cool down. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse.
        *LEVEL 3 ▬ In this final level her range expands to a field of 50 by 50 feet that must be obtained within 50 feet of her body. The final type of pollen she unlocks is actually a poison. It is completely painless but will continually drain ones aura the longer they are exposed. It will not kill an enemy, but has the potential to drain a person to complete exhaustion and possibly cause them to pass out. Aura is not regained by removing oneself from the field, it must be regained by normal means, however, it will not continue draining their aura once they've escaped. They must remain in the field for the 9 consecutive posts to be drained completely, otherwise their aura is simply drained by 15% (-1 post of their ability) for every post they remain. In this level Remi can chooseto use two of her pollens at once. Remi can maintain her control for 11 posts while still needing a 5 post cool down. The pollen will remain in the air afterwards but loses its potency and slowly disperse.
        *DRAWBACKS ▬ First and foremost, Remi is not immune to her own pollen. If she were to be exposed she would face the same effects, as would her team. For that reason Remi has to use a lot of focus to be sure she does not accidently hit her allies with its potency. Beyond that, all it would take to defend against her ability would be to never even enter her field of work or to escape it. Once the effects wear off her ability becomes essentially useless. If she drains herself entirely, she will be faced to deal with the same symptoms of whatever pollen she was manipulating before passing out until her aura has been restored.


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╫ C O R E ╫


        *NAME ▬ Remilyn
        *AGE ▬ 17
        *FACTION ▬ Independent
        *ROLE ▬ Student
        *SEX ▬ Female
        *SPECIES ▬ Butterfly Faunus

        *CURRENT TEAM ▬ (Leave blank if you do not have a team yet)
        *PARTNER(S) ▬ (Teammates, if you have any)
        NICKNAME(S) ▬ Remi
        OCCUPATION ▬ Student



╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

        HEIGHT ▬ 5'1"
        WEIGHT ▬ 109 lbs

        HAIR ▬ Pale sea foam green
        CLOTHINGUsual Attire Her clothes are usually somewhat tight fitting with the added frills and lace for style. They cover the essentials but not much more. Often she prefers to go bare foot but when she doesn't she wears tall boots.
        ACCESSORIES ▬ Lots of braided and beaded bracelets and necklaces, vines, flowers, etc.
        EYES ▬ Pale sea foam green
        BUILD ▬ Petite, athletic build
        TATTOOS ▬ Just like the other members of her tribe, Remi is marked with their insignia. Hers is located in the center of her sternum beneath her chest.
        SCARS ▬ Remi's body is marked heavily by her own trials. The most prominent of which are those that she earned in her battle with the beowolf. Three long slashes along her back as well as matching ones on her right thigh and left forearm.
        MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES
Beautiful iridescent wings adorn her back, sprouting from each shoulder blade and shimmering with the same pastel colors that mark her hair and her eyes.

╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

        NATURAL ABILITIES
        Primary Talent ▬ Evasive maneuvers: Remi is exceedingly good at staying just out of ones reach, flitting around them and dodging their attacks until they exhaust themselves.
        Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Butterfly eyes are unique and function differently compared to the human eye. Although butterflies may not have a human’s sharp eye and tend to be nearsighted, their vision beats ours in other ways! The different colours and patterns that butterflies can see are invisible to the human eye. This is because their eyes are better at picking up fast moving objects and they can distinguish ultraviolet and polarised light, which the human eye cannot.
        Other Talents ▬ Increased Stamina: Remi is highly energetic. She can usually outlast most others and exert herself further before growing tired herself when it comes to training, combat, and exercise.
        Speed: Since she is always putting her self at risk by putting the lives of even her enemies above her own, in order to stay alive and survive she has had to learn and train to be quicker than most to avoid getting caught by her opponents
        LEARNT ABILITIES
        Strongest Skill ▬ Defensive Manuevers: Through training and learning Remi has found away to put her inability to harm others into a working combat style. Her fighting style revolves around a series of defensive te unique that keep her safe without hurting her opponent.
        Weakest Skill ▬ While Remi's eyes can pick up a variety of things the human eye can't and give her a distinct advantage, she is nearsighted which severely impacts her aim as well as other factors in battle. More so, Remi cannot fly when she is wet or cold. Other body motor skills suffer as well if she gets too cold. Remi is not particularly large or strong and combined with her fact that she would rather die herself than be the cause of another's pain, she is usually left vulnerable.
        Other Skills ▬ Flexibility, she can bend and twist her body further than most. Music: She has a good ear and can pick up most instruments though singing has always been her favorite. Dancing: She has always loved to dance and fly through the trees and does so with a graceful charm.


        LIKES
        ▬ Dancing, gardening, singing
        ▬ Friendly, humorous, kind
        ▬ Fruit juices
        ▬ Flowers, seeds, pollen
        ▬ Trees
        DISLIKES
        ▬ Rude, ignororant
        ▬ Anything Solid
        ▬ Cages, technology
        ▬ Cold, snow or rain
        ▬ Remi is afraid of the water and cannot swim but she also hates the feeling of being restrained, be it by ropes, a person, or a cage.
        PERSONALITY TRAITS
        Nature ▬ Remi is an extreme extrovert. Hardly ever does she get shy and she is never embarrassed by her words her actions, even when she should be. She is overwhelmingly sweet and would quite literally never hurt a fly, even if her own life depended on it. By definition she is a lover not a fighter. When in dangerous situations, she would rather use evasive maneuvers to either trap of knock out her opponent without causing pain or harm. The girl is easily excitable, even over the little things. She has a tendency to be loud and boisterous and has very little regard to personal space. She also cries a lot, and very easily, both because she is happy or when she is sad. However she doesn't get angry and never tells unless it's the excited kind of yelling.
        Vernacular ▬ Remi has a melodic voice, high in its pitch more akin to a soprano. Neither her voice or her expression will ever hide how she is feeling. The girl is very expressive in her tone and her expressions, however anger or annoyance is not something one would ever hear or see from her. She also tends to speak rather loudly, often forgetting when its appropriate to use an outside voice and when its not.
        Positive Traits ▬ Sweet, Generous, Loveable, Curious, Gentle
        Negative Traits ▬ Naive, Easily Influenced, Won't protect t herself if it means hurting another

╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

        BACKGROUND ▬ Remilyn was born into the Rhopalocera tribe, a group of butterfly faunus living in a beautiful forest, far away from the means of normal society. The tribe's purpose was to raise warriors, elite female warriors. Beautiful as they may be, the butterflies were trained and capable. Beautiful but alluring. Deadly in their grace and precision. Dangerous, but they also weren't the type to seek out war or conflict. They had their feuds with the moths nearby who often ransacked their storage and food supplies, but other than that the tribe kept mostly to themselves. They fought, trained, and protected each other from any harm that sought them out. They worked and learned together, but that didn't mean there wasn't any time for fun. Remi lived a happy childhood full of fun and laughter. Often the girl could be found flitting through the trees, chasing after her older sister, that melodic giggle always trailing behind her. Remilyn had always been completely enthralled by her older sister, following in her footsteps from the day she could walk. They were always close, and Remi looked up to Koryn, always aspiring to be more like her. However, from the day that training started, it was always apparent that there was something a little different about the pale haired girl. While most of the tribe would fight to protect and defend, going as far as to hurt, maim, and possibly kill if it became a necessity, that was not the case with Remi. She would not fight, even if her own life defended on it. Many times she was struck down for that major flaw, Elders trying to teach the child a lesson before the consequences became much more dire than a bruise or a scrape. They needed her to learn before she was faced with a life or death situation, because anyone who knew Remi knew she would pick her own death over violence.

        Despite her unwillingness to submit to the ways of her tribe and her unorthodox way of going about things, As Remi grew she progressed and as she progressed she excelled. While she still refused to raise a hand to any other living creature, she found a way to survive just the same. Remilyn's combat style, if it could really be called that, revolved around defensive and evasive maneuvers. Often times she could go up against aged tribe members, much more advance in their skill than she was, and win simply because she managed to stay out of their grasp long enough. The girl had always had a remarkable amount of energy and stamina, combined with her noninvasive fighting style, she was often able to outlast her peers and win by default. Granted, she never came out of the matches unscathed, but she succeeded all the same and by doing so, proved her worth. It was discovering her semblance that truly allowed her to excel and surpass the expectations of everyone including herself. By manipulating the flowers around her and enhancing the effects of their pollen, she was able to use the outcome to her advantage and often take out her opponents without ever laying a finger on them. It allowed her to contain them, so that they could not hurt or or anyone else, without her having to harm them either. The semblance was a perfect fit for the girl and only furthered to prove her worth and her place within the tribe.

        However, despite her success, the journey was a long and grueling one. As a part of the Rhopalocera tribe, training starts from a very young age. They also go through their very first trial before ever even reaching puberty. If successful in this trial, the butterfly is marked with the insignia of the tribe and participates in the cherished ceremony that marks them an official member. Remi failed her first trial many times, something that was almost unheard of within this group of butterflies. Time and time again they would send her alone into the wilds to face the moths and whatever other dangers awaited and time and time she would only just escape with her life. Often times the trial had to be observed closely and when it became clear it was going to end in death, they stopped it short before its icy grasps could grab her. Remilyn was forced to return with the shame of failing such an important part of her culture, time and time again. However, she never gave up and she never let it get her down. Despite her struggles, there was always a smile upon her face. The day that she finally passed that first trial and was welcomed into the tribe with open arms and cheers was one of the happiest of her life. She wears her insignia with pride, but her struggles didn't stop there. Along the road of discovering her own very unique combat style, Remi failed many other trials and progressed through the ranks much slower than other members. Often she was left gravely injured, but she always set to work to train and try once more. She was detirmined to succeed and prove her worth, just as Koryn had done, and in time she did just that.

        As the years progressed, issues began arising within their happy little tribe. The pesky nuisance that were their moth neighbors were one thing, easy enough to handle, but more and more grim kept finding their way in. The attacks resulted in many injuries, some fatal. It was a dark time for the tribe. Close as they were. While separate families existed within the tribe, they considered themselves all tied together with the bonds of family. Hence the reason no one carried a last name. The men were working over time, treating the injured as well as recrafting damaged weapons. The woman were giving it their all, fighting with every once of strength within them to keep their homeland safe. It was after a particularly gruesome battle that Remi's older sister left the tribe to attend the prestigious school for hunters and huntress, Beacon Academy. Here she would learn how to better take on the grim and she could return to protect the tribe once more. Remi was said to see her go, but she also knew that Koryn had always been curious of the outside world. For her this was going to be an adventure of a life time. It was a curiosity Remi shared. The girl wanted nothing more than to leave with her sister, but the elders didn't believe she was ready. Not after the nearly detrimental outcome of her last trial. Despite her disappointment Remi would offer her sister a teary eyed smile and a long hug before bidding her farewell. She would miss her, but she was also happy for her.

        The woods almost seemed different without Koryn, but that was likely mostly Remi's own opinion. In her sister's absence, she found herself spending more and more time with a friend that had long been by her side. A boy near her age, apprenticing as a blacksmith. It was him who had designed and crafted her weapon for her, as well as adding to it the small blade that Koryn had given her long ago. A blade that while Remi hated the idea of ever using, had promised Koryn she would keep it on her just in case. Caelum engineered it to be hidden unless activated by a hidden switch, which was ideal for Remi for actually having to see the thing on her person made her sick to her stomach. In the weeks and months that followed, Remi grew increasingly close to this boy. It made the separation from her sister a bit easier and while the woods still felt empty without her, he helped fill the void. They spent most of their days together, apart from their own separate training. They were on a walk through the woods when true tragedy struck. Giving Remi's nature and Caelum's lack of battle experience, they shouldn't have been out on their own. By the time they realized that fact, it was much too late. They were ambushed by a hoard of moths. They were outnumbered, but it was something that Remilyn would have been able to handle under normal circumstances. Enacting her semblance, she ensnared the faunus in the tangles stems and vines of her flowers while using the mutated pollen to cause them to grow drowsy. All she had to do was keep them there long enough and they would surely fall asleep, giving them a chance to escape. No one would be injured, they would get gone safe and sound, and no one would no the wiser. That hope came crashing down when the grim appeared on sight. Caelum was too far away. She could get to him before the Beowolf slashed its gigantic claws through his chest. But even if she had been able to get to him, what would she have done? Thrown herself in front of him to die on his behalf. That's exactly what she would have done and she would have done it gladly. Instead she turned just in time to see claws rip through tender flesh, felt the blood, hot and sticky as it splashed against his chest. The thud of his body hitting the ground was the most deafening sound to have ever breached her ears. Her blood had run cold, heart racing frantically in her chest.

        She thought all was lost until she saw the slightest rise and fall of his chest, strained with the efforts. What happened next was something that haunts the girl to this day. Rushing forward, she switched that secret button that turned her staff into a spear. The battle was wearing and gruesome. She did her best to distract it without truly attacking. Her aura was draining rapidly, trying to keep the moths in place while still battling the grim. By the time the battle neared completion, Remi was drenched in read, crimson oozing from several slashes and cuts marking her pale skin. She acted in desperation, striking the beast through the chest and watching it turn to dust. The feeling that consumed her was sickening. It was the first creature she had ever killed and it did nor matter that from were foul beasts. It did not matter it had tried to kill Caelum. It didn't matter that it had tried to kill her. All that mattered was the fact it had died at her hands, she had taken its life. The sobs that shook her small, battered body were heart wrenching. Streams of tears smearing through the blood streaked across her face. It took all of her effort to craw to Caelum's limp body. Gentle fingers pressed against his throat. There was a pulse, but it was faint and she did not have the strength or the energy to carry him back on her own. Not to mention the moths were still struggling to escape her snare. She fought to keep the effects of her semblance active for as long as possible. The moths eventually fell unconscious, but so did she. She had never pushed herself that far past her limitations.

        Eventually the elders of the tribe had coming looking. To this day Remi is unsure of how she managed to open her eyes again. She doesn't remembered much, but she remembered the gruesome sounds. She remembered being so utterly terrified to open her eyes again, but just as strong as her desire, was the feeling that if she didn't, something horrible would happen. Only, something horrific had already happened. Her vision was blurry, black creeping in along the edges. But the image of those lifeless bodies littering the ground was one that would be permanently burned into the back of her mind. It didn't matter that they were moths. It didn't matter that they were her supposed to be her enemy. It didn't even matter that they had tried to kill her. All that mattered was that their lives had been wiped away so needlessly. Her mouth tasted sour as bile rose in the back of her throat. She swallowed hard, biting down on her lip. That was when she saw him. She couldn't make out his features, not clearly, but she remembered his dark hair and how it was such a stark contrast to his pale skin, opalescent in the moonlight. More clearly, she remembered his eyes, blue like the sky, the sun shining from the center. She knew they would kill him too, and even though she hardly had the strength left to move, she couldn't let them too it. She screamed, so loud it burned her throat and made her lungs ate. She screamed until her Elders looked at her, turning their astonished expressions towards her tiny frame. Tears poured from her sea foam eyes, splashing down her cheeks, smearing through dirt and blood alike. When she spoke, her voice was left hoarse and week. "Don't. Please don't. Don't kill him." She begged, she begged until they begrudgingly agreed. Only, it wouldn't be without consequence. Her heart blood ran cold at the metal gleaming viciously beneath the stars, flashing as it came down towards the boys wings. More tears burned her eyes, blurring her already blurred vision. She cried for him, and while it was not nearly enough, it was the only thing left for her to do. She did not have the strength to move, already it was failing away, her consciousness tugged away by the darkness until she collapsed once more. The Elders carried her and Caellum back when they were finished with their gruesome task, leaving the moth boy to fend for himself. When Remi finally woke days later, it was to learn that Caelum had not made it. All of her efforts had been for not. She had taken a life to safe his and he had died anyway. The girl was a wreck, but after seeing what she had accomplished on the battlefield, the tribe agreed to to do the one thing she had never thought they would. They were sending her to Beacon after Koryn. So with a heavy heart, she packed her things and braved a whole new world.

╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

        PRIMARY WEAPON
        ▬ Flower Power
        ▬ Remi's weapon is a simple staff crafted from the tree bough from that of her homeland, measuring 4 ft 7 in. While it has three forms the transformations between each are very minimal. The weapon its self does not change much but rather allows her to use it in three different ways. The staff itself is decorated with both fiber enriched ribbons and flowers, making it look rather harmless. However there are purposes behind such cute flourishes.
        Melee Form ▬ The primary form is a wooden staff that simply looks like a tree branch with flowers sprouting from the ends. When activating her semblance she can manipulate the pollen on these flowers for added effects. Wrapped around the staff are flower fiber crafted ribbons, bright in their colors, that she can control when her semblance is active. If her semblance isn't active, she can chose to leave the ribbons tied around the staff or use them much like baton ribbons. Whether the ribbons are being controlled or not, they allow her to trip or restrain people without actually hurting them using the staff as a defensive mechanism, she can use it the same way, hitting and tripping, possibly even knocking one unconscious if it comes down to it, but never leaving lasting harm.
        Ranged Form ▬ As simplistic and natural as the staff looks, inside are some basic mechanics that allow her to launch flower seeds from the tip in massive quantities as well as at high rates of speed. The aim is not very a accurate as the seeds are not intended to be shot at actual targets. If they happened to hit a person, they wouldn't cause any really harm and would hurt less than someone tossing a pebble at you. The true purpose of this form is to fuel her semblance. By launching the seeds she can then use her semblance to both grow them as well as manipulate the pollen within the flowers. She can launch the seeds up to 50 feet.
        Other Form(s) ▬ This final form is a form that Remi has used only once, as well as one that was not put there by her choice. After getting into a number of dangerous situations where she had no way to lethally harm either an enemy or grim, her sister made her promise to keep this last form as a last result to protect herself. This final form is a hidden blade that has to be activated with a hidden button. The blade, 5 inches in length, is a rounded point that protrudes from the tip of her staff, turning it into a spear.
        Ammo Type ▬ Physical: Seeds.
        ▬ Other than the spear form of her weapon, the staff can not cause any lethal damage. It is used for defense and evasion but can leave her rather vulnerable. The fact that it is made out of wood, even though it is durable, it is stil weaker than other weapons and can be more easily damaged or destroyed in a fight if she is not careful. It is also flammable.

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        *NAME ▬ Razzle Dazzle
        *AURA COLOR ▬ Pastel Sea Foam Green
        *DESCRIPTION 
        ▬ Remi's semblance gives her the ability to rapidly excel the growth of flowers as well as further manipulate their stems, petals, and pollen. She can strengthen and lengthen stems in order to ensnare and/capture her opponents. The petals are good way to obscure ones vision or act as distraction if she needs to make a speedy escape. The core of her semblance focuses around the ability to manipulate and diffuse different types of pollen that cause different types of reactions when they are touched or breathed in. She doesn't have to touch a flower in order to effect it, but it does have to be within range of her semblance. Once the field is set, it cannot move, however she can maneuver herself around it. Beyond that, all pollen, petals, and vines can only be controlled and expanded within that same range. She can only use one type of pollen per semblance use. After she deactivates her semblence, the pollen will remain in the air but will lose all of its potency. It will slowly disperse on its own.
        *LEVEL 0 ▬ In this level Remi is able to control the flowers and diffuse pollen into the air of 20 by 20 foot circle kept within 3 feet of her person. She can only create and manipulate one type of pollen in which breathed in will cause drowsiness and will cause an individual to fall asleep if they are exposed to it for 3 posts. While she can choose to disperse the pollen with in the entire field, she can also chose to isolate it into smaller clouds. She can maintain the control of the flowers for 4 posts. Drowsiness will remain for 2 posts once they have been exposed and 4 posts if they have fallen asleep. After using her ability, Remi will need a 10 post cool down before using it again.
        *LEVEL 1▬ As her abilities improve, Remi is able to expand the field of her flowers to a circle of 30 by 30 feet circle that must be kept 5 feet from her person. She also unlocks a new type of pollen that clouds ones senses, blurs vision, mutes hearing, and disrupts scent. It is effective as soon as one is exposed. The effects will wear off after 2 posts of being removed from the pollen. Remi is now able to maintain her control for 6 posts while still requiring a 10 post cool down.
        *LEVEL 2▬ With further training Remi will be able to control the plants within a 40 foot circle that must be kept within 7 feet of her person. Once again she unlocks another type of pollen. It will cause increased difficulty of movement and motor functions the moment one is exposed and complete paralysis if exposed for more than 5 posts. The effects will wear off within 2 posts of being removed from the field. She is now able to maintain her control for 8 posts while needing a 12 post cool down.
        *LEVEL 3 ▬ In this final level her range expands to a field of 50 by 50 feet circle that must be within 9 feet of her person. The final type of pollen she unlocks is actually a poison. It is completely painless but will continually drain ones aura the longer they are exposed. It will not kill an enemy, but has the potential to drain a person to complete exhaustion and possibly cause them to pass out. Aura is not instantly regained by removing oneself from the field, however, it will not continue draining their aura once they've escaped and their aura will replenish at normal speeds afterwards. They must remain in the field for 10 consecutive posts to be drained completely, otherwise their aura is simply drained by 10% for every post they remain. Remi can maintain her control for 10 posts while still needing a 12 post cool down.
        *DRAWBACKS ▬ First and foremost, Remi is not immune to her own pollen. If she were to be exposed she would face the same effects, as would her team. For that reason Remi has to use a lot of focus to be sure she does not accidently hit her allies with its potency. Beyond that, all it would take to defend against her ability would be to never even enter her field of work or to escape it. Once the effects wear off her ability becomes essentially useless. If she drains herself entirely, she will be faced to deal with the same symptoms of whatever pollen she was manipulating before passing out until her aura has been restored.


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Greetings, I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill for you is something we will see in our time together. While I usually have a knack for flair, i'll keep this much simple. I'll list any questions or concerns I have below on what needs to be done before we can get you approved, but i'll be free to contact on less... visible areas.

Judgement:


Archetype:

1. Weakest skill: Please specify at what range things get blurry due to near-sightedness (diana, another butterfly of the tribe, has hers at 25ft).
2. Weakest skill: I would take out the "cannot fly when wet or cold" for now just cause she can't fly with her wings at present.

Semblance:

3. Just to clarify, when it says "Remi is able to control the flowers and diffuse pollen into the air of 20 by 20 foot circle kept within 3 feet of her person." and other versions of that throughout her semblance. Does it mean like anywhere up to 3 feet away she can create this circle? As im also guessing this circle is the field of flowers she makes too?
4. For the level 1 ability, I would just say it takes a post of them being exposed before they are fully affected; essentially in that post they'll begin to feel it and be fully affected by the next one. Just so its not instant (as can be seen with other semblances, people usually don't get out of the range quickly if ever lol). Same for level 2 ability where I would like it to take 1 post of being exposed before they are fully affected. Paralysis I would buff to say if they were exposed to it for at least 5 posts.
5. For the level 3 i'm curious; does it just drain the aura to get it out of the person or is it stored/ used in some way as well? Need to know this before I can fully judge the rate of it.
6. I also noticed you mention she can freely manipulate any plants in the field. We have a person who manipulates a certain number of plants as the focus of their semblance, but not a whole fields worth freely(Chloris here). Since the main focus of this one is pollen and it does a lot with that, I would veer away from manipulating plants in the field for that reason (outside of how she sets it to be when first creating it).

∰-Conclusion

This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows.
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