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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2018 1:00 pm


Youroka Kage Ivory Maguire
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╫ C O R E ╫


        *NAME ▬ Ivory Maguire
        *AGE ▬ 18
        *FACTION ▬ ℣ale
        *SEX ▬ Looks like they could be both male or female, however, it is a male.
        *SPECIES ▬ Snow Leopard Faunus
        *CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team MAIN
        *PARTNER(S)Feralis Alarick, Jessica Morrison (deceased) Nova Primrose
        NICKNAME(S) ▬ The Northern Wind, Disgrace, White, Tripod (by Rachel), Beta, Zeta, Ivy, Ivie, Ivi, Ive




╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

        HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft 6 in
        WEIGHT ▬ 130 lbs

        HAIR ▬White/grey, any hair on his body, have the snow leopard patterning
        CLOTHING
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        ACCESSORIES ▬ Earrings that he has that have been sautered into his ears.
        EYES ▬ Bluish grey
        BUILD ▬ Slim
        MARKINGS ▬ There are marks on his body from an Ursa attack. There are scars from when he had his arm sliced off by a portal at the end of the first event.
        FEATURES ▬ Cat ears with no human ears, a long, fluffy tail, and patches of fur on his body.

        PERSONALITY TRAITS
        *Nature ▬ He is a very nervous person when it comes to normal day to day things, however, he seems to have to confidence in himself when it comes to combat. He gets easily stressed, to the point that it causes him to make errors outside of combat.
        VernacularShouta Kazehaya from Kimi ni Todoke
        Positive Traits ▬ He is very considerate, he also is very soft in terms of personality.
        Negative Traits ▬ he gets stressed very easily, if he becomes stressed, he makes mistakes, and becomes very clumsy.

        LIKES
          Hobbies/Talents▬ he enjoys looking and finding old relics, even if it's just a coin or two.
          People▬ He would prefer to be with calmer people, when someone is too active, he starts to feel stressed. He also likes head rubs.
          Foods▬ He likes meat and fish.
          Objects▬ Older things that he likes to try and make them whole again.
          Animals▬ cats

        DISLIKES
          People▬ He has a strong dislike for rude people, or people who try to use peer pressure.
          Foods▬ Broccoli, leafy vegetables
          Objects▬ Wire brushes.
          Animals



╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

        TALENTS
        Primary Talent ▬ Agility- Ivory has the ability to move quickly and easily.
        Secondary Talent ▬ Acrobatics- Ivory is able to do spectacular gymnastic feats, doing flips, jumping a little further.
        Tertiary Talents ▬ Sensing the wind direction
        ▬ Flexibility- Ivory is very flexible to the point that he can but his leg behind his head, and can almost do a full split.

        SKILLS
        Primary SkillMedieval Swordplay
        Secondary Skills ▬ Navigating Wilderness (Best at mountainous areas)
        Tertiary Skills ▬ Climbing- Ivory is a good climber
        ▬ Misdirection- Ivory is able to use his natural abilities to preform feints. This also allows him to know how to use dust to make adventurous distractions to regroup.
        WEAKNESSES
        *Exploitable Combat Weakness ▬ Multiple attacks. At most, Ivory can only deal with 2 attacks at a time, anymore than that and he is not able to fully defend himself.
        ▬ Slow Healing- Ivory doesn't heal as fast as others, hindering him when he does get hit. For example, a deep gash on his arm would almost completely disable his arm, while bleeding out at the same time. While Aura can speed this up, it still takes almost 1/4 more the time to heal a wound with it. Without aura, it takes nearly double the time to heal.
        *Exploitable Fear ▬ Failure- Ivory is afraid of failing everyone. This can be in combat when he fails to protect and ally, or just in general.

        FAUNUS
        Primary Trait ▬ Ivory uses his tail as a way to have greater balance, What would normally bring down a normal person might just have him move slightly from the pressure. He also always lands on his feet.
        Secondary Trait ▬ He has a more sensitive nose, making it easier to track people and to smell hidden enemies, however, this is a double edged sword.
        Tertiary Trait ▬ Built for cold- Ivory has a higher tolerance for cold weather. This is because the fur/hair is thick on his body. his nose even has a way of heating up cold winter air.
        Exploitable Faunus Combat Weakness ▬ Weak Immune system- This can be translated to both a combat and non-combat weakness. In combat, it means that effects like poisons or diseases work on him faster than a human. Out of combat, if someone were to sneeze on him, he could easily get sick.



╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

        *BACKGROUNDIvory grew up in the mountains with other mountain cat faunus. He learned how to work with and against the wind while there. However, things were especially stressful for him. His home was like a pack, and he was not an alpha. Most of the tribe felt that he was worthless, as he wasn't able to hunt without over thinking. He also didn't have claws to assist in hunting. That is when he took up the sword. He had to practice on his own, as the tribe saw him as not worth teaching. He learned what he could, from training on his own. He would then try to hunt on his own, however, he ran into a Grim while hunting. It was an Ursa. He was scared, but he had to use his blade to fight it. It injured him greatly, however, his semblance activated for the first time, causing the air to protect him enough so that he could run away from it.

        After that, he had to recover, the tribe wasn't into helping him, therefore his parents paid for him to go down the mountain, into Vale itself. He didn't want to leave, however, it was the best for him. He swore that if he could, he would protect people from Grimm. He had felt the claws doing into his body. There was no reason for that. He had to help. So he signed up to go to Signal. That was were he forged his Twinpistol Sword. However, he was very unsocialized, seeing that his tribe mostly left him alone. He gets very stressed in public areas.

        Now he has finally made it to Beacon. He always carries an Ursa grim mask, to remind him of why he does this. He hardly ever wears it though, as he is not a beast.

        In the recent months of being at beacon, his time has been hell. During the first class, he was made to fight one of his fears, an Ursa. It was already damaged, and was wearing a muzzle, however, it was this day he learned two things. One, do not ******** with the head master, he will sit there and watch you struggle, until you do it on your own. The second thing is that strength comes from working as a team. That Grimm studdies class was eventful, but he met someone that he considered a friend, Lunestra.

        After that class, the next day they went to find out who their team was. That day he was teamed up with Lunestra Krayeth, Jessica Morison, and Long Shui-Lin. Two of the three people on his team were in class with him the day before. However, as the lists were announced, there was also a security threat. Three students had been taken. Lavender and Donnelly Erlking, and Long Shui-Lin. They were taken by a group of Anti-faunus humans, called The Tribe.

        The first mission for him appeared to be a failure, until Donnelly Erlking was saved by another team on the same mission. Ivory had helped the man by giving him his suit jacket. However, the Tribe was not done with them. Underneath his team's feet, there was a bomb, that they detonated. The explosion sent Ivory crashing into a wall, using all of his Aura as not to kill him. Like always, he landed on his feet. He had found Jessica, and helped her out, but not before he saw the remnants of Lunestra, her beautiful wings had brought her onto the ceiling, where she was impaled on the metal. The most haunting thing, was the person he learned to fear, the headmaster was broken. That day, he learned another lesson. Even the strongest, lost, and could become broken.

        Once he got Jessica and her sister, Oxynia out of the building, he knew he had to stop the fire. Without Aura, he did something incredibly stupid. He jumped into the hole where the bomb had gone off, and he used his semblence, something that could have killed him. He passed out, only to be brought out of the building by Jessica.

        His soul burned with a want to get vengeance on the tribe. The next part of the mission, they were sent into the bowels of the tower, into the home base of the tribe. Everyone that had someone missing from their teams were there. Team DAND, Team JLRX, and His team, which was only Him and Jessica now. He was determined that nothing would happen to her. They got further in, and his protection of her was only making things worse. Yes he could see in the dark better than her, but he was using his tail not for balance, but for keeping her corralled.

        Everything came to a head when they found a child in the sewers. They were then set under a falling trap, causing them to fall in a pit with Grimm, the boss looking down on them. They defeated them, and then they were teleported twice. However, the villain was not done. He pulled Long out from her hiding spot, and stabbed her in front of the teams. Ivory rushed forward, only for the villain to slit her throat. By the time Ivory got to her, the life was leaving her body. Once she was dead, he vowed to kill him. He didn't care at what cost. She was innocent, and didn't deserve what had happened. In the end, Lavender suffered the same fate as Long and her brother. They were unable to save anyone other than the girl. He stabbed the man, right as he was about to escape through a portal, Ivory twisted his blade into the man, causing the portal to close shut on both the enemy, and on Ivory's hand. While it killed the enemy, it left Ivory without a right hand.

        He made sure that the bodies of the fallen were brought up, but not before he finally passed out because of blood loss. He awoke to find that his hand was missing, and there was a cat girl at his side. She was his new team mate, but she came at a difficult time..Ivory was dealing with the lost of a limb, even though it wasn't his dominate hand, he used for certain things.

        It's been about 2 months since then, and he's learned to be with his new team. He's also working with his new Cybernetic arm. However, he's still gripped with doubt, and feels like he failed his friends. His goal since joining beacon has changed. He no longer wants to prove his strength and worth. He wants to protect the people around him, even that pesky, smelly dog.


╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

        PRIMARY WEAPON
        NAMETempest
        DESCRIPTION ▬ Tempest is a longsword with a sheathe. On the handles, there are two pistols.
        Melee Form ▬ A long sword like the picture. It is 36 inches long, weighing 3 lb
        Ranged Form ▬ Ivory has to sheathe his sword, removing the guns from the handle.
        Other Form(s) ▬ Just a sheathe
        Ammo Type ▬ Aura (Feels like cold wind)
        DRAWBACKS ▬ As it is a sword and pistols, Ivory's effective range is 90 meters. He isn't able to to go further than that, without the bullets almost bouncing off of people.

        OTHER WEAPONS
        ▬ Caltrops
        Original Cybernetic as it was a gift from a now dead friend. He can no longer attach it to his nub
        His right hand is Cybernetic, painted light blue and black, they now have retractable claws, that have a 20% misfire rate when he hits the button.


        Ammo Carried

        ITEMS
        ▬ Scroll
        ▬ Ursa mask
        ▬ Communication device built for cat ears.
        A non-weaponized cybernetic arm used just to replace his right hand in non-combat situations. It connects to his arm the same way as the weaponized one, and his painted black and blue


╫ C Y B E R N E T I C S ╫

        NAME ▬ Piercing Gale
        CYBERNETIC PIECEPiercing Gale is a clawed arm that is used for combat. Only the hand is missing, however, this Cybernetic goes up to his elbow. In Ivory's wrist and elbow, there are connecting rods that have wires in them, connecting his nerves to the metal itself, allowing control of the item. He has painted it black and blue in memory of his first cybernetic.
        WEAPONIZATION ▬ Piercing Gale has claws at the end of the fingers that are as sharp as blades. Ivory has a set of interconnected covers for them so he can use them when he isn't in combat on a mission. The claws are as big as a Bewolf's claws.
        ACQUISITIONNight Prowlers: ASSAULT FORCE
        AUGMENTS
        ▬ Dust augmentation- Ivory is able to place a piece of dust in the palm of the hand, and augment it with that type. He is able to slash 3 for a small piece of dust, and 5 for a large one.
        ▬ Communication hub- Ivory is able to place his scroll in a compartment in the forearm that allows it to project his scroll. It can also charge the scroll using aura if Ivory allows it. Ivory can also use it to connect to his ear piece, or have the voice come from the arm itself.



╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

        NAME ▬ Gwynt
        AURA COLORpale turquoise
        AURA FEEL ▬ Ivory's aura feels like the cold wind coming off of a mountain.
        DESCRIPTION ▬ Ivory is able to manipulate air around him.
        Repelling wind ▬ Ivory is able to cause the wind around him to spin, the air is projected within 5 feet of his body. The wind can reflect attacks back at the person attacking. The reflecting mostly works with projectiles and elemental attacks. However, for melee attacks, it would slow an attack by 3/4ths speed for average strength, for decent strength it would slow it by half, and for exceptional strength it would only slow it by 1/4th speed.
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        Arial slash▬ He is able to condense the air around him and throw it in a direction to his target; be it by his hands or through his weapons. When it hits a target, it feels like a concussive hit more than blunt.
        How it is shaped by level:
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        Arial Crash▬ Ivory is able to build wind around him to run, and cause an impact with someone. The wind is able to shield him from damage caused by the charge. He can also use the crash to cushion fall damage. This speed Ivory up by 3 times (x3 speed) He may turn, but it is harder for him to do so, and must be done at wide arcs.
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        LEVEL 3 ▬ (300-399 posts)
        DRAWBACKS ▬ If Ivory loses control of his emotions, the semblance tries to create a vacuum around the person who has caused it. It cares not for friend or foe. The person must be within 10 ft of Ivory for the vacuum to form. The effect lasts until either Ivory can calm down, or 2 posts, whichever happens sooner. The effect is only around the upper body of a person. If this happens to a Grimm, it's only the head.
        ▬ Ivory can not combine the different levels of his Semblance to create different effects. He is allowed to use other levels while things are on cooldown.
        ▬ Ivory's semblance can not work in a vacuum.
        ▬ Extreme heats can dissipate the winds that he manipulates.


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╫ C O R E ╫


        *NAME ▬ Ivory Maguire
        *AGE ▬ 17
        *FACTION ▬ ℣ale
        *SEX ▬ Looks like they could be both male or female, however, it is a male.
        *SPECIES ▬ Snow Leopard Faunus (has ears and a tail)


        *CURRENT TEAM
        *PARTNER(S)
        NICKNAME(S)
        OCCUPATION ▬Student



╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

        HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft 4 in
        WEIGHT ▬ 108 lbs


        HAIR ▬White/grey
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        ACCESSORIES
        EYES ▬ Bluish grey
        BUILD ▬ Slim
        TATTOOS ▬ None.
        SCARS ▬ None
        MARKINGS ▬ Spots on his ear and tail.


╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

        SKILLS & TALENTS
          Primary Talent▬ Sword combat
          Other Talent▬ He is very agile in combat.
          Faunus ability▬ Ivory uses his tail as a way to have greater balance, What would normally bring down a normal person might just have him move slightly from the pressure. He also always lands on his feet. He has a more sensitive nose, making it easier to track people and to smell hidden enemies, however, this is a double edged sword.
          Strongest Ability▬ His agility is his strongest aseptic of his abilities. he also relies on his tail to keep him up against heavier hits.
          Weakest Ability▬ He gets easily stressed, to the point that it causes him to make errors outside of combat.



        LIKES
          Hobbies/Talents▬ he enjoys looking and finding old relics, even if it's just a coin or two.
          People▬ He would prefer to be with calmer people, when someone is too active, he starts to feel stressed. He also likes head rubs.
          Foods▬ He likes meat and fish.
          Objects▬ Older things that he likes to try and make them whole again.
          Animals▬ cats

        DISLIKES
          People▬ He has a strong dislike for rude people, or people who try to use peer pressure.
          Foods▬ Broccoli, leafy vegetables
          Objects▬ Wire brushes.
          Animals▬ Wolves, he's afraid of them.
          Fears▬ Ivory has a fear of Wolves. He found his semblance when he was attacked by wolves.

        PERSONALITY TRAITS
          Psychological Condition▬ He is a very nervous person when it comes to normal day to day things, however, he seems to have to confidence in himself when it comes to combat.
          Vernacular▬ He has a very soft voice.
          Positive▬ He is very considerate, he also is very soft in terms of personality.
          Negative▬ he gets stressed very easily, if he becomes stressed,
          he makes mistakes, and becomes very clumsy.



╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

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╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

        PRIMARY WEAPON
        ▬ Tempest
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        ▬ Aura (Wind like)
        ▬ As it is a sword and pistols, Ivory's effective range is 90 meters. He isn't able to to go further than that, without the bullets almost bouncing off of people.


        OTHER WEAPONS



        ITEMS
        ▬ Scabbard





╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

        *NAME ▬ Gwynt
        *AURA COLORpale turquoise
        *DESCRIPTION
        ▬ When Ivory activates his semblance wind starts picking up around him, activating to his aura pushes beings 5 feet away from him. His main semblance is using the wind to make attacks.
        Level 0: Speed Boost▬ Ivory is able to reduce the amount of wind around him, making it so that he can move faster or swing his blade with less resistance.
        Level 1:Wind Slash▬ Ivory slashes his sword so fast that it creates an arc of wind that can travel 100 ft. After the 100 ft, it disappears.
        Level 2 Wind barrier▬ Ivory makes the wind around him, pick up, and is able to make it so that blows that come towards him are defected to less vulnerable area.
        Level 3 Zephyr Strike▬ Ivory moves the wind from in front of him completely. He then boosts up his speed, attacking 3 times with his sword.
        DRAWBACKS▬ He can only have one of the powers active at a time, therefore, he can not have shield, and Speed boost going.




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          *TOTAL ▬ 4
          *UNTIL NEXT GRADE ▬ 5
          *LOG OF COMPLETION ▬ Class 1 - Grimm Studies with Aurtrox; Kidnapped mission part one, Kidnapped mission part 3, Weapon's class


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    ╫ C O R E ╫


          *NAME ▬ Ivory Maguire
          *AGE ▬ 17
          *FACTION ▬ ℣ale
          *SEX ▬ Looks like they could be both male or female, however, it is a male.
          *SPECIES ▬ Snow Leopard Faunus (has ears and a tail)


          *CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team
          *PARTNER(S)Cherry Woods, Jessica Morrison Nova Primrose
          NICKNAME(S)
          OCCUPATION ▬Student



    ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

          HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft 4 in
          WEIGHT ▬ 108 lbs

          HAIR ▬White/grey
          CLOTHING
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          ACCESSORIES
          EYES ▬ Bluish grey
          BUILD ▬ Slim
          TATTOOS ▬ None.
          SCARS ▬ There are marks on his body from an Ursa attack.
          MARKINGS ▬ Spots on his ear and tail.


    ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

          SKILLS & TALENTS
            Primary Talent▬ Sword combat
            Other Talent▬ He is very agile in combat.
            Faunus ability▬ Ivory uses his tail as a way to have greater balance, What would normally bring down a normal person might just have him move slightly from the pressure. He also always lands on his feet. He has a more sensitive nose, making it easier to track people and to smell hidden enemies, however, this is a double edged sword.
            Strongest Ability▬ His agility is his strongest aseptic of his abilities. He also relies on his tail to keep him up against heavier hits.
            Weakest Ability▬ He gets easily stressed, to the point that it causes him to make errors outside of combat.


          LIKES
            Hobbies/Talents▬ he enjoys looking and finding old relics, even if it's just a coin or two.
            People▬ He would prefer to be with calmer people, when someone is too active, he starts to feel stressed. He also likes head rubs.
            Foods▬ He likes meat and fish.
            Objects▬ Older things that he likes to try and make them whole again.
            Animals▬ cats

          DISLIKES
            People▬ He has a strong dislike for rude people, or people who try to use peer pressure.
            Foods▬ Broccoli, leafy vegetables
            Objects▬ Wire brushes.
            Animals▬ Wolves, he's afraid of them.
            Fears▬ Ivory has a fear of Wolves. He found his semblance when he was attacked by wolves.

          PERSONALITY TRAITS
            Psychological Condition▬ He is a very nervous person when it comes to normal day to day things, however, he seems to have to confidence in himself when it comes to combat.
            Vernacular▬ He has a very soft voice.
            Positive▬ He is very considerate, he also is very soft in terms of personality.
            Negative▬ he gets stressed very easily, if he becomes stressed,
            he makes mistakes, and becomes very clumsy.



    ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

          BACKGROUND ▬ Ivory grew up in the mountains with other mountain cat faunus. He learned how to work with and against the wind while there. However, things were especially stressful for him. His home was like a pack, and he was not an alpha. Most of the tribe felt that he was worthless, as he wasn't able to hunt without over thinking. He also didn't have claws to assist in hunting. That is when he took up the sword. He had to practice on his own, as the tribe saw him as not worth teaching. He learned what he could, from training on his own. He would then try to hunt on his own, however, he ran into a Grim while hunting. It was an Ursa. He was scared, but he had to use his blade to fight it. It injured him greatly, however, his semblance activated for the first time, causing the air to protect him enough so that he could run away from it.

          After that, he had to recover, the tribe wasn't into helping him, therefore his parents paid for him to go down the mountain, into Vale itself. He didn't want to leave, however, it was the best for him. He swore that if he could, he would protect people from Grimm. He had felt the claws doing into his body. There was no reason for that. He had to help. So he signed up to go to Signal. That was were he forged his Twinpistol Sword. However, he was very unsocialized, seeing that his tribe mostly left him alone. He gets very stressed in public areas.

          Now he has finally made it to Beacon. He always carries an Ursa grim mask, to remind him of why he does this. He hardly ever wears it though, as he is not a beast.

          In the recent months of being at beacon, his time has been hell. During the first class, he was made to fight one of his fears, an Ursa. It was already damaged, and was wearing a muzzle, however, it was this day he learned two things. One, do not ******** with the head master, he will sit there and watch you struggle, until you do it on your own. The second thing is that strength comes from working as a team. That Grimm studdies class was eventful, but he met someone that he considered a friend, Lunestra.

          After that class, the next day they went to find out who their team was. That day he was teamed up with Lunestra Krayeth, Jessica Morison, and Long Shui-Lin. Two of the three people on his team were in class with him the day before. However, as the lists were announced, there was also a security threat. Three students had been taken. Lavender and Donnelly Erlking, and Long Shui-Lin. They were taken by a group of Anti-faunus humans, called The Tribe.

          The first mission for him appeared to be a failure, until Donnelly Erlking was saved by another team on the same mission. Ivory had helped the man by giving him his suit jacket. However, the Tribe was not done with them. Underneath his team's feet, there was a bomb, that they detonated. The explosion sent Ivory crashing into a wall, using all of his Aura as not to kill him. Like always, he landed on his feet. He had found Jessica, and helped her out, but not before he saw the remnants of Lunestra, her beautiful wings had brought her onto the ceiling, where she was impaled on the metal. The most haunting thing, was the person he learned to fear, the headmaster was broken. That day, he learned another lesson. Even the strongest, lost, and could become broken.

          Once he got Jessica and her sister, Oxynia out of the building, he knew he had to stop the fire. Without Aura, he did something incredibly stupid. He jumped into the hole where the bomb had gone off, and he used his semblence, something that could have killed him. He passed out, only to be brought out of the building by Jessica.

          His soul burned with a want to get vengeance on the tribe. The next part of the mission, they were sent into the bowels of the tower, into the home base of the tribe. Everyone that had someone missing from their teams were there. Team DAND, Team JLRX, and His team, which was only Him and Jessica now. He was determined that nothing would happen to her. They got further in, and his protection of her was only making things worse. Yes he could see in the dark better than her, but he was using his tail not for balance, but for keeping her corralled.

          Everything came to a head when they found a child in the sewers. They were then set under a falling trap, causing them to fall in a pit with Grimm, the boss looking down on them. They defeated them, and then they were teleported twice. However, the villain was not done. He pulled Long out from her hiding spot, and stabbed her in front of the teams. Ivory rushed forward, only for the villain to slit her throat. By the time Ivory got to her, the life was leaving her body. Once she was dead, he vowed to kill him. He didn't care at what cost. She was innocent, and didn't deserve what had happened. In the end, Lavender suffered the same fate as Long and her brother. They were unable to save anyone other than the girl. He stabbed the man, right as he was about to escape through a portal, Ivory twisted his blade into the man, causing the portal to close shut on both the enemy, and on Ivory's hand. While it killed the enemy, it left Ivory without a right hand.

          He made sure that the bodies of the fallen were brought up, but not before he finally passed out because of blood loss. He awoke to find that his hand was missing, and there was a cat girl at his side. She was his new team mate, but she came at a difficult time..Ivory was dealing with the lost of a limb, even though it wasn't his dominate hand, he used for certain things.

          It's been about 2 months since then, and he's learned to be with his new team. He's also working with his new Cybernetic arm. However, he's still gripped with doubt, and feels like he failed his friends. His goal since joining beacon has changed. He no longer wants to prove his strength and worth. He wants to protect the people around him, even that pesky, smelly dog.


    ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

          PRIMARY WEAPON
          ▬ Tempest
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          ▬ Aura (Wind like)
          ▬ As it is a sword and pistols, Ivory's effective range is 90 meters. He isn't able to to go further than that, without the bullets almost bouncing off of people.


          OTHER WEAPONS
          ▬ His right hand is Cybernetic, painted light blue and black.


          ITEMS
          ▬ Scabbard
          ▬ Ursa Mask.



    ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

          *NAME ▬ Gwynt
          *AURA COLORpale turquoise
          *DESCRIPTION
          ▬ When Ivory activates his semblance wind starts picking up around him, activating to his aura pushes beings 5 feet away from him. His main semblance is using the wind to make attacks.
          Level 0: Speed Boost▬ Ivory is able to reduce the amount of wind around him, making it so that he can move faster or swing his blade with less resistance.
          Level 1:Wind barrier▬ Ivory makes the wind around him, pick up, and is able to make it so that blows that come towards him are defected to less vulnerable area. This lasts for 3 posts. However, if something big is incoming, he can extend the wind further to 30 ft to cover those around him. If he does this, his Semblence immediately ends, and he runs out of Aura.
          Level 2 Zephyr Strike▬ Ivory moves the wind from in front of him completely. He then boosts up his speed, attacking 3 times with his sword. This ability can be activated 3 times.
          Level 3 Ivory's control of the wind becomes more powerful. He is able to use all of his abilities on others instead of just himself. His level 1 is now able to be used twice before he loses everything. This level that can be used on allies lasts for 5 posts.
          DRAWBACKS▬ He can only have one of the powers active at a time, therefore, he can not have shield, and Speed boost going.

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    ╫ C O R E ╫


          *NAME ▬ Ivory Maguire
          *AGE ▬ 17
          *FACTION ▬ ℣ale
          *SEX ▬ Looks like they could be both male or female, however, it is a male.
          *SPECIES ▬ Snow Leopard Faunus (has ears and a tail)


          *CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team MAIN
          *PARTNER(S)Feralis Alarick, Jessica Morrison Nova Primrose
          NICKNAME(S)
          OCCUPATION ▬Student



    ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

          HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft 4 in
          WEIGHT ▬ 108 lbs

          HAIR ▬White/grey
          CLOTHING
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          ACCESSORIES ▬ Earings that he has that have been sautered into his ears.
          EYES ▬ Bluish grey
          BUILD ▬ Slim
          TATTOOS ▬ None.
          SCARS ▬ There are marks on his body from an Ursa attack.
          MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Spots on his ear and tail.


    ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

          NATURAL ABILITIES
            Primary Talent▬ Agility
            Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent/Skill ▬▬ Ivory uses his tail as a way to have greater balance, What would normally bring down a normal person might just have him move slightly from the pressure. He also always lands on his feet.
            Other Talent▬ Acrobatics, Work Ethic.
            LEARNT ABILITIES
            Strongest Skill▬ Swordplay
            Weakest Skill▬ Multitasking- Ivory gets easily distracted by things.
            Other Skills
            ~Navigating Wilderness (Best at mountainous areas)
            ~Climbing things
            ~ He has a more sensitive nose, making it easier to track people and to smell hidden enemies, however, this is a double edged sword.


          LIKES
            Hobbies/Talents▬ he enjoys looking and finding old relics, even if it's just a coin or two.
            People▬ He would prefer to be with calmer people, when someone is too active, he starts to feel stressed. He also likes head rubs.
            Foods▬ He likes meat and fish.
            Objects▬ Older things that he likes to try and make them whole again.
            Animals▬ cats

          DISLIKES
            People▬ He has a strong dislike for rude people, or people who try to use peer pressure.
            Foods▬ Broccoli, leafy vegetables
            Objects▬ Wire brushes.
            Animals▬ Wolves, he's afraid of them.
            Fears▬ Ivory has a fear of Wolves. He found his semblance when he was attacked by wolves.

          PERSONALITY TRAITS
            Psychological Condition▬ He is a very nervous person when it comes to normal day to day things, however, he seems to have to confidence in himself when it comes to combat. He gets easily stressed, to the point that it causes him to make errors outside of combat.
            Vernacular▬ He has a very soft voice.
            Positive▬ He is very considerate, he also is very soft in terms of personality.
            Negative▬ he gets stressed very easily, if he becomes stressed,
            he makes mistakes, and becomes very clumsy.



    ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

          BACKGROUND ▬ Ivory grew up in the mountains with other mountain cat faunus. He learned how to work with and against the wind while there. However, things were especially stressful for him. His home was like a pack, and he was not an alpha. Most of the tribe felt that he was worthless, as he wasn't able to hunt without over thinking. He also didn't have claws to assist in hunting. That is when he took up the sword. He had to practice on his own, as the tribe saw him as not worth teaching. He learned what he could, from training on his own. He would then try to hunt on his own, however, he ran into a Grim while hunting. It was an Ursa. He was scared, but he had to use his blade to fight it. It injured him greatly, however, his semblance activated for the first time, causing the air to protect him enough so that he could run away from it.

          After that, he had to recover, the tribe wasn't into helping him, therefore his parents paid for him to go down the mountain, into Vale itself. He didn't want to leave, however, it was the best for him. He swore that if he could, he would protect people from Grimm. He had felt the claws doing into his body. There was no reason for that. He had to help. So he signed up to go to Signal. That was were he forged his Twinpistol Sword. However, he was very unsocialized, seeing that his tribe mostly left him alone. He gets very stressed in public areas.

          Now he has finally made it to Beacon. He always carries an Ursa grim mask, to remind him of why he does this. He hardly ever wears it though, as he is not a beast.

          In the recent months of being at beacon, his time has been hell. During the first class, he was made to fight one of his fears, an Ursa. It was already damaged, and was wearing a muzzle, however, it was this day he learned two things. One, do not ******** with the head master, he will sit there and watch you struggle, until you do it on your own. The second thing is that strength comes from working as a team. That Grimm studdies class was eventful, but he met someone that he considered a friend, Lunestra.

          After that class, the next day they went to find out who their team was. That day he was teamed up with Lunestra Krayeth, Jessica Morison, and Long Shui-Lin. Two of the three people on his team were in class with him the day before. However, as the lists were announced, there was also a security threat. Three students had been taken. Lavender and Donnelly Erlking, and Long Shui-Lin. They were taken by a group of Anti-faunus humans, called The Tribe.

          The first mission for him appeared to be a failure, until Donnelly Erlking was saved by another team on the same mission. Ivory had helped the man by giving him his suit jacket. However, the Tribe was not done with them. Underneath his team's feet, there was a bomb, that they detonated. The explosion sent Ivory crashing into a wall, using all of his Aura as not to kill him. Like always, he landed on his feet. He had found Jessica, and helped her out, but not before he saw the remnants of Lunestra, her beautiful wings had brought her onto the ceiling, where she was impaled on the metal. The most haunting thing, was the person he learned to fear, the headmaster was broken. That day, he learned another lesson. Even the strongest, lost, and could become broken.

          Once he got Jessica and her sister, Oxynia out of the building, he knew he had to stop the fire. Without Aura, he did something incredibly stupid. He jumped into the hole where the bomb had gone off, and he used his semblence, something that could have killed him. He passed out, only to be brought out of the building by Jessica.

          His soul burned with a want to get vengeance on the tribe. The next part of the mission, they were sent into the bowels of the tower, into the home base of the tribe. Everyone that had someone missing from their teams were there. Team DAND, Team JLRX, and His team, which was only Him and Jessica now. He was determined that nothing would happen to her. They got further in, and his protection of her was only making things worse. Yes he could see in the dark better than her, but he was using his tail not for balance, but for keeping her corralled.

          Everything came to a head when they found a child in the sewers. They were then set under a falling trap, causing them to fall in a pit with Grimm, the boss looking down on them. They defeated them, and then they were teleported twice. However, the villain was not done. He pulled Long out from her hiding spot, and stabbed her in front of the teams. Ivory rushed forward, only for the villain to slit her throat. By the time Ivory got to her, the life was leaving her body. Once she was dead, he vowed to kill him. He didn't care at what cost. She was innocent, and didn't deserve what had happened. In the end, Lavender suffered the same fate as Long and her brother. They were unable to save anyone other than the girl. He stabbed the man, right as he was about to escape through a portal, Ivory twisted his blade into the man, causing the portal to close shut on both the enemy, and on Ivory's hand. While it killed the enemy, it left Ivory without a right hand.

          He made sure that the bodies of the fallen were brought up, but not before he finally passed out because of blood loss. He awoke to find that his hand was missing, and there was a cat girl at his side. She was his new team mate, but she came at a difficult time..Ivory was dealing with the lost of a limb, even though it wasn't his dominate hand, he used for certain things.

          It's been about 2 months since then, and he's learned to be with his new team. He's also working with his new Cybernetic arm. However, he's still gripped with doubt, and feels like he failed his friends. His goal since joining beacon has changed. He no longer wants to prove his strength and worth. He wants to protect the people around him, even that pesky, smelly dog.


    ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

          PRIMARY WEAPON
          ▬ Tempest
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          ▬ Aura (Wind like)
          ▬ As it is a sword and pistols, Ivory's effective range is 90 meters. He isn't able to to go further than that, without the bullets almost bouncing off of people.


          OTHER WEAPONS
          ▬ His right hand is Cybernetic, painted light blue and black, they now have retractable claws, that have a 20% misfire rate when he hits the button.


          ITEMS
          ▬ Scabbard
          ▬ Ursa Mask.
          ▬ Communication device built for cat ears.


    ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

          *NAME ▬ Gwynt
          *AURA COLORpale turquoise
          *DESCRIPTION
          ▬ When Ivory activates his semblance wind starts picking up around him, activating to his aura pushes beings 5 feet away from him. His main semblance is using the wind to make attacks.
          Level 0: Speed Boost▬ Ivory is able to reduce the amount of wind around him, making it so that he can move faster or swing his blade with less resistance.
          Level 1:Wind barrier▬ Ivory makes the wind around him, pick up, and is able to make it so that blows that come towards him are defected to less vulnerable area. This lasts for 3 posts. However, if something big is incoming, he can extend the wind further to 30 ft to cover those around him. If he does this, his Semblence immediately ends, and he runs out of Aura.
          Level 2 Zephyr Strike▬ Ivory moves the wind from in front of him completely. He then boosts up his speed, attacking 3 times with his sword. This ability can be activated 3 times.
          Level 3 Ivory's control of the wind becomes more powerful. He is able to use all of his abilities on others instead of just himself. His level 1 is now able to be used twice before he loses everything. This level that can be used on allies lasts for 5 posts.
          DRAWBACKS▬ He can only have one of the powers active at a time, therefore, he can not have shield, and Speed boost going.

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    PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2021 11:18 am


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    Youroka Kage Ivory Maguire
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    ╫ C O R E ╫


          *NAME ▬ Ivory Maguire
          *AGE ▬ 18
          *FACTION ▬ ℣ale
          *SEX ▬ Looks like they could be both male or female, however, it is a male.
          *SPECIES ▬ Snow Leopard Faunus
          *CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team MAIN
          *PARTNER(S)Feralis Alarick, Jessica Morrison (deceased) Nova Primrose
          NICKNAME(S) ▬ The Northern Wind, Disgrace, White, Tripod (by Rachel), Beta, Zeta, Ivy, Ivie, Ivi, Ive




    ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

          HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft 6 in
          WEIGHT ▬ 130 lbs

          HAIR ▬White/grey, any hair on his body, have the snow leopard patterning
          CLOTHING
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          ACCESSORIES ▬ Earrings that he has that have been sautered into his ears.
          EYES ▬ Bluish grey
          BUILD ▬ Slim
          MARKINGS ▬ There are marks on his body from an Ursa attack. There are scars from when he had his arm sliced off by a portal at the end of the first event.
          FEATURES ▬ Cat ears with no human ears, a long, fluffy tail, and patches of fur on his body.

          PERSONALITY TRAITS
          *Nature ▬ He is a very nervous person when it comes to normal day to day things, however, he seems to have to confidence in himself when it comes to combat. He gets easily stressed, to the point that it causes him to make errors outside of combat.
          VernacularShouta Kazehaya from Kimi ni Todoke
          Positive Traits ▬ He is very considerate, he also is very soft in terms of personality.
          Negative Traits ▬ he gets stressed very easily, if he becomes stressed, he makes mistakes, and becomes very clumsy.

          LIKES
            Hobbies/Talents▬ he enjoys looking and finding old relics, even if it's just a coin or two.
            People▬ He would prefer to be with calmer people, when someone is too active, he starts to feel stressed. He also likes head rubs.
            Foods▬ He likes meat and fish.
            Objects▬ Older things that he likes to try and make them whole again.
            Animals▬ cats

          DISLIKES
            People▬ He has a strong dislike for rude people, or people who try to use peer pressure.
            Foods▬ Broccoli, leafy vegetables
            Objects▬ Wire brushes.
            Animals



    ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

          TALENTS
          Primary Talent ▬ Agility- Ivory has the ability to move quickly and easily.
          Secondary Talent ▬ Acrobatics- Ivory is able to do spectacular gymnastic feats, doing flips, jumping a little further.
          Tertiary Talents ▬ Sensing the wind direction
          ▬ Flexibility- Ivory is very flexible to the point that he can but his leg behind his head, and can almost do a full split.

          SKILLS
          Primary SkillMedieval Swordplay
          Secondary Skills ▬ Navigating Wilderness (Best at mountainous areas)
          Tertiary Skills ▬ Climbing- Ivory is a good climber
          ▬ He has a more sensitive nose, making it easier to track people and to smell hidden enemies, however, this is a double edged sword.
          WEAKNESSES
          *Exploitable Combat Weakness ▬ Multiple attacks. At most, Ivory can only deal with 2 attacks at a time, anymore than that and he is not able to fully defend himself.
          *Exploitable Fear ▬ Failure- Ivory is afraid of failing everyone. This can be in combat when he fails to protect and ally, or just in general.

          FAUNUS
          Primary Trait ▬ Ivory uses his tail as a way to have greater balance, What would normally bring down a normal person might just have him move slightly from the pressure. He also always lands on his feet.
          Secondary Trait
          Tertiary Trait ▬ Built for cold- Ivory has a higher tolerance for cold weather. This is because the fur/hair is thick on his body. his nose even has a way of heating up cold winter air.
          Exploitable Faunus Combat Weakness ▬ Weak Immune system- This can be translated to both a combat and non-combat weakness. In combat, it means that effects like poisons or diseases work on him faster than a human. Out of combat, if someone were to sneeze on him, he could easily get sick.



    ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

          *BACKGROUNDTake this as a chance to add onto your background with the noteworthy experience your character has had since starting off in the guild along with what you already have.

    ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

          PRIMARY WEAPON
          NAMETempest
          DESCRIPTION ▬ Tempest is a longsword with a sheathe. On the handles, there are two pistols.
          Melee Form ▬ A long sword like the picture. It is 36 inches long, weighing 3 lb
          Ranged Form ▬ Ivory has to sheathe his sword, removing the guns from the handle.
          Other Form(s) ▬ Just a sheathe
          Ammo Type ▬ Aura (Feels like cold wind)
          DRAWBACKS ▬ As it is a sword and pistols, Ivory's effective range is 90 meters. He isn't able to to go further than that, without the bullets almost bouncing off of people.

          OTHER WEAPONS
          ▬ Caltrops
          Original Cybernetic as it was a gift from a now dead friend. He can no longer attach it to his nub
          His right hand is Cybernetic, painted light blue and black, they now have retractable claws, that have a 20% misfire rate when he hits the button.


          Ammo Carried

          ITEMS
          ▬ Scroll
          ▬ Ursa mask
          ▬ Communication device built for cat ears.
          A non-weaponized cybernetic arm used just to replace his right hand in non-combat situations. It connects to his arm the same way as the weaponized one, and his painted black and blue


    ╫ C Y B E R N E T I C S ╫

          NAME ▬ Piercing Gale
          CYBERNETIC PIECEPiercing Gale is a clawed arm that is used for combat. Only the hand is missing, however, this Cybernetic goes up to his elbow. In Ivory's wrist and elbow, there are connecting rods that have wires in them, connecting his nerves to the metal itself, allowing control of the item. He has painted it black and blue in memory of his first cybernetic.
          WEAPONIZATION ▬ Piercing Gale has claws at the end of the fingers that are sharp.
          ACQUISITIONNight Prowlers: ASSAULT FORCE
          AUGMENTS
          ▬ Dust augmentation- Ivory is able to place a piece of dust in the palm of the hand, and augment it with that type. He is able to slash 3 for a small piece of dust, and 5 for a large one.
          ▬ Communication hub- Ivory is able to place his scroll in a compartment in the forearm that allows it to project his scroll. It can also charge the scroll using aura if Ivory allows it. Ivory can also use it to connect to his ear piece, or have the voice come from the arm itself.



    ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

          NAME ▬ Gwynt
          AURA COLORpale turquoise
          AURA FEEL ▬ Ivory's aura feels like the cold wind coming off of a mountain.
          DESCRIPTION ▬ Ivory is able to manipulate air around him.
          Repelling wind ▬ Ivory is able to cause the wind around him to spin, the air is projected within 5 feet of his body. The wind can reflect attacks back at the person attacking.
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          Arial slash▬ Ivory is able to take air from around him solid, and throw it. He can do this from either a weapon or a hand, and the wind feels more concussive than blunt.
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          Arial Crash▬ Ivory is able to build wind around him to run, and cause an impact with someone. The wind is able to shield him from damage caused by the charge. He can also use the crash to cushion fall damage.
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          LEVEL 3 ▬ (300-399 posts)
          DRAWBACKS ▬ If Ivory loses control of his emotions, the semblance tries to create a vacuum around the person who has caused it. It cares not for friend or foe.
          ▬ Ivory can not combine the different levels of his Semblance to create different effects. He is allowed to use other levels while things are on cooldown.
          ▬ Ivory's semblance can not work in a vacuum.




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    Greetings, it seems unfortunately for you I shall be your judge this evening. Whether that bodes good or ill all depends on your cooperation. I shall review the file I have on you to ensure you have filled it out adequately; that you are neither underselling yourself nor over estimating your ability. Once I am satisfied, you may proceed on with your life. Until then, you are left under my rules and whims. And subject to any number of questionings for an undetermined amount of time. For your sake, I do hope you were accurate and of right state of mind when you filled out this form. If not, we may be here for quite a while. So without further ado, let us begin this assessment and see what you, Ivory, are truly capable of...and who you truly are.


    Judgement



    ∰- Archetype

    ∰- Exploitable combat weakness: Does he have any one on one weakness? Since most people naturally are vulnerable when they get ganged up on unless they have something to counteract or spent to be good at that.

    ∰- History

    ∰- Just make sure to have this filled out as I need it before I can approve this.

    ∰- Cybernetic

    ∰- How long are the claws, and what can they cut through?

    ∰- Semblance

    ∰- Repelling wind: in description it says 5ft from his body, but level 0 starts at 10 feet?

    -Also may just want to say it can reflect projectile/ elemental attacks (since not sure if it can reflect a melee attack back at someone).

    - How strong is it, relatively, in terms of slowing melee attacks?

    - For its level 3, I would change the numbers (duration-cooldown-per day) to this (numbers I list are in order I listed above ):
    5-3-6

    ∰- Aerial slash: A better way of wording the description would be along the lines of "He is able to condense the air around him and throw it in a direction to his target; be it by his hands or through his weapons. When it hits a target, it feels like a concussive hit more than blunt." Or something like this.

    - How "big" is the condensed air he throws? Is it like a baseball size when thrown from his hand and/or slash of air the size of the weapon he is using? Or more like a wider concentrated blast/ current of air that goes in a direction to hit the target? (depending on answer would depend how cooldown would work)

    ∰- Aerial crash: So for this, is it essentially a large/ strong current of wind he can direct to go at someone or to a point? Just asking to clarify

    - Does it go from a set direction (when he starts it) or can it change/ redirect as he moves?

    - Does it only last the post he starts it?

    ∰- Drawback: So when you say it creates a vacuum around whoever caused his emotions to lose control. How long does that last/ how wide is the effect? How far away can it occur? Is there anyway the opponent can stop it?

    - Besides a vacuum, is there anything else the semblance is weak to/ helps resist the effects?

    ∰-Conclusion

    This is all I currently see the need to change/ be clarified for now. This does not mean it shall be the end of it, as more questions may arise as we progress and I may have missed something. I am willing to be flexible on some thing if given good reason to, and i'll be open for any discussion you have or if you need any help with this. Thank you for your taking the time to go through this, and I will post another judgement if necessary once we've gone through all this. Hopefully this will be the only judgement needed, and you can fully begin your adventure in beacon...whether pleasant or otherwise. Feel free to contact me at any point... just send a message with the crows.
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          *NAME ▬ Ivory Maguire
          *AGE ▬ 18
          *FACTION ▬ ℣ale
          *SEX ▬ Looks like they could be both male or female, however, it is a male.
          *SPECIES ▬ Snow Leopard Faunus
          *CURRENT TEAM ▬ Team MAIN
          *PARTNER(S)Feralis Alarick, Jessica Morrison (deceased) Nova Primrose
          NICKNAME(S) ▬ The Northern Wind, Disgrace, White, Tripod (by Rachel), Beta, Zeta, Ivy, Ivie, Ivi, Ive




    ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫

          HEIGHT ▬ 5 ft 6 in
          WEIGHT ▬ 130 lbs

          HAIR ▬White/grey, any hair on his body, have the snow leopard patterning
          CLOTHING
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          ACCESSORIES ▬ Earrings that he has that have been sautered into his ears.
          EYES ▬ Bluish grey
          BUILD ▬ Slim
          MARKINGS ▬ There are marks on his body from an Ursa attack. There are scars from when he had his arm sliced off by a portal at the end of the first event.
          FEATURES ▬ Cat ears with no human ears, a long, fluffy tail, and patches of fur on his body.

          PERSONALITY TRAITS
          *Nature ▬ He is a very nervous person when it comes to normal day to day things, however, he seems to have to confidence in himself when it comes to combat. He gets easily stressed, to the point that it causes him to make errors outside of combat.
          VernacularShouta Kazehaya from Kimi ni Todoke
          Positive Traits ▬ He is very considerate, he also is very soft in terms of personality.
          Negative Traits ▬ he gets stressed very easily, if he becomes stressed, he makes mistakes, and becomes very clumsy.

          LIKES
            Hobbies/Talents▬ he enjoys looking and finding old relics, even if it's just a coin or two.
            People▬ He would prefer to be with calmer people, when someone is too active, he starts to feel stressed. He also likes head rubs.
            Foods▬ He likes meat and fish.
            Objects▬ Older things that he likes to try and make them whole again.
            Animals▬ cats

          DISLIKES
            People▬ He has a strong dislike for rude people, or people who try to use peer pressure.
            Foods▬ Broccoli, leafy vegetables
            Objects▬ Wire brushes.
            Animals



    ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫

          TALENTS
          Primary Talent ▬ Agility- Ivory has the ability to move quickly and easily.
          Secondary Talent ▬ Acrobatics- Ivory is able to do spectacular gymnastic feats, doing flips, jumping a little further.
          Tertiary Talents ▬ Sensing the wind direction
          ▬ Flexibility- Ivory is very flexible to the point that he can but his leg behind his head, and can almost do a full split.

          SKILLS
          Primary SkillMedieval Swordplay
          Secondary Skills ▬ Navigating Wilderness (Best at mountainous areas)
          Tertiary Skills ▬ Climbing- Ivory is a good climber
          ▬ Misdirection- Ivory is able to use his natural abilities to preform feints. This also allows him to know how to use dust to make adventurous distractions to regroup.
          WEAKNESSES
          *Exploitable Combat Weakness ▬ Multiple attacks. At most, Ivory can only deal with 2 attacks at a time, anymore than that and he is not able to fully defend himself.
          ▬ Slow Healing- Ivory doesn't heal as fast as others, hindering him when he does get hit. For example, a deep gash on his arm would almost completely disable his arm, while bleeding out at the same time. While Aura can speed this up, it still takes almost 1/4 more the time to heal a wound with it. Without aura, it takes nearly double the time to heal.
          *Exploitable Fear ▬ Failure- Ivory is afraid of failing everyone. This can be in combat when he fails to protect and ally, or just in general.

          FAUNUS
          Primary Trait ▬ Ivory uses his tail as a way to have greater balance, What would normally bring down a normal person might just have him move slightly from the pressure. He also always lands on his feet.
          Secondary Trait ▬ He has a more sensitive nose, making it easier to track people and to smell hidden enemies, however, this is a double edged sword.
          Tertiary Trait ▬ Built for cold- Ivory has a higher tolerance for cold weather. This is because the fur/hair is thick on his body. his nose even has a way of heating up cold winter air.
          Exploitable Faunus Combat Weakness ▬ Weak Immune system- This can be translated to both a combat and non-combat weakness. In combat, it means that effects like poisons or diseases work on him faster than a human. Out of combat, if someone were to sneeze on him, he could easily get sick.



    ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫

          *BACKGROUNDIvory grew up in the mountains with other mountain cat faunus. He learned how to work with and against the wind while there. However, things were especially stressful for him. His home was like a pack, and he was not an alpha. Most of the tribe felt that he was worthless, as he wasn't able to hunt without over thinking. He also didn't have claws to assist in hunting. That is when he took up the sword. He had to practice on his own, as the tribe saw him as not worth teaching. He learned what he could, from training on his own. He would then try to hunt on his own, however, he ran into a Grim while hunting. It was an Ursa. He was scared, but he had to use his blade to fight it. It injured him greatly, however, his semblance activated for the first time, causing the air to protect him enough so that he could run away from it.

          After that, he had to recover, the tribe wasn't into helping him, therefore his parents paid for him to go down the mountain, into Vale itself. He didn't want to leave, however, it was the best for him. He swore that if he could, he would protect people from Grimm. He had felt the claws doing into his body. There was no reason for that. He had to help. So he signed up to go to Signal. That was were he forged his Twinpistol Sword. However, he was very unsocialized, seeing that his tribe mostly left him alone. He gets very stressed in public areas.

          Now he has finally made it to Beacon. He always carries an Ursa grim mask, to remind him of why he does this. He hardly ever wears it though, as he is not a beast.

          In the recent months of being at beacon, his time has been hell. During the first class, he was made to fight one of his fears, an Ursa. It was already damaged, and was wearing a muzzle, however, it was this day he learned two things. One, do not ******** with the head master, he will sit there and watch you struggle, until you do it on your own. The second thing is that strength comes from working as a team. That Grimm studdies class was eventful, but he met someone that he considered a friend, Lunestra.

          After that class, the next day they went to find out who their team was. That day he was teamed up with Lunestra Krayeth, Jessica Morison, and Long Shui-Lin. Two of the three people on his team were in class with him the day before. However, as the lists were announced, there was also a security threat. Three students had been taken. Lavender and Donnelly Erlking, and Long Shui-Lin. They were taken by a group of Anti-faunus humans, called The Tribe.

          The first mission for him appeared to be a failure, until Donnelly Erlking was saved by another team on the same mission. Ivory had helped the man by giving him his suit jacket. However, the Tribe was not done with them. Underneath his team's feet, there was a bomb, that they detonated. The explosion sent Ivory crashing into a wall, using all of his Aura as not to kill him. Like always, he landed on his feet. He had found Jessica, and helped her out, but not before he saw the remnants of Lunestra, her beautiful wings had brought her onto the ceiling, where she was impaled on the metal. The most haunting thing, was the person he learned to fear, the headmaster was broken. That day, he learned another lesson. Even the strongest, lost, and could become broken.

          Once he got Jessica and her sister, Oxynia out of the building, he knew he had to stop the fire. Without Aura, he did something incredibly stupid. He jumped into the hole where the bomb had gone off, and he used his semblence, something that could have killed him. He passed out, only to be brought out of the building by Jessica.

          His soul burned with a want to get vengeance on the tribe. The next part of the mission, they were sent into the bowels of the tower, into the home base of the tribe. Everyone that had someone missing from their teams were there. Team DAND, Team JLRX, and His team, which was only Him and Jessica now. He was determined that nothing would happen to her. They got further in, and his protection of her was only making things worse. Yes he could see in the dark better than her, but he was using his tail not for balance, but for keeping her corralled.

          Everything came to a head when they found a child in the sewers. They were then set under a falling trap, causing them to fall in a pit with Grimm, the boss looking down on them. They defeated them, and then they were teleported twice. However, the villain was not done. He pulled Long out from her hiding spot, and stabbed her in front of the teams. Ivory rushed forward, only for the villain to slit her throat. By the time Ivory got to her, the life was leaving her body. Once she was dead, he vowed to kill him. He didn't care at what cost. She was innocent, and didn't deserve what had happened. In the end, Lavender suffered the same fate as Long and her brother. They were unable to save anyone other than the girl. He stabbed the man, right as he was about to escape through a portal, Ivory twisted his blade into the man, causing the portal to close shut on both the enemy, and on Ivory's hand. While it killed the enemy, it left Ivory without a right hand.

          He made sure that the bodies of the fallen were brought up, but not before he finally passed out because of blood loss. He awoke to find that his hand was missing, and there was a cat girl at his side. She was his new team mate, but she came at a difficult time..Ivory was dealing with the lost of a limb, even though it wasn't his dominate hand, he used for certain things.

          It's been about 2 months since then, and he's learned to be with his new team. He's also working with his new Cybernetic arm. However, he's still gripped with doubt, and feels like he failed his friends. His goal since joining beacon has changed. He no longer wants to prove his strength and worth. He wants to protect the people around him, even that pesky, smelly dog.


    ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫

          PRIMARY WEAPON
          NAMETempest
          DESCRIPTION ▬ Tempest is a longsword with a sheathe. On the handles, there are two pistols.
          Melee Form ▬ A long sword like the picture. It is 36 inches long, weighing 3 lb
          Ranged Form ▬ Ivory has to sheathe his sword, removing the guns from the handle.
          Other Form(s) ▬ Just a sheathe
          Ammo Type ▬ Aura (Feels like cold wind)
          DRAWBACKS ▬ As it is a sword and pistols, Ivory's effective range is 90 meters. He isn't able to to go further than that, without the bullets almost bouncing off of people.

          OTHER WEAPONS
          ▬ Caltrops
          Original Cybernetic as it was a gift from a now dead friend. He can no longer attach it to his nub
          His right hand is Cybernetic, painted light blue and black, they now have retractable claws, that have a 20% misfire rate when he hits the button.


          Ammo Carried

          ITEMS
          ▬ Scroll
          ▬ Ursa mask
          ▬ Communication device built for cat ears.
          A non-weaponized cybernetic arm used just to replace his right hand in non-combat situations. It connects to his arm the same way as the weaponized one, and his painted black and blue


    ╫ C Y B E R N E T I C S ╫

          NAME ▬ Piercing Gale
          CYBERNETIC PIECEPiercing Gale is a clawed arm that is used for combat. Only the hand is missing, however, this Cybernetic goes up to his elbow. In Ivory's wrist and elbow, there are connecting rods that have wires in them, connecting his nerves to the metal itself, allowing control of the item. He has painted it black and blue in memory of his first cybernetic.
          WEAPONIZATION ▬ Piercing Gale has claws at the end of the fingers that are as sharp as blades. Ivory has a set of interconnected covers for them so he can use them when he isn't in combat on a mission. The claws are as big as a Bewolf's claws.
          ACQUISITIONNight Prowlers: ASSAULT FORCE
          AUGMENTS
          ▬ Dust augmentation- Ivory is able to place a piece of dust in the palm of the hand, and augment it with that type. He is able to slash 3 for a small piece of dust, and 5 for a large one.
          ▬ Communication hub- Ivory is able to place his scroll in a compartment in the forearm that allows it to project his scroll. It can also charge the scroll using aura if Ivory allows it. Ivory can also use it to connect to his ear piece, or have the voice come from the arm itself.



    ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫

          NAME ▬ Gwynt
          AURA COLORpale turquoise
          AURA FEEL ▬ Ivory's aura feels like the cold wind coming off of a mountain.
          DESCRIPTION ▬ Ivory is able to manipulate air around him.
          Repelling wind ▬ Ivory is able to cause the wind around him to spin, the air is projected within 5 feet of his body. The wind can reflect attacks back at the person attacking. The reflecting mostly works with projectiles and elemental attacks. However, for melee attacks, it would slow an attack by 3/4ths speed for average strength, for decent strength it would slow it by half, and for exceptional strength it would only slow it by 1/4th speed.
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          Arial slash▬ He is able to condense the air around him and throw it in a direction to his target; be it by his hands or through his weapons. When it hits a target, it feels like a concussive hit more than blunt.
          How it is shaped by level:
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          Arial Crash▬ Ivory is able to build wind around him to run, and cause an impact with someone. The wind is able to shield him from damage caused by the charge. He can also use the crash to cushion fall damage. This speed Ivory up by 3 times (x3 speed) He may turn, but it is harder for him to do so, and must be done at wide arcs.
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          LEVEL 3 ▬ (300-399 posts)
          DRAWBACKS ▬ If Ivory loses control of his emotions, the semblance tries to create a vacuum around the person who has caused it. It cares not for friend or foe. The person must be within 10 ft of Ivory for the vacuum to form. The effect lasts until either Ivory can calm down, or 2 posts, whichever happens sooner. The effect is only around the upper body of a person. If this happens to a Grimm, it's only the head.
          ▬ Ivory can not combine the different levels of his Semblance to create different effects. He is allowed to use other levels while things are on cooldown.
          ▬ Ivory's semblance can not work in a vacuum.
          ▬ Extreme heats can dissipate the winds that he manipulates.


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