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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 6:26 pm

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Nickname/Alias: Snowy
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Race: Shifter
Clans: Unknown
Classification: Adventurer
Date of Birth: Late Winter, 25th
Orientation: Bi-Curious
Relationship Status: Single

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Physical Build: Slim
Weight: 125LBS
Height: 5'6"
Hair Color: White
Eye Color/Distinctions: Crimson
Scars/piercings/markings: N/A
Habits: Humming

Personality: Snow is a pretty quiet individual, one who speaks only when she has to or if she has something to contribute to the conversation. Like her friends she is also very adventurous and always looking forward to her next adventure; be it a dungeon raid or something much larger. Snow is rather loyal, kind, generous to those she meets in hope to form new relationships and contacts. Even so, she can be very harsh on those who betray her or those who are rude and downright mean.
Biography: There is not much known about Snows' past or not much that she can remember that is. What she can remember is the sounds and screams of people around her and fire... lots of fire. She also vaguely remembers a man who tended to her afterward before she was left to fend for herself. Lucky she succeeded in doing so and made a living adventuring. This was how she met Chilia and her ragtag group of friends. After a few adventures with the group, she decided to stay and remained with them till this day
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Likes:

- Adventuring
- Tea
- Snow
- Moonlight
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Dislikes:

- Bitter Food
- Loud Noises
- Cats
- Tight Places
- (Feel free to add more..)

Fears:

- Being forgotten
- Not being near land (Being surrounded by water)
- Losing her comrades
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 6:32 pm

Classification: Four Legged

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Shifter Type: Agility

Passive: Smell: Snow has a great sense of smell that is far greater than most other shifters. This makes Snow a great tracker when one is needed in her group.

Shifter Abilities:

Dash: This ability allows Snow to dash towards her enemy or another location nearby at incredable speed that suppasses what is gifted for a four legged shifter.

(Lasts: Two post
Cooldown:) Four Post

Power Slash: A power slash attack. Snow rushes up on her enemy and swips with her claws. This attack does more damage than a normal type of slash since she puts more speed and power into it. This attack could leave the opponent stunned for one turn (One post) The Stun effect, however, seems to only affect humans and some other weres
(Lasts: One Post
Cooldown: Five Post

: Blood Lust A very rare ability and one hardly used. When Snow losses too much blood she would enter a state of mind where she is all out violent and relentless. Pain is no longer an issue for her and she will continue the assault till she is left bloody, exhausted or dead.
(Lasts: Two Post
Cooldown:) One Day

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Asra Karimi

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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 6:00 pm

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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 7:13 pm

It's great to see this character finished! Just a few things before you're good to go:

Dash: To make this ability more effective for your character, so you aren't waiting too long to do it again, I would say make it a smaller post duration so then you can make it a smaller cooldown. Your character would be more effective to help allies and keep from easily controlling the field for a crazy amount of time.

Smash Down: I don't quite understand this ability. In human form the Shifters do not have access to abilities, and for a wolf to start punching and kicking is kinda weird lol Maybe swipes, or bites that could leave certain armor sundered. Depending, this will need some type of drawback.

Blood Lust: There are many different abilities that have this same concept- which is just fine! However, all of those abilities have a 2 post limit with a massive cooldown lasting up to a day or two. So if you could just change that, then this ability would be good to go.

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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 3:10 pm

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It's great to see this character finished! Just a few things before you're good to go:

Dash: To make this ability more effective for your character, so you aren't waiting too long to do it again, I would say make it a smaller post duration so then you can make it a smaller cooldown. Your character would be more effective to help allies and keep from easily controlling the field for a crazy amount of time.

Smash Down: I don't quite understand this ability. In human form the Shifters do not have access to abilities, and for a wolf to start punching and kicking is kinda weird lol Maybe swipes, or bites that could leave certain armor sundered. Depending, this will need some type of drawback.

Blood Lust: There are many different abilities that have this same concept- which is just fine! However, all of those abilities have a 2 post limit with a massive cooldown lasting up to a day or two. So if you could just change that, then this ability would be good to go.

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Fixed.. thought I already replied this XD

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 6:45 pm

Asra Karimi

Uh oh, it seems I led you down the wrong path. I'm sorry! crying

With Dash, the cooldown must be longer than the post duration. I would say you can run at those speeds for 2 posts max, and need to catch your breath and have a cooldown fo 3-4.

With Power Slash, can you stun normal people or Runics with body enhancements or CEBA units?

Blood Lust looks great!

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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 6:48 pm

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Uh oh, it seems I led you down the wrong path. I'm sorry! crying

With Dash, the cooldown must be longer than the post duration. I would say you can run at those speeds for 2 posts max, and need to catch your breath and have a cooldown fo 3-4.

With Power Slash, can you stun normal people or Runics with body enhancements or CEBA units?

Blood Lust looks great!

*Breaths* Ok... there.. done... I hope XD

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 7:31 pm

Everything is great! Thank you for the changes and-

You aaarrreeee

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