Characters Involved: Julian Galaksylph, Diamond Wales
Usernames of each character, respectively: Clara Bautista, Ibarra Bautista, Darell Cherri, James "Jim" Ottosen
Have each of the above listed members fully agreed to the following plot?: Yep
What is your plot idea? Please explain in great detail: Clara met a guy named James "Jim" Ottosen last year, a guy with good reputation who was a year above her, and she was pretty much being a nice person to him as usual. In Clara's POV, they're friends; Jim however was secretly lovesick over her. Also Jim has met her brother Barry before, but the former merely saw him as a brat given how often Clara and Barry tend to banter each other.
This year 2039, Jim and Clara hang out a bit when they can until the former confesses his love for her and asked if they can be together. Clara, taken back, politely declined and would rather prefer if they were friends (since she thought that he was smart enough to accept that), apparently Jim doesn't want to give up because he can't accept being friendzoned. So he still continues to go for her, much to Clara's chagrin she was usually less aggressive and more resentful and/or passive-aggressive. Clara even came to the point that she was avoiding him because she was really creeped out. Barry found this out via hearing Clara ranting stuff to their cousin Kenji one day. So, Barry confronted Jim and told him that "he should leave Clara alone" except Jim merely laughed at him. Barry was pissed and threw a banter at him but it badly backfired when Jim assaulted him for being disrespectful, while also adding that if he tells Clara she would never believe Barry because unfortunately, Jim actually has a good reputation in school.
One day, Clara noticed that Barry was avoiding her and confronts him only to see some bruises on her brother. She knew that Barry was not the type to go for physical fights and never the one to draw first blood, so she bullied him into telling him what happened until Barry spilled the beans. Ironically, Clara believed him and scolded him for ever thinking she would not believe him before venturing off to Jim.
Clara finally confronts Jim about what he did to Barry, the latter got pissed that guilt-tripped Clara for "taking side of Barry" and "making him the villain when he told Jim to stay away from her". She then proceeded to lose her temper and berated him for being a creepy stalker and decided to dock points from him. Jim, unable to handle humiliation, threatened Clara from "ruining him" and they basically ended up in a fight. Darell Cherri comes in and tries to calm down the two until Jim landed a punch on his face, much to Clara's shock and anger. It ended up with two angry prefects versus a guy, Jim gets detention for picking a fight on two prefects as well as harassment, and DArell and Clara became a bit closer.
What are the idea's drawbacks? (e.g. Does anyone get killed? Is Hogwarts going to have to suffer? etc.) Someone gets detention, Clara may or may not punched someone, but other than that none too tragic.
Why are you interested in doing this idea? Clara gets the least shine among my characters and I was thinking of giving her a spotlight alongside with Barry, whom I'm going to explore about their relationship as siblings. Also, it's so me and Loki are going to get Clara and Darell together.
Anything else you would like to share about this idea?
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