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 Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2016 11:51 pm
Characters Name:: - Hex Hellfire Race:: Hybrid [Demon/chimera] Zodiac Sign::The Mirror Academy House or University::Community Colloge Gender:: Male Starting Stage:: Seinor Body Type Base:: face -11 Body I (chimera and demon) horns - 3 [Chimera] Brief Description of Appearance Username: yuniki_stardream Starting Stage: senior Race: hybrid [Demon X chimera] Base: Body - I Face -11 -horns- 3 [chimera] Description: Body: demon ears and tail - chimera wings and claws
Eyes: Orange eyes red pupal
Hair: black hair spiky and medium length
Clothes: see reference
Horns: orange to dark red gradient [base to tip ]
Wings: dark grey same a marking dark red membrane
Tail: dark grey spade fading down tail
Claws: black claws
References (if applicable):  Quest Approval: Cost: 1,500,000
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2016 12:02 am
A brief overview of their life so far
Freshling life:: After awakening from the cache, Hex began to draw an attachment to the staff who were there when he awakened, but due to there attention being divided among the other students, hex slowly become withdrawn from others feeling as if no body wanted him, he had no family, no friends and was often picked on for being so different, even if the other freshling didn't mean what they said, he felt other wise. this caused him to distance him self from others and gain a liking to books,reading and history.
Junior life:: As he grew up hex developed a conflicted personality, always doubting him self and finding it difficult to stay calm, because of the personalty of the chimera and the demon within him, he often despised other races, other then the ones he could connect to most, but part of him was more cavil than anything were as he wanted to show up the ones who looked down upon him, he became stuck up in his junior life, this would later fade as he became more entranced with history books and hobbies like making jewelry, witch he kept a secret. He didn't want anyone seeing his soft side and having it result in more teasing.
Senior Life:: As he got older hex became more mature, having an affinity and understanding now of some races due to the books he would read, also having begun to study the 50 year war, he took interest in helping others as he signed up for the Big sibling program. He would later end up getting in a fight, tough he only used self defense, he was punished for being in a fight as well as the other student who had provoked him. thought that student was suspended, hex had managed to prove he only applied self defense, getting off with a community service sense he slipped up once and hit the one who was trying to attack him, he was put in a tutoring program were his life would change from that point, As he kept this part time job all threw out the academy. helping others study. he now goes to community college,
Whether or not they're an orphan from the cache
Hex was born from the cache ( more about it above)
How their status as an orphan or non-orphan has affected them
The affect of being an orphan has shaped how hex wishes to mature and grow, wishing to learn from others mistakes as well as his own, despite his temperament and withdrawn nature having been an orphan was rather confusing but satisfactory affect on his life, with not having someone to teach him about who he was or were he came from he took it upon him self.
One event that changed their life or effected them
In his senior life while still working at the tutoring program hex got a student to work with who was having problems in math, or so he thought, as he went in not pleased with another student failing there classes he met a Grimm who would later make him wish to change his view on life once more. as he began to teach her he found a personality in her that he saw in him self, one who was not having luck in the world. some one who was looked down at just as he was, this girl made his moods drastically change as he dealt with he personalty type, he often teased her for fun but found he had upset her, this caused his mood to change to that of a child who had broken a vase. but as time passed he soon perked up as she offered him to go to lunch. though he declined to let her pay as he felt it would not be right, this caused the Grimm to run off though he did intend on going out to eat with her he chance after her, he would later become this Grimm's boyfriend. he cared for her deeply in a way he had not felt for anyone. he was determined to protect her, and love her for the rest of his life,
How they feel about their race and house
hex is proud of who he is especially being a hybrid of both chimera and demon decent. he feels he was placed in the right house as a child as it lead him to grow to learn more, and care for others, working around his conflicted personality over time.
Their goals in life
Protect choska
Graduate community college
Possibly become a teacher or jewelry maker
Get a well paying job,
get his own place
Imbud millions of stones a few stones with choska
Marry choska
Keep choska happy.
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2016 8:16 am
Positive and negative traits.
Positive traits:
Caring: -- He doesn't really show it hex cares about others mostly only those who are good,kind to others, and don't perilously causes problems.
He is proud: -- Though it can be a negative trait at times when someone is overly proud, hex takes both of his races and cultures to heart. so when it comes to being proud this has lead him to wish to peruse more knowledge of not just his own races but others as well. because you cant be proud if you don't know what your talking about, or if you don't know anything at all.
Against bullying: -- He will not stand for anyone bullying others. when he sees a freshling,junior or another senior being bullied he will stand up for them especially if they can not hold there own in a fight, he will never hit or throw names around towards others, no matter what is said to him. he finds it a useless thing. theirs no point in calling names because those that are picking on others are just unhappy with there own lives.
Loves to help others study: he has a part time job that was once a punishment for getting in to a fight as school. he had defended him self against an attack but for that he still landed him self in some trouble, he chose to keep this part time job as a study buddy at a tutoring program in the community college. he often makes a trip to the academy on his time off to help freshies as well.
Negative traits:
Hot headed: -- though he is often able to keep his cool he can be temperamental when somebody ticks him off, for example if someone were to talk down to him for no reason or threaten some one he cares for aka choska then he can go off the deep end and causing him to want to fight, but more often then not he will more so verbally back him self up unless he is physically attacked
Possessive: -- Hes very protective and possessive of people he loves, though it is not to the point he will keep them from experiencing life He just wants to protect them at all cost. so other men flirting with his girl will tick him off, causing him to sweep her off her feet and fly out of range with the one he loves.
Emotionally Conflicted: -- Because of being a hybrid his chimera and demon blood often conflict with his emotions and rational thoughts, part of him wants to dislike and not care for other races while his demon side can not help but be civil and polite, this often an causes an emotional brake down and a steep change in emotion. because of his proud nature you could see a cocky smirking hybrid one minute, but if he becomes sad if he finds himself upsetting a friend or loved one his emotion will change quickly. due to the nature of each race this causes the conflict.
Can be Childish: -- He is pretty playful when he wants to be, he will be hyper goofy and fun to be around though this can be positive it has its negative affects as well he can go overboard.
Likes and dislikes
Likes
Dark chocolate, choska ; ), Studying, helping others, Peace and quite, night time, Romance books, comics/manga , Favorite color orange.
Dislikes
bullys,fighting,failling class,being talked down to, Upsetting his girl
Hobbies
Crafts/Metal work such as chain mail armor/accessories bracelets and jewelry though he keeps this a secret.,Reading, Writing, he is still discovering new things.
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2016 8:17 am
Quote: A smart-mouthed peer just told your Nightmare that they're a failure to their race. How do they react? --- Hex was walking down the corridors of the academy preparing to pack his things when he was distracted by a demon across the way. This demon never was pleased with him for what ever reason, he heard him mock, and try to intimidate him. but hex was pretty thick skinned ,scales aside. He never really let people get under his skin as hex was to proud to let that happen. But when he heard this demon say he was a disgrace to his race, hex became infuriated as he didn't take to kindly to being looked down upon especially by another demon, he may have been a chimera/demon hybrid but he took both of his cultures to heart. Hex gave a cold hearted stare with a smirk on his face as he began to walk towards the demon who was short in stature compare to him, with the chimera blood in his veins it made him slightly more taller then the average demon. As he stood there in front of the smart mouthed demon, he did nothing more then give a demonic grin, " Oh ya? Witch one? I'm a hybrid. " He asked not giving him a chance to reply back as he knew what just to say. " You call me a disgrace but look at your self. " He said turning his head up to the side looking down at him with his arms crossed. " You tease your peers around you daily!" He said with a snarl. " you are the disgrace. No demon should do such things, We are suppose to be civil, but you are far from it! You forcefully bump in to others and make THEM apologize, You are far from perfect." He said with a twisted smile. He felt like he had really grind the demons gears. After turning all the demon had said back on him hex turned his back and walked away leaving the bully of a demon to be as mad as he wanted, hex was pleased with his reaction and continued forth to his room so he could leave for the community college
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2016 10:40 pm
critique incoming!
Basic Information:
Looks good to me! The only thing I see is that you have Hex attending the Academy in Enoch, but you later state in his history that he's currently attending Community College. Please clarify where you'll want him placed!
Appearance:
Looks great! The doll is beautiful and shows pretty much everything very clearly.
Not required: I'd suggest adding a few references for your hairstyle to make what you want a bit clearer, and also adding a description of Hex's markings or perhaps a "naked" reference to make sure the colorists get everything right.
Also, I'd suggest adding a list of all the jewelry Hex has, just so your colorist could go down the list and make sure they haven't missed anything.
Personality:
Overall, great job! Hex has a very believable, multi-layered personality that I love a lot.
One thing I'd like for you to elaborate on, is that under "Hot headed" you state that Hex has been put in detention after many fights. However, in your history, you stated that with this first fight he "slipped up once," which is why he was punished so lightly. Does he have a history of getting into fights and not being caught? In your RP sample, he chooses to walk away from a fight. Perhaps explain if/how he has come to outgrow his short temper?
Backstory:
Looks great! Hex's backstory is very cohesive and makes sense. I really appreciate that he has grown more mature as he's learned different ways to perceive the world around him.
RP Prompt:
Again, great! I'd just love a clarification on that one thing I mentioned under Personality and you'll be good to go.
Please quote me when you've made the appropriate edits! There is no need to do them in a different color. Thank you!
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Posted: Fri May 20, 2016 11:16 pm
The only thing I see is that you have Hex attending the Academy in Enoch, but you later state in his history that he's currently attending Community College. Please clarify where you'll want him placed! Enoch was labeled under his freshling history for life up until now i forgot to add community college to the section on his form i was wanting to label both there not just one, because i take there past in to consideration when filling out my personal journal XD for jewelry /marking Reference ill add it in when it comes to the actual custom form. owo One thing I'd like for you to elaborate on, is that under "Hot headed" you state that Hex has been put in detention after many fights. However, in your history, you stated that with this first fight he "slipped up once," which is why he was punished so lightly. Does he have a history of getting into fights and not being caught? In your RP sample, he chooses to walk away from a fight. Perhaps explain if/how he has come to outgrow his short temper? he hasn't really been in many physical fights hes been picked on bothered and he just blows it off the one were he slipped up was in self defense as it says he has only really been in detention that one time and been punished for it. but yes the rp prompt he did walk away from it he saw no point in physically fighting he had no reason to physically defend him self.i can see were the hot headed one conflicts because i wrote it before i wrote the "life up until now" section (weeks before XD) is the school thing and hot headed part only things that needs editing on here owo? just double checking smolderingskies Edit: fixed the college segment and the hot headed information
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2016 12:32 am
Yes! Looks good to me, thank you for taking the time to make those clarifications. I'm happy to say that Hex is approved!
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